Comments received on poems by Gemma
A Letter Unsent
dusk arising said:
Those letters we write but dare not send are the bleeding of our true selves.
Thank you for sharing.
May 19th, 2019 03:45
dusk arising said:
Those letters we write but dare not send are the bleeding of our true selves.
Thank you for sharing.
May 19th, 2019 03:45
Wave the stars goodbye
dusk arising said:
Uplifting yes, but our yesterdays make us what we are today. We carry our yesterdays either as a burden or an education.
Recently i read a poem on MPS where the poet said the purpose of our life in this existence was to educate s for the next.... food for thought.
June 9th, 2018 17:26
dusk arising said:
Uplifting yes, but our yesterdays make us what we are today. We carry our yesterdays either as a burden or an education.
Recently i read a poem on MPS where the poet said the purpose of our life in this existence was to educate s for the next.... food for thought.
June 9th, 2018 17:26
Wave the stars goodbye
GON said:
Great rhyming. If I could offer some constructive critique though, I\'d like to say that you don\'t absolutely need to rhyme, and rhyming shouldn\'t be a crutch for lines that have little reason for being there besides the rhyme itself.
June 9th, 2018 10:24
GON said:
Great rhyming. If I could offer some constructive critique though, I\'d like to say that you don\'t absolutely need to rhyme, and rhyming shouldn\'t be a crutch for lines that have little reason for being there besides the rhyme itself.
June 9th, 2018 10:24
As long as I miss you
dusk arising said:
Lovely truly romantic writing. Your heartfelt feelings really come across. However i have to say, do not live your years ahead waiting for this romantic dram to materialise. The chances of that are scarce and many opportunities of great and fulfilling happiness will pass you by if you do.
June 8th, 2018 14:19
dusk arising said:
Lovely truly romantic writing. Your heartfelt feelings really come across. However i have to say, do not live your years ahead waiting for this romantic dram to materialise. The chances of that are scarce and many opportunities of great and fulfilling happiness will pass you by if you do.
June 8th, 2018 14:19
High-horse
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GEM ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ very sassy ! I love AUSTRALIA and AUSTRALIANS ~ those I\'ve met have been laid back & outspoken ~ I think i would make a good Australian ~ I was born in Liverpool ! We ALL get put down and feel EXCLUDED but if we have self~respect and self~confidence we can always rise above it and enjoy our position and role in every situation we find ourselves in ! I often get \"knocked down\" but never \"knocked out\" ! In all life\'s circumstances ~ Home ~ School ~ Work and the Community ~ People are ambivalent ~ They SCREAM ~ then HUG ~ sometimes they say SORRY ! My attitude is to ignore their HIGH-HORSENESS and cut them down to size and leave them fumbling in their own HORSE S**T ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ YOURS BRIAN (UK) MPS works by us mutually commenting on each others Poems ~ You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends ~ OK Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B !
June 7th, 2018 16:44
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GEM ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ very sassy ! I love AUSTRALIA and AUSTRALIANS ~ those I\'ve met have been laid back & outspoken ~ I think i would make a good Australian ~ I was born in Liverpool ! We ALL get put down and feel EXCLUDED but if we have self~respect and self~confidence we can always rise above it and enjoy our position and role in every situation we find ourselves in ! I often get \"knocked down\" but never \"knocked out\" ! In all life\'s circumstances ~ Home ~ School ~ Work and the Community ~ People are ambivalent ~ They SCREAM ~ then HUG ~ sometimes they say SORRY ! My attitude is to ignore their HIGH-HORSENESS and cut them down to size and leave them fumbling in their own HORSE S**T ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ~ YOURS BRIAN (UK) MPS works by us mutually commenting on each others Poems ~ You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends ~ OK Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B !
June 7th, 2018 16:44
High-horse
Isabel Chelisia Villa said:
Good write. The higher they are the harder the fall
June 7th, 2018 01:27
Isabel Chelisia Villa said:
Good write. The higher they are the harder the fall
June 7th, 2018 01:27
High-horse
GON said:
Sometimes it takes years of being an outsider to figure out how to be an insider. Don\'t give in.
June 7th, 2018 01:25
GON said:
Sometimes it takes years of being an outsider to figure out how to be an insider. Don\'t give in.
June 7th, 2018 01:25
