Comments received on poems by Xlayla55x
When it Escapes You
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! We can all empathise with this elegantly penned Poem (full of rhythm ~ rhyme ~ reason) because the things we value most Happiness ~ Love ~ Light ~ Sanity ~ Life itself ~ escape us all the time but hopefully not all at once ! I\'m only 1/3 rd through my life (35 !) but I have enough experience to know the importance of the things you highlight !
HAPPINESS is as transient as Rainbows ~ Enjoy it while you have it ~ dont fret when you dont !
LOVE always HURTS but as a Man my MANTRA is \"Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all\" In my experience Unrequited Love is harder for Ladies to bear ~ I always treat them with respect & TLC
LIGHT & HEAT are important for PHOTOSYNTHESIS (if you are a Plant) and METABOLISM (if you are an Animal) I always look for relationships that provide me with LIGHT (enlightenment) and HEAT (Human kindness)
SANITY ~ The BRAIN is the most important ORGAN in the Human Body ~ my experience is That Visual Art ~ Music and Literature (especially Poetry) keeps me sane and stops me from going MAD or SENILE (please check my site which is always a symbiosis of all THREE)
LIFE ~ That is your most precious possession ~ always cherish and protect it ! A person who is only half (or even only 25% look at Stephen Hawkins !) alive is infinitely better off than one who is Physically Dead ! When I visit a friend in the MORGUE ~ I know for them IT\'S OVER ~ IT\'S OVER ~ IT\'S OVER ~ I don\'t want to be in that State for at least another 70 years when I will be 105 and perhaps past my Sell by Date ?
Love your poem ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) MPS works by reading & commenting ~ OK ~ B !
June 19th, 2018 05:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! We can all empathise with this elegantly penned Poem (full of rhythm ~ rhyme ~ reason) because the things we value most Happiness ~ Love ~ Light ~ Sanity ~ Life itself ~ escape us all the time but hopefully not all at once ! I\'m only 1/3 rd through my life (35 !) but I have enough experience to know the importance of the things you highlight !
HAPPINESS is as transient as Rainbows ~ Enjoy it while you have it ~ dont fret when you dont !
LOVE always HURTS but as a Man my MANTRA is \"Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all\" In my experience Unrequited Love is harder for Ladies to bear ~ I always treat them with respect & TLC
LIGHT & HEAT are important for PHOTOSYNTHESIS (if you are a Plant) and METABOLISM (if you are an Animal) I always look for relationships that provide me with LIGHT (enlightenment) and HEAT (Human kindness)
SANITY ~ The BRAIN is the most important ORGAN in the Human Body ~ my experience is That Visual Art ~ Music and Literature (especially Poetry) keeps me sane and stops me from going MAD or SENILE (please check my site which is always a symbiosis of all THREE)
LIFE ~ That is your most precious possession ~ always cherish and protect it ! A person who is only half (or even only 25% look at Stephen Hawkins !) alive is infinitely better off than one who is Physically Dead ! When I visit a friend in the MORGUE ~ I know for them IT\'S OVER ~ IT\'S OVER ~ IT\'S OVER ~ I don\'t want to be in that State for at least another 70 years when I will be 105 and perhaps past my Sell by Date ?
Love your poem ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) MPS works by reading & commenting ~ OK ~ B !
June 19th, 2018 05:33
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