Comments received on poems by jayb_garang
There You Lay
amepiesces said:
closed eyes slipped to the next world...a great writing...
December 23rd, 2022 09:44
amepiesces said:
closed eyes slipped to the next world...a great writing...
December 23rd, 2022 09:44
There You Lay
L. B. Mek said:
clever, I like your tone and form
thanks for sharing
December 23rd, 2022 09:28
L. B. Mek said:
clever, I like your tone and form
thanks for sharing
December 23rd, 2022 09:28
Touching Grief
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, loss can be devastating
when we lose someone close to us..
I\'m sorry if you lost someone
thanks for sharing these brave words
that many will relate to..
August 22nd, 2022 02:45
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, loss can be devastating
when we lose someone close to us..
I\'m sorry if you lost someone
thanks for sharing these brave words
that many will relate to..
August 22nd, 2022 02:45
Gloomy Night
Rocky Lagou said:
An amazing message of encouragement. The days will seem tough and long but we have to push on. Great job!
March 30th, 2022 12:32
Rocky Lagou said:
An amazing message of encouragement. The days will seem tough and long but we have to push on. Great job!
March 30th, 2022 12:32
Gloomy Night
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Yes , sometimes we have to hope and wish for more .. and that tomorrow will be nicer . A good writing ))
March 30th, 2022 12:24
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Yes , sometimes we have to hope and wish for more .. and that tomorrow will be nicer . A good writing ))
March 30th, 2022 12:24
IF I LOST
Nicholas Browning said:
Either way it will be devastating. Nothing more that can be said. Extending empathy through words to you my friend.
November 4th, 2021 03:55
Nicholas Browning said:
Either way it will be devastating. Nothing more that can be said. Extending empathy through words to you my friend.
November 4th, 2021 03:55
Dating
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true when that person you know is for you is with you.
Andy
November 3rd, 2021 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true when that person you know is for you is with you.
Andy
November 3rd, 2021 02:25
DAD
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write but be assured he is with you every day, as is mine who died 25 years ago this year.
Andy
June 1st, 2020 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive write but be assured he is with you every day, as is mine who died 25 years ago this year.
Andy
June 1st, 2020 00:11
GOODBYE DAD
Goldfinch60 said:
So sorry for your loss but he will always be with you, I lost my father 25 years ago but I know he is still with me as yours will with you.
Andy
May 6th, 2020 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
So sorry for your loss but he will always be with you, I lost my father 25 years ago but I know he is still with me as yours will with you.
Andy
May 6th, 2020 00:20
I WILL CARRY YOU IN MY HEART
Chandra S. said:
Thanks for this old-fashioned, simple and true loving essence that is brought alive by this poem. I like the romanticism in the piece too.
January 15th, 2020 08:37
Chandra S. said:
Thanks for this old-fashioned, simple and true loving essence that is brought alive by this poem. I like the romanticism in the piece too.
January 15th, 2020 08:37
EX-BESTFRIEND
Seek said:
A sad farewell to a friendship you valued so much. If expressing feelings led to the break, did you really have a friend? Please forgive me, but forgiveness is indispensable to a lasting friendship. Where did it all go wrong? I feel your pain, jayb.
January 15th, 2020 00:03
Seek said:
A sad farewell to a friendship you valued so much. If expressing feelings led to the break, did you really have a friend? Please forgive me, but forgiveness is indispensable to a lasting friendship. Where did it all go wrong? I feel your pain, jayb.
January 15th, 2020 00:03
GOODBYE!!
Poetic Dan said:
What begins will end but will always begin again, up to us if it\'s in the same way.
Beautifully sad
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
November 6th, 2019 09:15
Poetic Dan said:
What begins will end but will always begin again, up to us if it\'s in the same way.
Beautifully sad
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
November 6th, 2019 09:15
Depression
Poetic Dan said:
From your last to the first I\'m glad to catch your verse. I ran away at the age of 14, depression and suicide has been in our around me most of my life.
Keep shining your soul in the words that you write, let all the music in to help you guide the mind.
But never ever give up the write!
Thank you for sharing
November 6th, 2019 09:12
Poetic Dan said:
From your last to the first I\'m glad to catch your verse. I ran away at the age of 14, depression and suicide has been in our around me most of my life.
Keep shining your soul in the words that you write, let all the music in to help you guide the mind.
But never ever give up the write!
Thank you for sharing
November 6th, 2019 09:12
THERE SHE GOES
dusk arising said:
It takes two, a lesson wisely learned but not easily learned.
October 1st, 2019 15:04
dusk arising said:
It takes two, a lesson wisely learned but not easily learned.
October 1st, 2019 15:04
THERE SHE GOES
Bragee said:
Friend zone...worst place to be against your will
October 1st, 2019 11:14
Bragee said:
Friend zone...worst place to be against your will
October 1st, 2019 11:14
WHEN
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Very interesting. Thinking about the impact of our own passing is definitely a hard thing to put into words. Well done.
August 12th, 2018 21:19
Lee Renard Caspian said:
Very interesting. Thinking about the impact of our own passing is definitely a hard thing to put into words. Well done.
August 12th, 2018 21:19
Depression
lcmcfadden said:
Wow, really profound. You are talented. Keep writing!!
August 12th, 2018 16:17
lcmcfadden said:
Wow, really profound. You are talented. Keep writing!!
August 12th, 2018 16:17
