Comments received on poems by pessimismpoet
Piano
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the piano in our house rings out with wonderful sounds but it sounds so empty when left alone.
June 27th, 2018 03:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the piano in our house rings out with wonderful sounds but it sounds so empty when left alone.
June 27th, 2018 03:28
Piano
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SIENA ~ For posting a very beautiful & meaningful poem to lift all our Spirits in the Middle of a busy week ! The individual NOTES of a PIANO of themselves just produce on monotonous & plaintive note when stuck ~ BUT ~ taken together they produce a SYMPHONY ~ Amen In Life and Love the whole is ALWAYS better than the \"Sum of the Parts\" ! I work in a College and in each Course I put in my unit (Science or Maths etc) and my colleagues put in theirs and each Student receives a Holistic Education and is qualified to meet the World ~ individually we are just B & W notes but together we are a Concerto ! The same is true of Angela in her work as a PHYSIOTHERAPIST (which is highlighted in her poem today) she is just an important single (but essential) note in the National Health Service KEYBOARD ! Love your Poem it touches everything I will do today ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ MORE PLEASE ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
June 27th, 2018 01:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SIENA ~ For posting a very beautiful & meaningful poem to lift all our Spirits in the Middle of a busy week ! The individual NOTES of a PIANO of themselves just produce on monotonous & plaintive note when stuck ~ BUT ~ taken together they produce a SYMPHONY ~ Amen In Life and Love the whole is ALWAYS better than the \"Sum of the Parts\" ! I work in a College and in each Course I put in my unit (Science or Maths etc) and my colleagues put in theirs and each Student receives a Holistic Education and is qualified to meet the World ~ individually we are just B & W notes but together we are a Concerto ! The same is true of Angela in her work as a PHYSIOTHERAPIST (which is highlighted in her poem today) she is just an important single (but essential) note in the National Health Service KEYBOARD ! Love your Poem it touches everything I will do today ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ MORE PLEASE ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
June 27th, 2018 01:41
The unspoken words
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for sharing your first poem. It is well written with five well spaced verses full of feeling and rhythm. It is a SAD poem and your stress from depression is revealed from verse to verse ! V 1. Pain & its release V 2. Cutting & Bleeding is one way to release your Depression V 3. Life falling apart and an apology to your MUM ~ in my experience when we self harm we always hurt not only ourselves but the ones who love us most ! v 4. We always leave a note to say \"I\'m Sorry\" V 5. Not dead or dying ~ this poses a dilemma ~ and you final lines are a cry from your wounded HEART ~ awesome !
\"So I lived ~ In unspoken pain
Can\'t i just drown in the rain ?\"
When we look bacjk on our teenage angst ~ we can all empathise ! However in my experience (I\'m twice your age !) ~ as we mature and take more control of our own lives things do improve ! Thanks for sharing ~ I trust you found it cathartic. This is a very caring and empathetic site and you will get support ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ The way MPS works is that we read & comment on each others POEMS ~ OK Thanks B !
June 26th, 2018 15:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for sharing your first poem. It is well written with five well spaced verses full of feeling and rhythm. It is a SAD poem and your stress from depression is revealed from verse to verse ! V 1. Pain & its release V 2. Cutting & Bleeding is one way to release your Depression V 3. Life falling apart and an apology to your MUM ~ in my experience when we self harm we always hurt not only ourselves but the ones who love us most ! v 4. We always leave a note to say \"I\'m Sorry\" V 5. Not dead or dying ~ this poses a dilemma ~ and you final lines are a cry from your wounded HEART ~ awesome !
\"So I lived ~ In unspoken pain
Can\'t i just drown in the rain ?\"
When we look bacjk on our teenage angst ~ we can all empathise ! However in my experience (I\'m twice your age !) ~ as we mature and take more control of our own lives things do improve ! Thanks for sharing ~ I trust you found it cathartic. This is a very caring and empathetic site and you will get support ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ The way MPS works is that we read & comment on each others POEMS ~ OK Thanks B !
June 26th, 2018 15:20
The unspoken words
Monotonous Dredge said:
This poem spoke to me. On a deep level. My poetry is blunt and honest. Yours is beautiful and honest. I\'ll be looking forward to your next poem.
June 26th, 2018 02:47
Monotonous Dredge said:
This poem spoke to me. On a deep level. My poetry is blunt and honest. Yours is beautiful and honest. I\'ll be looking forward to your next poem.
June 26th, 2018 02:47
