Comments received on poems by Melissa Daly
BUTTERFLY
dusk arising said:
A broken heart takes a long time to mend. Inner beauty can be so damaged by a cruel world.
I would love to read a sequel where she dances in lifes splendour and lights us with her smile.
Sad but beautiful read.
Please have a look at my mention of butterflies in my piece \'silent night\'.
October 13th, 2018 08:38
dusk arising said:
A broken heart takes a long time to mend. Inner beauty can be so damaged by a cruel world.
I would love to read a sequel where she dances in lifes splendour and lights us with her smile.
Sad but beautiful read.
Please have a look at my mention of butterflies in my piece \'silent night\'.
October 13th, 2018 08:38
THE CLIMB
Goldfinch60 said:
Very positive write, you WILL succeed in climbing those walls.
October 5th, 2018 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very positive write, you WILL succeed in climbing those walls.
October 5th, 2018 00:47
SUN AND MOON
Lorna said:
Sadder than never finding love at all........ so close so far.
July 27th, 2018 06:38
Lorna said:
Sadder than never finding love at all........ so close so far.
July 27th, 2018 06:38
THE WORLD
JasmineUK said:
The Rapists\' Charter.
Where less than 5% of rape cases
Make it to trial
And little more than 5% of trials
Lead to conviction!
A Civilised Cuntry! 🙀
July 23rd, 2018 09:12
JasmineUK said:
The Rapists\' Charter.
Where less than 5% of rape cases
Make it to trial
And little more than 5% of trials
Lead to conviction!
A Civilised Cuntry! 🙀
July 23rd, 2018 09:12
BY GRACE, THROUGH FAITH
dusk arising said:
I really like this. No mention of any deity, god or religion... not necessary is it.
Faith in your belief is what you write about, not your belief.
Sadly someone commenting has chosen to assume their belief is the same as yours which i find puzzlingly arrogant of them. For all we know you could be a druid or zoroastrian.
I too have a deep and meaningful faith which i would not ever assume is identical to another persons.
Your words i feel are very well chosen and universal.
July 13th, 2018 18:53
dusk arising said:
I really like this. No mention of any deity, god or religion... not necessary is it.
Faith in your belief is what you write about, not your belief.
Sadly someone commenting has chosen to assume their belief is the same as yours which i find puzzlingly arrogant of them. For all we know you could be a druid or zoroastrian.
I too have a deep and meaningful faith which i would not ever assume is identical to another persons.
Your words i feel are very well chosen and universal.
July 13th, 2018 18:53
BY GRACE, THROUGH FAITH
ForeverJesus7 said:
I truely like this piece. I hope that you continue to grow in the Lord. It is good to have gained another sister in Christ Jesus.
Keep writing.
Jesus Saves.
By his stripes we are healed.
Persistence is key
July 13th, 2018 14:51
ForeverJesus7 said:
I truely like this piece. I hope that you continue to grow in the Lord. It is good to have gained another sister in Christ Jesus.
Keep writing.
Jesus Saves.
By his stripes we are healed.
Persistence is key
July 13th, 2018 14:51
YOUR WORDS
dusk arising said:
Sometimes other peoples words can add to our strengths even if they kill a part of us inside when we hear them.
What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger.
July 8th, 2018 19:07
dusk arising said:
Sometimes other peoples words can add to our strengths even if they kill a part of us inside when we hear them.
What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger.
July 8th, 2018 19:07
YOUR WORDS
kevin browne said:
No way will they tear you down, so don\'t let them pull your roots up either. Erase the negative and search for your strong positive vibes, good work with you expression her.
July 8th, 2018 11:22
kevin browne said:
No way will they tear you down, so don\'t let them pull your roots up either. Erase the negative and search for your strong positive vibes, good work with you expression her.
July 8th, 2018 11:22
SUN AND MOON
dusk arising said:
I like this. The all too familiar situation we can find ourselves in when we ask ourselves that question \'what on earth am i doing being with/or longing to be with this person\'.
But i like the way you said it.
July 5th, 2018 15:52
dusk arising said:
I like this. The all too familiar situation we can find ourselves in when we ask ourselves that question \'what on earth am i doing being with/or longing to be with this person\'.
But i like the way you said it.
July 5th, 2018 15:52
BLOOM
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, it is like my philosophy on life, \"This is me, take me as I am and if you have a problem with that it is your problem, not mine\".
July 4th, 2018 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, it is like my philosophy on life, \"This is me, take me as I am and if you have a problem with that it is your problem, not mine\".
July 4th, 2018 00:42
LOVING YOU
Heartwriter said:
Love is a confusing thing often. When your up you fly high. When your down you hang low. Guess it\'s the roller coaster ride that never stops. I loved this!
July 1st, 2018 06:32
Heartwriter said:
Love is a confusing thing often. When your up you fly high. When your down you hang low. Guess it\'s the roller coaster ride that never stops. I loved this!
July 1st, 2018 06:32
PRECIOUS
E-Poems said:
Lovely words and a brilliant message. I absolutely love your writers comment, if only more people could think that way. I look forwards to reading more of your work ~ E
June 29th, 2018 09:17
E-Poems said:
Lovely words and a brilliant message. I absolutely love your writers comment, if only more people could think that way. I look forwards to reading more of your work ~ E
June 29th, 2018 09:17
PRECIOUS
SLR said:
I find it ironic that you can get a group of people together and no-one will like everything about themselves. They\'ll prefer some feature of the others, but those people will prefer traits of the other ones. Everyone wants to trade with everyone else! Looks are shallow and don\'t last, so we should concentrate on being beautiful inside. Great post! Welcome to MPS!! :-) :-) :-)
June 28th, 2018 15:07
SLR said:
I find it ironic that you can get a group of people together and no-one will like everything about themselves. They\'ll prefer some feature of the others, but those people will prefer traits of the other ones. Everyone wants to trade with everyone else! Looks are shallow and don\'t last, so we should concentrate on being beautiful inside. Great post! Welcome to MPS!! :-) :-) :-)
June 28th, 2018 15:07
