Comments received on poems by livsxxxx
Buttercup.
Michael Edwards said:
A great read - really enjoyed this - it says so much with so few words.
August 5th, 2018 03:56
Michael Edwards said:
A great read - really enjoyed this - it says so much with so few words.
August 5th, 2018 03:56
Loss of a dear friend.
livsxxxx said:
Thank you. It’s just good to be back and write something truly from the heart .
August 4th, 2018 14:21
livsxxxx said:
Thank you. It’s just good to be back and write something truly from the heart .
August 4th, 2018 14:21
H2O
orchidee said:
You breathing in steam there? And - what Brian said. I\'m no scientist, but I\'ll believe him! He knows!
July 13th, 2018 04:53
orchidee said:
You breathing in steam there? And - what Brian said. I\'m no scientist, but I\'ll believe him! He knows!
July 13th, 2018 04:53
H2O
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LIVS ~ H2O the elixir of Life and Love ! Every breath we take we not only inhale OXYGEN but H20 as well ~ it is an awesome molecule and can be GAS (steam) LIQUID (water) and SOLID (ice) ! ICE has the same structure as DIAMOND and so is a symbol of TRUE LOVE ~ STEAM is ephemeral so is symbol of TRANSIENT LOVE (it happens) BUT WATER reaches the parts other \"molecules\" can\'t reach and is a symbol of ALL CONSUMING LOVE. Thanks for sharing LIVS there is always more to your Poetry than meets the EYE ! Yours BRIAN ! Please check my Poem today \"BIOCHEMISTRY OF LOVE\" There is a video of JIM REEVES in Concert which is PERFECTION ~ Thanks BRIAN.
July 13th, 2018 04:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks LIVS ~ H2O the elixir of Life and Love ! Every breath we take we not only inhale OXYGEN but H20 as well ~ it is an awesome molecule and can be GAS (steam) LIQUID (water) and SOLID (ice) ! ICE has the same structure as DIAMOND and so is a symbol of TRUE LOVE ~ STEAM is ephemeral so is symbol of TRANSIENT LOVE (it happens) BUT WATER reaches the parts other \"molecules\" can\'t reach and is a symbol of ALL CONSUMING LOVE. Thanks for sharing LIVS there is always more to your Poetry than meets the EYE ! Yours BRIAN ! Please check my Poem today \"BIOCHEMISTRY OF LOVE\" There is a video of JIM REEVES in Concert which is PERFECTION ~ Thanks BRIAN.
July 13th, 2018 04:35
The final whistle.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A creative poem on a poignancy that is common world over. But not everyone can ink on it so poetically and superbly. Kudos.
Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"l, I like meeting poem pals to say hi.
July 12th, 2018 14:58
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A creative poem on a poignancy that is common world over. But not everyone can ink on it so poetically and superbly. Kudos.
Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart\"l, I like meeting poem pals to say hi.
July 12th, 2018 14:58
The final whistle.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS ~ LIVS ~ It expresses brilliantly what many of us feel today. Especially as with YOUTH & ENTHUSIASM ~ we felt we had a chance against FRANCE to repeat the 4:2 win against GERMANY in 1966 long before I was born (1983) ! If you analyse the game CROATIA won because 1. They were older and more experienced 2. They knew & understood each other better 3. They had more possession and their \"ball distribution\" was better 4. They didn\'t panic and took the two chances well when they came. ENGLAND are Young ~ Talented ~ Good Manager ~ Good Captain (and alternatives in the TEAM) much to build on for the EUROPEAN CUP (2020) and the next WORLD CUP (2022) We were fortunate to beat SWEDEN etc to reach the SEMIS which put the BIG ONE (Final against France on Sunday) with in our GRASP ~ it is that which made the defeat by CROATIA so so devastating. Some pundits say ~ in essence ~ we did much better than we expected and should be HONOURED (Gareth included) for what we did. I am an EVERTON Supporter so I am particularly disappointed for Our Goalkeeper Gordon Pickford ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Hugs of Sympathy ~ BRIAN Please check my Poem on Turtles and my FUSION on Fave Hymns ~ Thanks ~ B
July 12th, 2018 14:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS ~ LIVS ~ It expresses brilliantly what many of us feel today. Especially as with YOUTH & ENTHUSIASM ~ we felt we had a chance against FRANCE to repeat the 4:2 win against GERMANY in 1966 long before I was born (1983) ! If you analyse the game CROATIA won because 1. They were older and more experienced 2. They knew & understood each other better 3. They had more possession and their \"ball distribution\" was better 4. They didn\'t panic and took the two chances well when they came. ENGLAND are Young ~ Talented ~ Good Manager ~ Good Captain (and alternatives in the TEAM) much to build on for the EUROPEAN CUP (2020) and the next WORLD CUP (2022) We were fortunate to beat SWEDEN etc to reach the SEMIS which put the BIG ONE (Final against France on Sunday) with in our GRASP ~ it is that which made the defeat by CROATIA so so devastating. Some pundits say ~ in essence ~ we did much better than we expected and should be HONOURED (Gareth included) for what we did. I am an EVERTON Supporter so I am particularly disappointed for Our Goalkeeper Gordon Pickford ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Hugs of Sympathy ~ BRIAN Please check my Poem on Turtles and my FUSION on Fave Hymns ~ Thanks ~ B
July 12th, 2018 14:26
The final whistle.
Heartwriter said:
Congrats on the opportunity and chin up for the loss. Which was not a total loss. Hey, you played a great game!
July 12th, 2018 06:01
Heartwriter said:
Congrats on the opportunity and chin up for the loss. Which was not a total loss. Hey, you played a great game!
July 12th, 2018 06:01
The Tree.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow so powerful, thank you for message of natures beautiful raw truth.
July 11th, 2018 12:39
Poetic Dan said:
Wow so powerful, thank you for message of natures beautiful raw truth.
July 11th, 2018 12:39
Art.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LIVS ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! Art & Poetry are symbiotic and complement each other. Your Poem raises a PARADOX ~ BUT there are Blind Artists just as there are Deaf Music Composers and Dumb Orators etc. We do not have to See what we have Painted ~ Hear what we have composed or be able to verbalise our Oration. The important thing is we do it and get involved ~ AMEN More Poems please ~ Your MPS Friend BRIAN (UK)
July 11th, 2018 06:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LIVS ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! Art & Poetry are symbiotic and complement each other. Your Poem raises a PARADOX ~ BUT there are Blind Artists just as there are Deaf Music Composers and Dumb Orators etc. We do not have to See what we have Painted ~ Hear what we have composed or be able to verbalise our Oration. The important thing is we do it and get involved ~ AMEN More Poems please ~ Your MPS Friend BRIAN (UK)
July 11th, 2018 06:04
