Comments received on poems by JasmineUK
Yes, Madam
dusk arising said:
Aha your vocation! Poet of course.
(or should i say of coarse).
No holds barred poetry does this site a lot of good. Far preferable to some of the droning brainwashed religious babble and the \'oh no, he\'s left me, now i must die but tell of my misery for weeks on end first\' seen too regularly.
You perk us up! Perky little things we are.
July 20th, 2018 13:31
dusk arising said:
Aha your vocation! Poet of course.
(or should i say of coarse).
No holds barred poetry does this site a lot of good. Far preferable to some of the droning brainwashed religious babble and the \'oh no, he\'s left me, now i must die but tell of my misery for weeks on end first\' seen too regularly.
You perk us up! Perky little things we are.
July 20th, 2018 13:31
The Virgin
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks again JASMINE for a very graphic poem. I always counsel Young Ladies that their VIRGINITY is the most precious thing they possess and to surrender it is not only Biological but also Psychological. For it to be taken by force without consent (RAPE) is a heinous crime and makes me ashamed to be a Man. Any Male who commits such a crime is not fit to live in decent Society. And full castration should be the least of his punishments. Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 15th, 2018 10:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks again JASMINE for a very graphic poem. I always counsel Young Ladies that their VIRGINITY is the most precious thing they possess and to surrender it is not only Biological but also Psychological. For it to be taken by force without consent (RAPE) is a heinous crime and makes me ashamed to be a Man. Any Male who commits such a crime is not fit to live in decent Society. And full castration should be the least of his punishments. Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 15th, 2018 10:14
Will
dusk arising said:
Its good to read that when a farmer goes a-harvesting the crop appreciates a thoroughly good reaping.
July 14th, 2018 11:38
dusk arising said:
Its good to read that when a farmer goes a-harvesting the crop appreciates a thoroughly good reaping.
July 14th, 2018 11:38
Will
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW JASMINE ~ You are incorrigible ! When I first looked at it ~ I thought it was all about HITCHCOCK ~ the Film Producer & his Films ~ Frenzy ~ I Confess ~ The Pleasure Garden ~ The Skin game ~ The Farmers Wife etc ~ then I discovered it really WAS ! Farmers used to do it MANUALLY now they do it MECHANICALLY ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my poem on Time ~ thanks B !
July 14th, 2018 10:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW JASMINE ~ You are incorrigible ! When I first looked at it ~ I thought it was all about HITCHCOCK ~ the Film Producer & his Films ~ Frenzy ~ I Confess ~ The Pleasure Garden ~ The Skin game ~ The Farmers Wife etc ~ then I discovered it really WAS ! Farmers used to do it MANUALLY now they do it MECHANICALLY ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my poem on Time ~ thanks B !
July 14th, 2018 10:07
Mistress Fix
Syd said:
Wow! An amazing write. I just hope it\'s a fictional one.
- Syd
July 13th, 2018 13:50
Syd said:
Wow! An amazing write. I just hope it\'s a fictional one.
- Syd
July 13th, 2018 13:50
Mistress Fix
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS JASMINE ~ There is a moral in your salutary tale DRUGS always demand very high price. People I have known have sold their bodies for a fix and then their souls. The latter is too high a price to pay ! Your SUBJECT seems to have a voided that ! I am pleased your very graphic Poem does not see all men as \"EXPLOITERS of FEMALES\" some of us are Gentlemen and refuse to use Girls when they are DOWN (& OUT). Her mood changes in V 12. Veterans are honourable Men ! Love the gentle innuendos in vs 13 & 14. However (V 15) Mistress Fix is still lurking in the SHADOWS ! Thanks for sharing a salutary lesson for us all ! Yours BRIAN Please check my POEM on the Biochemistry of Love # Thanks B !
July 13th, 2018 07:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS JASMINE ~ There is a moral in your salutary tale DRUGS always demand very high price. People I have known have sold their bodies for a fix and then their souls. The latter is too high a price to pay ! Your SUBJECT seems to have a voided that ! I am pleased your very graphic Poem does not see all men as \"EXPLOITERS of FEMALES\" some of us are Gentlemen and refuse to use Girls when they are DOWN (& OUT). Her mood changes in V 12. Veterans are honourable Men ! Love the gentle innuendos in vs 13 & 14. However (V 15) Mistress Fix is still lurking in the SHADOWS ! Thanks for sharing a salutary lesson for us all ! Yours BRIAN Please check my POEM on the Biochemistry of Love # Thanks B !
July 13th, 2018 07:20
It\'s Coming Home
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write - football has a great deal for which to answer.
July 13th, 2018 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write - football has a great deal for which to answer.
July 13th, 2018 00:20
Seed
dusk arising said:
LOL naughty fun writing, i love it.
\'Unquenchable haven\' indeed.
You certainly brought a big grin to my face.
July 11th, 2018 14:55
dusk arising said:
LOL naughty fun writing, i love it.
\'Unquenchable haven\' indeed.
You certainly brought a big grin to my face.
July 11th, 2018 14:55
Labia
Poetic Dan said:
Your words are so powerful in all of your writings, thank you for sharing that beautiful mind and being perfectly you.
July 11th, 2018 12:48
Poetic Dan said:
Your words are so powerful in all of your writings, thank you for sharing that beautiful mind and being perfectly you.
July 11th, 2018 12:48
Labia
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhh JASMINE ~ You are on very sacred ground in this POEM but it should not be a taboo subject. To me FEMALE CIRCUMCISION is Anathema and those who force Young ladies into it should be shot ! The petal of a lady are as you say a thing of beauty one of God\'s greatest sensual gifts and for Mere Men a pleasure to all the senses ! Sight a precious Jewel of great Beauty ~ Scent the musk of Paradise ~ Touch like velvet ~ Taste the Honey of Heaven ~ Portent ~ A Perfect Entrance to the Tunnel of LOVE ! For the LADY the source of infinite pleasure & pleasuring ! JASMINE it is the most precious and perfect thing you possess ~ Your Love Petals that GUARD (and STIMULATE) the entrance to your PERFECT GIFT to your PERFECT MAN ! Never let anyone take it from you and always treat it with reverence and respect ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) An English Gentleman and a Respecter of ALL LADIES ~ AMEN !
July 10th, 2018 09:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhh JASMINE ~ You are on very sacred ground in this POEM but it should not be a taboo subject. To me FEMALE CIRCUMCISION is Anathema and those who force Young ladies into it should be shot ! The petal of a lady are as you say a thing of beauty one of God\'s greatest sensual gifts and for Mere Men a pleasure to all the senses ! Sight a precious Jewel of great Beauty ~ Scent the musk of Paradise ~ Touch like velvet ~ Taste the Honey of Heaven ~ Portent ~ A Perfect Entrance to the Tunnel of LOVE ! For the LADY the source of infinite pleasure & pleasuring ! JASMINE it is the most precious and perfect thing you possess ~ Your Love Petals that GUARD (and STIMULATE) the entrance to your PERFECT GIFT to your PERFECT MAN ! Never let anyone take it from you and always treat it with reverence and respect ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) An English Gentleman and a Respecter of ALL LADIES ~ AMEN !
July 10th, 2018 09:37
Labia
chana said:
Yes! Empowerment and edgy , inspirational to love your body in what ever form, this writing gives me life 😊
July 10th, 2018 09:27
chana said:
Yes! Empowerment and edgy , inspirational to love your body in what ever form, this writing gives me life 😊
July 10th, 2018 09:27
Child of Badajoz
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA JASMINE ~ Gracias por tu prima poema muy grafica ! BADAJOZ Ciudad famosa de Extramadura cerca de Portugal ! Your POEM is elegantly penned pulsating with rhyme rhythm and sensuality ! A delight to read and recite ! A courtesan to the FRENCH providing them sensual pleasure and them providing you with Ninos d\'Oro ~ awesome. Lines 13 to 32 are very sexplicit and speak for themselves and need no commentary ! You accept your fate as \"The Will of GOD for the Honour of Spain\" But all conflicts are FINITE and the ENGLISH arrive to conquer the FRENCH and you have Food ~ Wine ~ Sustenance & Freedom ! All Englishmen are Gentlemen (and Gentle Lovers) and do not act like Animals towards our LADIES ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my SITE ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 9th, 2018 09:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HOLA JASMINE ~ Gracias por tu prima poema muy grafica ! BADAJOZ Ciudad famosa de Extramadura cerca de Portugal ! Your POEM is elegantly penned pulsating with rhyme rhythm and sensuality ! A delight to read and recite ! A courtesan to the FRENCH providing them sensual pleasure and them providing you with Ninos d\'Oro ~ awesome. Lines 13 to 32 are very sexplicit and speak for themselves and need no commentary ! You accept your fate as \"The Will of GOD for the Honour of Spain\" But all conflicts are FINITE and the ENGLISH arrive to conquer the FRENCH and you have Food ~ Wine ~ Sustenance & Freedom ! All Englishmen are Gentlemen (and Gentle Lovers) and do not act like Animals towards our LADIES ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my SITE ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 9th, 2018 09:07
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