Comments received on poems by JasmineUK



Defeat
Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33) said:

I absolutely agree...don\'t you understand that you have a HUGE LAWSUIT HERE..HE IS NOT IRREPLACEABLE..AND IF YOU ARE HELD BACK BY YOUR LACK OF GIVING INTO TO THIS PERVERTS LIBIDO, YOU MAY BECOME RICH ENOUGH TO NOT HAVE TO WORK FOR A LONG WHILE...EVEN IF YOU WANT TO WORK, THIS SHOULD NOT GO UNNOTICED...

December 16th, 2018 06:07

Defeat
Goldfinch60 said:

I know it is hard for you to so this but he must be reported to his boss of even to the police. This sort of thing should NOT be happening.

December 16th, 2018 01:56

I\'m Loving It
Neville said:

I don\'t suppose your talking McDonald\'s are ya.. very entertaining, cheers.. N

December 8th, 2018 10:19

Firework Journey
The Artist Known As sVn (Se7en) said:

Excellent writing!


August 10th, 2018 21:44

Firework Journey
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Beautiful! Jasmine
I enjoyed reading your Poem.
I like the love story even though it had a sad ending.
Bless Day!
;)

August 10th, 2018 10:43

Nothing Town
Candlewitch said:

I agree with dusk arising completely! and the guilty almost never admit to their sins! excellent presentation!

*hugs, Cat

July 30th, 2018 11:58

Nothing Town
dusk arising said:

A cry out for those who\'s cries cannot be heard nor understood.
A lovely kick in the balls of the world. Sadly won\'t be heard by the guilty and even if it were, would have no effect.
But here, read and understood, raises your status amongst us poetic observers of life, love and injustice.
Excellence.

July 29th, 2018 19:21

Soundtrack to my Love
Candlewitch said:

wow...nice play list! and you put it together so well!!!

*hugs, Cat

July 28th, 2018 12:04

Soundtrack to my Love
JasmineUK said:

Hodge & Dusky
I need \"Three times a lady\"
Not a \"Three minute hero\"
But \"How soon is now!\"

July 28th, 2018 08:13

Soundtrack to my Love
dusk arising said:

Well i\'m ready to spin \'The only way is up\' but i dont mind if you\'d prefer \'lessons in love\'.

July 28th, 2018 01:21

Dashwood
dusk arising said:

Yay forsooth thou hast hailed mine devil within. Twas with lustful glare and throb of vein i poured o\'er your versed debauch.
But sated now, regained of composure i thank thee verbose wench and await the pleasure to drool once more , adios

...... upstanding hench

July 24th, 2018 22:38

Reach Out And Touch Faith
Goldfinch60 said:

Have a look at this:
https://youtu.be/xyvFhrDzLfY

July 23rd, 2018 12:48

I\'m Loving It
dusk arising said:

And there i was thinking youre a chocaholic.

July 21st, 2018 13:27

Yes, Madam
Syd said:

πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ₯„πŸ₯„πŸ₯„Refreshingly brilliant!

- Syd

July 20th, 2018 14:50

Yes, Madam
dusk arising said:

Aha your vocation! Poet of course.
(or should i say of coarse).
No holds barred poetry does this site a lot of good. Far preferable to some of the droning brainwashed religious babble and the \'oh no, he\'s left me, now i must die but tell of my misery for weeks on end first\' seen too regularly.
You perk us up! Perky little things we are.

July 20th, 2018 13:31

Mrs Jones
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good sensuous write.

July 18th, 2018 01:21

The Virgin
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks again JASMINE for a very graphic poem. I always counsel Young Ladies that their VIRGINITY is the most precious thing they possess and to surrender it is not only Biological but also Psychological. For it to be taken by force without consent (RAPE) is a heinous crime and makes me ashamed to be a Man. Any Male who commits such a crime is not fit to live in decent Society. And full castration should be the least of his punishments. Yours BRIAN (UK)

July 15th, 2018 10:14

The Virgin
Heartwriter said:

Wow! Certainly told a story here. Awesome!

July 15th, 2018 04:23

Will
dusk arising said:

Its good to read that when a farmer goes a-harvesting the crop appreciates a thoroughly good reaping.

July 14th, 2018 11:38

Will
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW JASMINE ~ You are incorrigible ! When I first looked at it ~ I thought it was all about HITCHCOCK ~ the Film Producer & his Films ~ Frenzy ~ I Confess ~ The Pleasure Garden ~ The Skin game ~ The Farmers Wife etc ~ then I discovered it really WAS ! Farmers used to do it MANUALLY now they do it MECHANICALLY ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my poem on Time ~ thanks B !

July 14th, 2018 10:07

Mistress Fix
Syd said:

Wow! An amazing write. I just hope it\'s a fictional one.

- Syd

July 13th, 2018 13:50

Mistress Fix
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS JASMINE ~ There is a moral in your salutary tale DRUGS always demand very high price. People I have known have sold their bodies for a fix and then their souls. The latter is too high a price to pay ! Your SUBJECT seems to have a voided that ! I am pleased your very graphic Poem does not see all men as \"EXPLOITERS of FEMALES\" some of us are Gentlemen and refuse to use Girls when they are DOWN (& OUT). Her mood changes in V 12. Veterans are honourable Men ! Love the gentle innuendos in vs 13 & 14. However (V 15) Mistress Fix is still lurking in the SHADOWS ! Thanks for sharing a salutary lesson for us all ! Yours BRIAN Please check my POEM on the Biochemistry of Love # Thanks B !

July 13th, 2018 07:20

It\'s Coming Home
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong write - football has a great deal for which to answer.

July 13th, 2018 00:20

Seed
dusk arising said:

LOL naughty fun writing, i love it.
\'Unquenchable haven\' indeed.
You certainly brought a big grin to my face.

July 11th, 2018 14:55

Labia
Poetic Dan said:

Your words are so powerful in all of your writings, thank you for sharing that beautiful mind and being perfectly you.

July 11th, 2018 12:48

Seed
livsxxxx said:

Great poem!

July 11th, 2018 05:37

Labia
Candlewitch said:

a well written poem and message! I agree with Brian! castration is an abomination!!! well done!

*hugs, Cat

July 10th, 2018 11:22

Labia
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Ohhhhhhh JASMINE ~ You are on very sacred ground in this POEM but it should not be a taboo subject. To me FEMALE CIRCUMCISION is Anathema and those who force Young ladies into it should be shot ! The petal of a lady are as you say a thing of beauty one of God\'s greatest sensual gifts and for Mere Men a pleasure to all the senses ! Sight a precious Jewel of great Beauty ~ Scent the musk of Paradise ~ Touch like velvet ~ Taste the Honey of Heaven ~ Portent ~ A Perfect Entrance to the Tunnel of LOVE ! For the LADY the source of infinite pleasure & pleasuring ! JASMINE it is the most precious and perfect thing you possess ~ Your Love Petals that GUARD (and STIMULATE) the entrance to your PERFECT GIFT to your PERFECT MAN ! Never let anyone take it from you and always treat it with reverence and respect ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) An English Gentleman and a Respecter of ALL LADIES ~ AMEN !

July 10th, 2018 09:37

Labia
chana said:

Yes! Empowerment and edgy , inspirational to love your body in what ever form, this writing gives me life 😊

July 10th, 2018 09:27

Child of Badajoz
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HOLA JASMINE ~ Gracias por tu prima poema muy grafica ! BADAJOZ Ciudad famosa de Extramadura cerca de Portugal ! Your POEM is elegantly penned pulsating with rhyme rhythm and sensuality ! A delight to read and recite ! A courtesan to the FRENCH providing them sensual pleasure and them providing you with Ninos d\'Oro ~ awesome. Lines 13 to 32 are very sexplicit and speak for themselves and need no commentary ! You accept your fate as \"The Will of GOD for the Honour of Spain\" But all conflicts are FINITE and the ENGLISH arrive to conquer the FRENCH and you have Food ~ Wine ~ Sustenance & Freedom ! All Englishmen are Gentlemen (and Gentle Lovers) and do not act like Animals towards our LADIES ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check my SITE ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

July 9th, 2018 09:07