Comments received on poems by JasmineUK
Seen and Raised
Bobby O said:
Nice piece. Beautiful rhythm.
Nice write good read
June 28th, 2023 23:00
Bobby O said:
Nice piece. Beautiful rhythm.
Nice write good read
June 28th, 2023 23:00
Seen and Raised
Bobby O said:
Nice piece. Beautiful rhythm.
Nice write good read
June 28th, 2023 22:59
Bobby O said:
Nice piece. Beautiful rhythm.
Nice write good read
June 28th, 2023 22:59
Voracity
peto said:
Say it as it is
You dont miss and hit the wall
Great content enhanced by clever rhyme
Although at times it sounds a little bitter
It oozes strength
June 22nd, 2023 20:18
peto said:
Say it as it is
You dont miss and hit the wall
Great content enhanced by clever rhyme
Although at times it sounds a little bitter
It oozes strength
June 22nd, 2023 20:18
The Devil Makes Work For Idle Hands
Bobby O said:
It’s joyous with with a reality that might usually hide but instead spoken out loud inviting us to acknowledge that sweeping under the rug constrains this one time and moment shared is freeing?
June 10th, 2023 04:17
Bobby O said:
It’s joyous with with a reality that might usually hide but instead spoken out loud inviting us to acknowledge that sweeping under the rug constrains this one time and moment shared is freeing?
June 10th, 2023 04:17
Lucky Looks
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my reactionary rant below
your acute poetry
hit a nerve, I can never stopper..
thank you for sharing
these words of depressing, reality
worded commentary
exposing our cesspool society\'s
vile hypocrisies
and that insidious cyclic culture
of inhumane vulture
traits, we inherit and blindly accept
as our ONLY, way
of conformist, pathetic survival
in this facsimile of a life..
(\'pretty privilege???\'
yeah
what about pretty\'s
assumed, devaluation
of integrity or worth!!!\'
runways, aplenty
millionaires for their looks
simultaneously
another girl, sold
by her parents, to feed
her brothers n sisters..
cos her 12 year old face
insures, she\'s sure to be
one of the \'lucky\', pretty privileged
...
another..
and another
and yet another,
Every F\'ckin second
ANOTHER!!!)
I just pray, death
will finally free me, somehow
of this collective
vile, inhumane, dirt
on my name, tattooed
upon me
for being born, that oh so
superior, \'human\'
...
fck! i need a shower
for my impotent rage
thankful
for this writing, thing
as my access, to a self
devoid of reality\'s, taint
April 21st, 2023 07:04
L. B. Mek said:
forgive my reactionary rant below
your acute poetry
hit a nerve, I can never stopper..
thank you for sharing
these words of depressing, reality
worded commentary
exposing our cesspool society\'s
vile hypocrisies
and that insidious cyclic culture
of inhumane vulture
traits, we inherit and blindly accept
as our ONLY, way
of conformist, pathetic survival
in this facsimile of a life..
(\'pretty privilege???\'
yeah
what about pretty\'s
assumed, devaluation
of integrity or worth!!!\'
runways, aplenty
millionaires for their looks
simultaneously
another girl, sold
by her parents, to feed
her brothers n sisters..
cos her 12 year old face
insures, she\'s sure to be
one of the \'lucky\', pretty privileged
...
another..
and another
and yet another,
Every F\'ckin second
ANOTHER!!!)
I just pray, death
will finally free me, somehow
of this collective
vile, inhumane, dirt
on my name, tattooed
upon me
for being born, that oh so
superior, \'human\'
...
fck! i need a shower
for my impotent rage
thankful
for this writing, thing
as my access, to a self
devoid of reality\'s, taint
April 21st, 2023 07:04
Love Island
JasmineUK said:
Of all the poems of all the gin joints,
You walk into mine, mine!
Don\'t leave a poor girl all at sea!
February 13th, 2023 05:20
JasmineUK said:
Of all the poems of all the gin joints,
You walk into mine, mine!
Don\'t leave a poor girl all at sea!
February 13th, 2023 05:20
Job Satisfaction?
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t quite understand why no-one was prepared to at least give a nod (for me more than just a nod) to nurse\'s dedication.
Great structured rhymer - thanks.
February 12th, 2023 18:37
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t quite understand why no-one was prepared to at least give a nod (for me more than just a nod) to nurse\'s dedication.
Great structured rhymer - thanks.
February 12th, 2023 18:37
Defeat
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I absolutely agree...don\'t you understand that you have a HUGE LAWSUIT HERE..HE IS NOT IRREPLACEABLE..AND IF YOU ARE HELD BACK BY YOUR LACK OF GIVING INTO TO THIS PERVERTS LIBIDO, YOU MAY BECOME RICH ENOUGH TO NOT HAVE TO WORK FOR A LONG WHILE...EVEN IF YOU WANT TO WORK, THIS SHOULD NOT GO UNNOTICED...
December 16th, 2018 06:07
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I absolutely agree...don\'t you understand that you have a HUGE LAWSUIT HERE..HE IS NOT IRREPLACEABLE..AND IF YOU ARE HELD BACK BY YOUR LACK OF GIVING INTO TO THIS PERVERTS LIBIDO, YOU MAY BECOME RICH ENOUGH TO NOT HAVE TO WORK FOR A LONG WHILE...EVEN IF YOU WANT TO WORK, THIS SHOULD NOT GO UNNOTICED...
December 16th, 2018 06:07
Defeat
Goldfinch60 said:
I know it is hard for you to so this but he must be reported to his boss of even to the police. This sort of thing should NOT be happening.
December 16th, 2018 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
I know it is hard for you to so this but he must be reported to his boss of even to the police. This sort of thing should NOT be happening.
December 16th, 2018 01:56
I\'m Loving It
Neville said:
I don\'t suppose your talking McDonald\'s are ya.. very entertaining, cheers.. N
December 8th, 2018 10:19
Neville said:
I don\'t suppose your talking McDonald\'s are ya.. very entertaining, cheers.. N
December 8th, 2018 10:19
Nothing Town
dusk arising said:
A cry out for those who\'s cries cannot be heard nor understood.
A lovely kick in the balls of the world. Sadly won\'t be heard by the guilty and even if it were, would have no effect.
But here, read and understood, raises your status amongst us poetic observers of life, love and injustice.
Excellence.
July 29th, 2018 19:21
dusk arising said:
A cry out for those who\'s cries cannot be heard nor understood.
A lovely kick in the balls of the world. Sadly won\'t be heard by the guilty and even if it were, would have no effect.
But here, read and understood, raises your status amongst us poetic observers of life, love and injustice.
Excellence.
July 29th, 2018 19:21
Soundtrack to my Love
JasmineUK said:
Hodge & Dusky
I need \"Three times a lady\"
Not a \"Three minute hero\"
But \"How soon is now!\"
July 28th, 2018 08:13
JasmineUK said:
Hodge & Dusky
I need \"Three times a lady\"
Not a \"Three minute hero\"
But \"How soon is now!\"
July 28th, 2018 08:13
Soundtrack to my Love
dusk arising said:
Well i\'m ready to spin \'The only way is up\' but i dont mind if you\'d prefer \'lessons in love\'.
July 28th, 2018 01:21
dusk arising said:
Well i\'m ready to spin \'The only way is up\' but i dont mind if you\'d prefer \'lessons in love\'.
July 28th, 2018 01:21
Dashwood
dusk arising said:
Yay forsooth thou hast hailed mine devil within. Twas with lustful glare and throb of vein i poured o\'er your versed debauch.
But sated now, regained of composure i thank thee verbose wench and await the pleasure to drool once more , adios
...... upstanding hench
July 24th, 2018 22:38
dusk arising said:
Yay forsooth thou hast hailed mine devil within. Twas with lustful glare and throb of vein i poured o\'er your versed debauch.
But sated now, regained of composure i thank thee verbose wench and await the pleasure to drool once more , adios
...... upstanding hench
July 24th, 2018 22:38
Reach Out And Touch Faith
Goldfinch60 said:
Have a look at this:
https://youtu.be/xyvFhrDzLfY
July 23rd, 2018 12:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Have a look at this:
https://youtu.be/xyvFhrDzLfY
July 23rd, 2018 12:48
Yes, Madam
dusk arising said:
Aha your vocation! Poet of course.
(or should i say of coarse).
No holds barred poetry does this site a lot of good. Far preferable to some of the droning brainwashed religious babble and the \'oh no, he\'s left me, now i must die but tell of my misery for weeks on end first\' seen too regularly.
You perk us up! Perky little things we are.
July 20th, 2018 13:31
dusk arising said:
Aha your vocation! Poet of course.
(or should i say of coarse).
No holds barred poetry does this site a lot of good. Far preferable to some of the droning brainwashed religious babble and the \'oh no, he\'s left me, now i must die but tell of my misery for weeks on end first\' seen too regularly.
You perk us up! Perky little things we are.
July 20th, 2018 13:31
The Virgin
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks again JASMINE for a very graphic poem. I always counsel Young Ladies that their VIRGINITY is the most precious thing they possess and to surrender it is not only Biological but also Psychological. For it to be taken by force without consent (RAPE) is a heinous crime and makes me ashamed to be a Man. Any Male who commits such a crime is not fit to live in decent Society. And full castration should be the least of his punishments. Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 15th, 2018 10:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks again JASMINE for a very graphic poem. I always counsel Young Ladies that their VIRGINITY is the most precious thing they possess and to surrender it is not only Biological but also Psychological. For it to be taken by force without consent (RAPE) is a heinous crime and makes me ashamed to be a Man. Any Male who commits such a crime is not fit to live in decent Society. And full castration should be the least of his punishments. Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 15th, 2018 10:14
Will
dusk arising said:
Its good to read that when a farmer goes a-harvesting the crop appreciates a thoroughly good reaping.
July 14th, 2018 11:38
dusk arising said:
Its good to read that when a farmer goes a-harvesting the crop appreciates a thoroughly good reaping.
July 14th, 2018 11:38
Will
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW JASMINE ~ You are incorrigible ! When I first looked at it ~ I thought it was all about HITCHCOCK ~ the Film Producer & his Films ~ Frenzy ~ I Confess ~ The Pleasure Garden ~ The Skin game ~ The Farmers Wife etc ~ then I discovered it really WAS ! Farmers used to do it MANUALLY now they do it MECHANICALLY ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my poem on Time ~ thanks B !
July 14th, 2018 10:07
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW JASMINE ~ You are incorrigible ! When I first looked at it ~ I thought it was all about HITCHCOCK ~ the Film Producer & his Films ~ Frenzy ~ I Confess ~ The Pleasure Garden ~ The Skin game ~ The Farmers Wife etc ~ then I discovered it really WAS ! Farmers used to do it MANUALLY now they do it MECHANICALLY ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my poem on Time ~ thanks B !
July 14th, 2018 10:07
Mistress Fix
Syd said:
Wow! An amazing write. I just hope it\'s a fictional one.
- Syd
July 13th, 2018 13:50
Syd said:
Wow! An amazing write. I just hope it\'s a fictional one.
- Syd
July 13th, 2018 13:50
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