Comments received on poems by JasmineUK



Seen and Raised
Bobby O said:

Nice piece. Beautiful rhythm.
Nice write good read


June 28th, 2023 23:00

Seen and Raised
Bobby O said:

Nice piece. Beautiful rhythm.
Nice write good read


June 28th, 2023 22:59

Teacher\'s Pet
LIZ said:

🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

June 28th, 2023 17:41

Voracity
LIZ said:

Mercy! Thank you for the reminder! 🔥 🔥 🔥

June 28th, 2023 17:39

Voracity
peto said:

Say it as it is
You dont miss and hit the wall

Great content enhanced by clever rhyme

Although at times it sounds a little bitter
It oozes strength

June 22nd, 2023 20:18

The Devil Makes Work For Idle Hands
Bobby O said:

It’s joyous with with a reality that might usually hide but instead spoken out loud inviting us to acknowledge that sweeping under the rug constrains this one time and moment shared is freeing?

June 10th, 2023 04:17

Lucky Looks
L. B. Mek said:

forgive my reactionary rant below
your acute poetry
hit a nerve, I can never stopper..
thank you for sharing
these words of depressing, reality
worded commentary
exposing our cesspool society\'s
vile hypocrisies
and that insidious cyclic culture
of inhumane vulture
traits, we inherit and blindly accept
as our ONLY, way
of conformist, pathetic survival
in this facsimile of a life..
(\'pretty privilege???\'
yeah
what about pretty\'s
assumed, devaluation
of integrity or worth!!!\'
runways, aplenty
millionaires for their looks
simultaneously
another girl, sold
by her parents, to feed
her brothers n sisters..
cos her 12 year old face
insures, she\'s sure to be
one of the \'lucky\', pretty privileged
...
another..
and another
and yet another,
Every F\'ckin second
ANOTHER!!!)
I just pray, death
will finally free me, somehow
of this collective
vile, inhumane, dirt
on my name, tattooed
upon me
for being born, that oh so
superior, \'human\'
...
fck! i need a shower
for my impotent rage
thankful
for this writing, thing
as my access, to a self
devoid of reality\'s, taint

April 21st, 2023 07:04

Love Island
JasmineUK said:

Of all the poems of all the gin joints,
You walk into mine, mine!

Don\'t leave a poor girl all at sea!

February 13th, 2023 05:20

Job Satisfaction?
Doggerel Dave said:

I don\'t quite understand why no-one was prepared to at least give a nod (for me more than just a nod) to nurse\'s dedication.
Great structured rhymer - thanks.

February 12th, 2023 18:37

Love Island
2781 said:

That to me is vile vile vile. Smile

February 12th, 2023 17:31

Labia
Neville said:



I\'m with you sister ..

February 12th, 2023 12:38

Defeat
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

I absolutely agree...don\'t you understand that you have a HUGE LAWSUIT HERE..HE IS NOT IRREPLACEABLE..AND IF YOU ARE HELD BACK BY YOUR LACK OF GIVING INTO TO THIS PERVERTS LIBIDO, YOU MAY BECOME RICH ENOUGH TO NOT HAVE TO WORK FOR A LONG WHILE...EVEN IF YOU WANT TO WORK, THIS SHOULD NOT GO UNNOTICED...

December 16th, 2018 06:07

Defeat
Goldfinch60 said:

I know it is hard for you to so this but he must be reported to his boss of even to the police. This sort of thing should NOT be happening.

December 16th, 2018 01:56

I\'m Loving It
Neville said:

I don\'t suppose your talking McDonald\'s are ya.. very entertaining, cheers.. N

December 8th, 2018 10:19

Firework Journey
The Artist Known As sVn (Se7en) said:

Excellent writing!


August 10th, 2018 21:44

Nothing Town
dusk arising said:

A cry out for those who\'s cries cannot be heard nor understood.
A lovely kick in the balls of the world. Sadly won\'t be heard by the guilty and even if it were, would have no effect.
But here, read and understood, raises your status amongst us poetic observers of life, love and injustice.
Excellence.

July 29th, 2018 19:21

Soundtrack to my Love
JasmineUK said:

Hodge & Dusky
I need \"Three times a lady\"
Not a \"Three minute hero\"
But \"How soon is now!\"

July 28th, 2018 08:13

Soundtrack to my Love
dusk arising said:

Well i\'m ready to spin \'The only way is up\' but i dont mind if you\'d prefer \'lessons in love\'.

July 28th, 2018 01:21

Dashwood
dusk arising said:

Yay forsooth thou hast hailed mine devil within. Twas with lustful glare and throb of vein i poured o\'er your versed debauch.
But sated now, regained of composure i thank thee verbose wench and await the pleasure to drool once more , adios

...... upstanding hench

July 24th, 2018 22:38

Reach Out And Touch Faith
Goldfinch60 said:

Have a look at this:
https://youtu.be/xyvFhrDzLfY

July 23rd, 2018 12:48

I\'m Loving It
dusk arising said:

And there i was thinking youre a chocaholic.

July 21st, 2018 13:27

Yes, Madam
Syd said:

😂😂😂😂🥄🥄🥄Refreshingly brilliant!

- Syd

July 20th, 2018 14:50

Yes, Madam
dusk arising said:

Aha your vocation! Poet of course.
(or should i say of coarse).
No holds barred poetry does this site a lot of good. Far preferable to some of the droning brainwashed religious babble and the \'oh no, he\'s left me, now i must die but tell of my misery for weeks on end first\' seen too regularly.
You perk us up! Perky little things we are.

July 20th, 2018 13:31

Mrs Jones
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good sensuous write.

July 18th, 2018 01:21

The Virgin
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks again JASMINE for a very graphic poem. I always counsel Young Ladies that their VIRGINITY is the most precious thing they possess and to surrender it is not only Biological but also Psychological. For it to be taken by force without consent (RAPE) is a heinous crime and makes me ashamed to be a Man. Any Male who commits such a crime is not fit to live in decent Society. And full castration should be the least of his punishments. Yours BRIAN (UK)

July 15th, 2018 10:14

The Virgin
Heartwriter said:

Wow! Certainly told a story here. Awesome!

July 15th, 2018 04:23

Will
dusk arising said:

Its good to read that when a farmer goes a-harvesting the crop appreciates a thoroughly good reaping.

July 14th, 2018 11:38

Will
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW JASMINE ~ You are incorrigible ! When I first looked at it ~ I thought it was all about HITCHCOCK ~ the Film Producer & his Films ~ Frenzy ~ I Confess ~ The Pleasure Garden ~ The Skin game ~ The Farmers Wife etc ~ then I discovered it really WAS ! Farmers used to do it MANUALLY now they do it MECHANICALLY ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my poem on Time ~ thanks B !

July 14th, 2018 10:07

Mistress Fix
Syd said:

Wow! An amazing write. I just hope it\'s a fictional one.

- Syd

July 13th, 2018 13:50

Mistress Fix
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS JASMINE ~ There is a moral in your salutary tale DRUGS always demand very high price. People I have known have sold their bodies for a fix and then their souls. The latter is too high a price to pay ! Your SUBJECT seems to have a voided that ! I am pleased your very graphic Poem does not see all men as \"EXPLOITERS of FEMALES\" some of us are Gentlemen and refuse to use Girls when they are DOWN (& OUT). Her mood changes in V 12. Veterans are honourable Men ! Love the gentle innuendos in vs 13 & 14. However (V 15) Mistress Fix is still lurking in the SHADOWS ! Thanks for sharing a salutary lesson for us all ! Yours BRIAN Please check my POEM on the Biochemistry of Love # Thanks B !

July 13th, 2018 07:20

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