Comments received on poems by Shi no hakobi te
The beautiful things
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
And love shall overtake evil. :-)
September 19th, 2019 16:11
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
And love shall overtake evil. :-)
September 19th, 2019 16:11
The beautiful things
Goldfinch60 said:
All the bad things in our lives are cancelled out by the good things.
October 4th, 2018 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
All the bad things in our lives are cancelled out by the good things.
October 4th, 2018 00:08
Ghouls and Ghosts
swyndell said:
This poem is really great, a nice flow and great message. Keep up the great writing. ^^
~Jinxy
September 26th, 2018 14:13
swyndell said:
This poem is really great, a nice flow and great message. Keep up the great writing. ^^
~Jinxy
September 26th, 2018 14:13
Ghouls and Ghosts
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Great perspective on life as we now know it. Your lines \"They simply adopt new names, new identities. Rejection, abuse, poverty, just to name a few,\" I had to laugh, \"Don\'t forget the taxman, the scariest of all.\" :)
Your poem is definitely worth sharing.
September 26th, 2018 12:37
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Great perspective on life as we now know it. Your lines \"They simply adopt new names, new identities. Rejection, abuse, poverty, just to name a few,\" I had to laugh, \"Don\'t forget the taxman, the scariest of all.\" :)
Your poem is definitely worth sharing.
September 26th, 2018 12:37
Ghouls and Ghosts
Netashi said:
nice poem spooky and tells the truth about growing up, good work and keep it up
- Theta
September 26th, 2018 11:47
Netashi said:
nice poem spooky and tells the truth about growing up, good work and keep it up
- Theta
September 26th, 2018 11:47
She saw through eyes of the blind
swyndell said:
Very strong, and though free verse, it has great flow. Great write, Shi. ^^
September 20th, 2018 13:57
swyndell said:
Very strong, and though free verse, it has great flow. Great write, Shi. ^^
September 20th, 2018 13:57
She saw through eyes of the blind
Shi no hakobi te said:
I hope you all like this poem
September 20th, 2018 12:11
Shi no hakobi te said:
I hope you all like this poem
September 20th, 2018 12:11
Life
swyndell said:
Strong rhythm and the rhyme scheme was interesting. Great first write Shi. ^^
September 20th, 2018 07:35
swyndell said:
Strong rhythm and the rhyme scheme was interesting. Great first write Shi. ^^
September 20th, 2018 07:35
Life
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write. I just do not understand why anybody self harms.
When I was in my teens and twenties in the 1960s and 70s I saw and heard of nothing like it.
Welcome to MPS.
September 20th, 2018 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very strong write. I just do not understand why anybody self harms.
When I was in my teens and twenties in the 1960s and 70s I saw and heard of nothing like it.
Welcome to MPS.
September 20th, 2018 01:01
Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem very challenging. Love the shape almost like a CUT ? I have never self-harmed but some of my Students have (they are all 17+) and members of my extended Family. It is a great \"cri de coeur\" and needs a lot of TLC & understanding. Your first verse reminds us of the Preciousness of the Gift of Life but also its Fragility ! V 2. Is a warning ~ not to cut ~ and the effect it has on ones friends. Also the importance of support. Thanks for caring & sharing. Please check my site ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN (35). MPS works by reading and commenting on each other POETRY ~ OK
September 19th, 2018 17:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem very challenging. Love the shape almost like a CUT ? I have never self-harmed but some of my Students have (they are all 17+) and members of my extended Family. It is a great \"cri de coeur\" and needs a lot of TLC & understanding. Your first verse reminds us of the Preciousness of the Gift of Life but also its Fragility ! V 2. Is a warning ~ not to cut ~ and the effect it has on ones friends. Also the importance of support. Thanks for caring & sharing. Please check my site ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN (35). MPS works by reading and commenting on each other POETRY ~ OK
September 19th, 2018 17:49
Life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem very challenging. Love the shape almost like a CUT ? I have never self-harmed but some of my Students have (they are all 17+) and members of my extended Family. It is a great \"cri de coeur\" and needs a lot of TLC & understanding. Your first verse reminds us of the Preciousness of the Gift of Life but also its Fragility ! V 2. Is a warning ~ not to cut ~ and the effect it has on ones friends. Also the importance of support. Thanks for caring & sharing. Please check my site ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN (35). MPS works by reading and commenting on each other POETRY ~ OK
September 19th, 2018 17:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem very challenging. Love the shape almost like a CUT ? I have never self-harmed but some of my Students have (they are all 17+) and members of my extended Family. It is a great \"cri de coeur\" and needs a lot of TLC & understanding. Your first verse reminds us of the Preciousness of the Gift of Life but also its Fragility ! V 2. Is a warning ~ not to cut ~ and the effect it has on ones friends. Also the importance of support. Thanks for caring & sharing. Please check my site ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN (35). MPS works by reading and commenting on each other POETRY ~ OK
September 19th, 2018 17:49
Life
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Honest and strong I liked it well done S
September 19th, 2018 15:24
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Honest and strong I liked it well done S
September 19th, 2018 15:24
