Comments received on poems by Javiilicitano



Today life invites me to live
Debsspot said:

Each day can be a new beginning if you want it to be

December 4th, 2018 04:46

don\'t fight your heart
Unsub said:

Javi,

this an amazing piece of poetry that deserves more attention & also discussion to the well crafted questions spoken.

Really enjoyed this one,

Unsub.

October 17th, 2018 10:50

don\'t fight your heart
Alex said:

I really enjoyed that, really brings the images to life in my head thanks

October 12th, 2018 18:04

love you in silence
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Such lovely words of love. Maybe one day she\'ll be able to read your mind. :)

Nicely done!

September 24th, 2018 13:27

My dreams vanish
Theta the scholar said:

Welcome to MLP i hope you like your stay here, our poem is gloomy & sad but i rather find that the unpleasant parts in life are the most pleasant for builds character in us and we learn and grow from it. Keep writing for it keeps us from going mad- Theta the scholar

September 21st, 2018 12:15

My dreams vanish
Mene said:

Quite melancholic but strong rhythm and the rhyme scheme was interesting. This is a great write, so powerful, I could feel the emotion. Keep up thee great work. ^^
~Jinxy

September 21st, 2018 11:43

My dreams vanish
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HOLA AMIGO ~ Bienvenidos a MPS. Gracias pot tu proma POEMA ~ muy melancolca ! Your poem is well crafted full of rhyme & rhythm ! Often in life our Dreams vanish ~ our promises die and the bells of love fade in the wind ! Our HOPES become HOLES ~ so so sad ! Both ANGELA (30) and I (35) have had our share of disappointments but we are happy now together ! Esta un Dios ! Every Blessing BRIAN & ANGELA. Quel Ciudad d\'Espana habites tu ?

September 21st, 2018 11:03