Comments received on poems by mumiza
sunday lunch
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wow excellent!
Takes me back to when the lunch wasn\'t served ntil after the pubs kicked everyone out.
Nervous times nicely explored great write
October 8th, 2018 09:22
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wow excellent!
Takes me back to when the lunch wasn\'t served ntil after the pubs kicked everyone out.
Nervous times nicely explored great write
October 8th, 2018 09:22
The Barge
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD EVENING MUMIZA (Great name !) WELCOME to MPS. You will find iy a challenging and heterogeneous site ~ all Human life is here ! Thanks for your First Poem ~ Indeed a poem of two halves !
VERSE 1. Very well written account of the positive aspects of a Barge Holiday ~ bankable memories. Angela & I love all craft but especially sailing !
VERSE 2. The idyllic spell is shattered ! Attacks ~ Apologies ~ Beery onslaughts (what happened to the Boys ?) Grief of a \"Memory not banked\" Thanks for sharing ~ more Poems please ~ Yours BRIAN. MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ OK. You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends.
October 7th, 2018 16:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD EVENING MUMIZA (Great name !) WELCOME to MPS. You will find iy a challenging and heterogeneous site ~ all Human life is here ! Thanks for your First Poem ~ Indeed a poem of two halves !
VERSE 1. Very well written account of the positive aspects of a Barge Holiday ~ bankable memories. Angela & I love all craft but especially sailing !
VERSE 2. The idyllic spell is shattered ! Attacks ~ Apologies ~ Beery onslaughts (what happened to the Boys ?) Grief of a \"Memory not banked\" Thanks for sharing ~ more Poems please ~ Yours BRIAN. MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ OK. You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends.
October 7th, 2018 16:52
The Barge
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Disaster at sea! How well you\'ve trumpeted sun and happiness in one moment and destruction and sadness in the next. Your poem expresses the ups and downs we all endure in this life. Great read and thanks for sharing. :)
October 7th, 2018 16:44
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Disaster at sea! How well you\'ve trumpeted sun and happiness in one moment and destruction and sadness in the next. Your poem expresses the ups and downs we all endure in this life. Great read and thanks for sharing. :)
October 7th, 2018 16:44
The Barge
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
How quickly dreams and lives are shattered
Great write
Thank you
October 7th, 2018 16:31
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
How quickly dreams and lives are shattered
Great write
Thank you
October 7th, 2018 16:31
