Comments received on poems by mumiza
walking
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has deep meaning and is well planned and constructed. The build up is reinforced in the finish that gives it all meaning. Each step one of greater understanding and the repetition of the line gives it power. Loved it a fave
November 14th, 2025 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem has deep meaning and is well planned and constructed. The build up is reinforced in the finish that gives it all meaning. Each step one of greater understanding and the repetition of the line gives it power. Loved it a fave
November 14th, 2025 04:29
Driving
sorenbarrett said:
The road hardly the place to let pride or temper get the best of one. A harrowing poem
November 13th, 2025 13:44
sorenbarrett said:
The road hardly the place to let pride or temper get the best of one. A harrowing poem
November 13th, 2025 13:44
shrinking
mumiza said:
Thank you. A mess of feelings coming to the surface!
November 10th, 2025 08:18
mumiza said:
Thank you. A mess of feelings coming to the surface!
November 10th, 2025 08:18
shrinking
sorenbarrett said:
Running in second place is not an easy position but it can be a good strategy in a race to come on strong at the end and finish first. A good write
November 10th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Running in second place is not an easy position but it can be a good strategy in a race to come on strong at the end and finish first. A good write
November 10th, 2025 08:15
The ring
sorenbarrett said:
This one has me puzzled just when I think I\'ve got it, it slips away. Nicely done
November 9th, 2025 12:56
sorenbarrett said:
This one has me puzzled just when I think I\'ve got it, it slips away. Nicely done
November 9th, 2025 12:56
sunday lunch
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wow excellent!
Takes me back to when the lunch wasn\'t served ntil after the pubs kicked everyone out.
Nervous times nicely explored great write
October 8th, 2018 09:22
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Wow excellent!
Takes me back to when the lunch wasn\'t served ntil after the pubs kicked everyone out.
Nervous times nicely explored great write
October 8th, 2018 09:22
The Barge
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD EVENING MUMIZA (Great name !) WELCOME to MPS. You will find iy a challenging and heterogeneous site ~ all Human life is here ! Thanks for your First Poem ~ Indeed a poem of two halves !
VERSE 1. Very well written account of the positive aspects of a Barge Holiday ~ bankable memories. Angela & I love all craft but especially sailing !
VERSE 2. The idyllic spell is shattered ! Attacks ~ Apologies ~ Beery onslaughts (what happened to the Boys ?) Grief of a \"Memory not banked\" Thanks for sharing ~ more Poems please ~ Yours BRIAN. MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ OK. You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends.
October 7th, 2018 16:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD EVENING MUMIZA (Great name !) WELCOME to MPS. You will find iy a challenging and heterogeneous site ~ all Human life is here ! Thanks for your First Poem ~ Indeed a poem of two halves !
VERSE 1. Very well written account of the positive aspects of a Barge Holiday ~ bankable memories. Angela & I love all craft but especially sailing !
VERSE 2. The idyllic spell is shattered ! Attacks ~ Apologies ~ Beery onslaughts (what happened to the Boys ?) Grief of a \"Memory not banked\" Thanks for sharing ~ more Poems please ~ Yours BRIAN. MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ OK. You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends.
October 7th, 2018 16:52
The Barge
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Disaster at sea! How well you\'ve trumpeted sun and happiness in one moment and destruction and sadness in the next. Your poem expresses the ups and downs we all endure in this life. Great read and thanks for sharing. :)
October 7th, 2018 16:44
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Disaster at sea! How well you\'ve trumpeted sun and happiness in one moment and destruction and sadness in the next. Your poem expresses the ups and downs we all endure in this life. Great read and thanks for sharing. :)
October 7th, 2018 16:44
The Barge
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
How quickly dreams and lives are shattered
Great write
Thank you
October 7th, 2018 16:31
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
How quickly dreams and lives are shattered
Great write
Thank you
October 7th, 2018 16:31
