Comments received on poems by Shallsea



“I AM THE MOON” 🌙
FredPeyer said:

\'...tasting each chakra as its prey...\'
You do have a beautiful way with words Shallsea. I truly enjoyed your poem!

November 5th, 2019 11:03

“THE CONJURING OF THOTH”
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW SHALLSEA ~ That sure is some POEM ~ Im still digesting it ! I wont divulge and I await for more ! Yours as always BRIAN 😎 Please check our Poem today on HAPPINESS ~ Thanks B ! I love the MOON so I am interested in THOTH who is a two headed ancient Egyptian MOON GOD ~ OK

November 1st, 2018 15:22

“RAISING THE VEIL”
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Great job, Shallsea. I particularly liked the phrase, that is so true, \"humans tend to need labels in order to understand...\"

This is a sad commentary on the human race, but it is so true.

Keep us abreast of your spiritual journey. :-)

October 31st, 2018 15:15

“RAISING THE VEIL”
Joe Dawson said:

Ah, a journey of the most complex kind. A damn good read if I may say so. Joe

October 28th, 2018 13:45

“MESSENGER OF DEATH” ☠️🔮👁
orchidee said:

Oohh I dunno, I may be weird enough already! heehee.

October 27th, 2018 01:27

\"INCARNATION OF GOD N SATAN\"
Shallsea said:

Thanks for the read!!

October 26th, 2018 11:15

\"INCARNATION OF GOD N SATAN\"
Jamie said:

That was fun, good flow!

October 26th, 2018 10:57

DIVINE THREE PT 2
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.. Read part 1 and 2 all in a row, your words are still Sinking in but I feel many seeds I\'ll grow. Thank you for your flow!

October 21st, 2018 03:33

DIVINE THREE PT 2
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

What great insight you have, Shallsea. I particularly liked your \"111\" trinity. The Lord always has a way of connecting with us.

God may be steering your hand into the \"divine new direction.\"

Loved your words and the images you\'ve intertwined in your poem.

Thanks for posting. :)



October 20th, 2018 19:09

DIVINE THREE Pt 1
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Your poem is filled with the questions that only you can answer. As the reader I am watching you, through images you\'ve included in your poem, take this journey.

Nicely done.

Look forward to the next chapter. :)





October 20th, 2018 10:53

DIVINE THREE Pt 1
ForeverJesus6 said:

You have a nice use of words. Maybe I am wrong. It sounds as though you are searching for answers. The only way to truly be free is through Christ Jesus the son of the true living God. I hope that you find what you need.
Jesus saves.
Persistence is key

October 20th, 2018 10:21

DIVINE THREE Pt 1
ForeverJesus6 said:

You have a nice use of words. Maybe I am wrong. It sounds as though you are searching for answers. The only way to truly be free is through Christ Jesus the son of the true living God. I hope that you find what you need.
Jesus saves.
Persistence is key

October 20th, 2018 10:21

DIVINE THREE Pt 1
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME SHALLSEA ~ Thanks for your first EPIC Poem ! I t is beautiful & profound ~ overflowing with questions & rhymes & rhythms and it recites POWERFULLY non-stop like a RAP !
Reading between its many lines I came up with following comments ! 1. We are all seeking for spiritual understanding ~ there is a GOD how can we know Him ? 2. YES ~ When GOD speaks to US it is like sweet music in our ears ! YES GOD can change US and our circumstances ! 3. TRUTH is only hid from those who choose not to believe. When we SEEK GOD He reveals His Truth ~ AMEN 4. Those that come to GOD must believe that He exists and that He will reward those that seek Him ! Never hold back in your search to know Him !
Looking forward to Parts 2 & 3. Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check our site which I share with my Fiancee ANGELA ~ who is in New Zealand on Work Experience. Thanks B & A !

October 20th, 2018 07:39