Comments received on poems by lonely poet
Journey
sylviasearcher said:
I think I have walked this journey too.
Where it all began, alone with the thoughts of my own soul
November 13th, 2018 07:56
sylviasearcher said:
I think I have walked this journey too.
Where it all began, alone with the thoughts of my own soul
November 13th, 2018 07:56
Ripples
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ripples go on forever and each ripple is a moment in our lives and every moment is important.
Welcome to MPS.
November 13th, 2018 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ripples go on forever and each ripple is a moment in our lives and every moment is important.
Welcome to MPS.
November 13th, 2018 01:19
Ripples
lonely poet said:
I am touched to have your comments, thank you. I am glad if my poem brought some good memories to share. I look forward to reading from both of you.
November 12th, 2018 15:27
lonely poet said:
I am touched to have your comments, thank you. I am glad if my poem brought some good memories to share. I look forward to reading from both of you.
November 12th, 2018 15:27
Ripples
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TO MPS FRIEND ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem with an exposition of the Ripple Effect. At the weekend I stayed in a Hostel and in the grounds there was a little lake with an ugly bent pipe issuing a meagre trickle of water into the lake. BUT ~ that ugly pipe & trickle produced the most beautiful circular widening ripple pattern which had just sufficient energy to reach the circumference ! There were obstacles in the pond and as a ripple struck them it created secondary wave patterns. It ran day & night and at night (due to the security lights) it did resemble a thousand twinkling stars ! That experience and Your Poem reminded me that life is like a Ripple Tank and as Faith ~ Hope ~ Love strike the surface of our lives it produces ripples which bounce of on to others producing continual (day & night) Love ~ Peace ~ Joy ! Your poem (like the ripples) is infinite. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). I share my site with My Fiance ANGELA. Please check our Poems ~ Thanks B ! MPS works by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK !
November 12th, 2018 14:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TO MPS FRIEND ~ Thanks for an excellent first poem with an exposition of the Ripple Effect. At the weekend I stayed in a Hostel and in the grounds there was a little lake with an ugly bent pipe issuing a meagre trickle of water into the lake. BUT ~ that ugly pipe & trickle produced the most beautiful circular widening ripple pattern which had just sufficient energy to reach the circumference ! There were obstacles in the pond and as a ripple struck them it created secondary wave patterns. It ran day & night and at night (due to the security lights) it did resemble a thousand twinkling stars ! That experience and Your Poem reminded me that life is like a Ripple Tank and as Faith ~ Hope ~ Love strike the surface of our lives it produces ripples which bounce of on to others producing continual (day & night) Love ~ Peace ~ Joy ! Your poem (like the ripples) is infinite. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). I share my site with My Fiance ANGELA. Please check our Poems ~ Thanks B ! MPS works by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK !
November 12th, 2018 14:47
