Comments received on poems by jackeggz
hurt
L. B. Mek said:
searching words of purposed self-reflection,
worded so accessibly relatable
thanks for sharing
March 19th, 2021 06:17
L. B. Mek said:
searching words of purposed self-reflection,
worded so accessibly relatable
thanks for sharing
March 19th, 2021 06:17
hurt
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe one day in the future you will be able to mend them and laugh with them.
Andy
March 19th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe one day in the future you will be able to mend them and laugh with them.
Andy
March 19th, 2021 01:47
hurt
Loner poet said:
I like this, although its short it has meaning. well done.
March 19th, 2021 01:44
Loner poet said:
I like this, although its short it has meaning. well done.
March 19th, 2021 01:44
love
dusk arising said:
Great piece. Brought back so many occasions of pleasure to this wrinkly mind.
March 13th, 2021 14:13
dusk arising said:
Great piece. Brought back so many occasions of pleasure to this wrinkly mind.
March 13th, 2021 14:13
Water
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is a dark poem JE. However I think a lot of thought went into it. I hope that you are OK.
Ex animo, Alan
November 23rd, 2020 16:46
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is a dark poem JE. However I think a lot of thought went into it. I hope that you are OK.
Ex animo, Alan
November 23rd, 2020 16:46
vacations
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A happy day on the beach JE. Well done.
Ex animo, Alan
November 23rd, 2020 16:42
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A happy day on the beach JE. Well done.
Ex animo, Alan
November 23rd, 2020 16:42
vacations
L. B. Mek said:
like your quirky flow and the lack of punctuation works well
November 19th, 2020 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
like your quirky flow and the lack of punctuation works well
November 19th, 2020 04:45
vacations
Clara said:
Lovely little poem here. Nice rhyme to it. Good work.
November 18th, 2020 19:14
Clara said:
Lovely little poem here. Nice rhyme to it. Good work.
November 18th, 2020 19:14
i’ve come to realize
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good to see you posting again jackeggz. A clever little poem ~ I realize that.
Ex animo, Alan
August 15th, 2020 17:11
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good to see you posting again jackeggz. A clever little poem ~ I realize that.
Ex animo, Alan
August 15th, 2020 17:11
i’ve come to realize
MendedFences27 said:
You are the standard others must meet, not the other way around.
Before you can love anyone you must first love yourself.
Every person on the planet is different. no two are the same, do not try to put them into categories.
With more than two people in a room, they will agree on nothing.
O.K. now I\'ve said my piece. let me say something about your poem.
You put forth a lot of self acquired wisdom in this poem. Hold on to that. Never let it go. The emotion you were feeling when you wrote this comes through in your words. That is a writers talent. So, keep writing. Try different subjects, different forms. play with words for fun. Above all keep writing. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2020 10:43
MendedFences27 said:
You are the standard others must meet, not the other way around.
Before you can love anyone you must first love yourself.
Every person on the planet is different. no two are the same, do not try to put them into categories.
With more than two people in a room, they will agree on nothing.
O.K. now I\'ve said my piece. let me say something about your poem.
You put forth a lot of self acquired wisdom in this poem. Hold on to that. Never let it go. The emotion you were feeling when you wrote this comes through in your words. That is a writers talent. So, keep writing. Try different subjects, different forms. play with words for fun. Above all keep writing. - Phil A.
August 12th, 2020 10:43
i’ve come to realize
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true and wise words, may they be true for you throughout your life.
August 12th, 2020 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true and wise words, may they be true for you throughout your life.
August 12th, 2020 00:58
Trama
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Great message to others Jack. In this poem the narrator is very strong indeed. Also quite wise I think.
Well done again ma\'am and a very happy birthday on Saturday.
Ex animo, Alan
March 27th, 2020 02:03
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Great message to others Jack. In this poem the narrator is very strong indeed. Also quite wise I think.
Well done again ma\'am and a very happy birthday on Saturday.
Ex animo, Alan
March 27th, 2020 02:03
Little girls like me
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A strong poem from a strong person Jack.
I hope that all is well with you.
Es animo, Alan
March 7th, 2020 06:50
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A strong poem from a strong person Jack.
I hope that all is well with you.
Es animo, Alan
March 7th, 2020 06:50
Little girls like me
Clara said:
This is really good... A true story and a sad remember of how it used to be and how it is now. Written beautifully nonetheless.
March 7th, 2020 04:10
Clara said:
This is really good... A true story and a sad remember of how it used to be and how it is now. Written beautifully nonetheless.
March 7th, 2020 04:10
Starts with K
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is an interesting piece Jack. Indeed, everything has to start somewhere.
\'What we call the beginning is often the end. And to make an end is to make a beginning. The end is where we start from\'. ~ T.S. Eliot (from \'Little Gidding\').
Ex animo, Alan
February 28th, 2020 01:07
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is an interesting piece Jack. Indeed, everything has to start somewhere.
\'What we call the beginning is often the end. And to make an end is to make a beginning. The end is where we start from\'. ~ T.S. Eliot (from \'Little Gidding\').
Ex animo, Alan
February 28th, 2020 01:07
Him
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good rhyming poem Jack. I hope that you like it yourself.
Sounds like quite a guy! Have a good day on Friday.
Ex animo, alan
February 12th, 2020 02:05
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good rhyming poem Jack. I hope that you like it yourself.
Sounds like quite a guy! Have a good day on Friday.
Ex animo, alan
February 12th, 2020 02:05
That person
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Another really good poem Jack. You must keep writing pieces like this.
It is a delight to read with well chosen words.
Ex animo, Alan
February 11th, 2020 15:16
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Another really good poem Jack. You must keep writing pieces like this.
It is a delight to read with well chosen words.
Ex animo, Alan
February 11th, 2020 15:16
That person
Vacancy said:
Very sweet poem. I enjoyed reading it, made me smile.
February 11th, 2020 00:07
Vacancy said:
Very sweet poem. I enjoyed reading it, made me smile.
February 11th, 2020 00:07
Midnight light
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is very atmospheric Jack. I wonder if it should read \'and how your cheek[s] get rosy\'.
Well done.
Ex animo, Alan
February 6th, 2020 15:08
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is very atmospheric Jack. I wonder if it should read \'and how your cheek[s] get rosy\'.
Well done.
Ex animo, Alan
February 6th, 2020 15:08
Peaceful
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Sorry it\'s not the worst either Jack. Keep writing \'em like this and you can only get better. This is an enjoyable read.
Ex animo, Alan
January 30th, 2020 01:55
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Sorry it\'s not the worst either Jack. Keep writing \'em like this and you can only get better. This is an enjoyable read.
Ex animo, Alan
January 30th, 2020 01:55
It’s okay
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A nice little sexain Jack. I can see that you have thought about this.
I think the length of this piece is alright, you can always add to it later if you choose to.
It\'s....okay
Ex animo, Alan
January 29th, 2020 01:52
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
A nice little sexain Jack. I can see that you have thought about this.
I think the length of this piece is alright, you can always add to it later if you choose to.
It\'s....okay
Ex animo, Alan
January 29th, 2020 01:52
Ocean breeze- Paint Chip Poem
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a free-style poem Jack - your linguistic talent brings the beach and sea to lif. Fine imagery too. I have save this little gem to read over again.......... thank you for sharing your gift for words.
January 27th, 2020 11:10
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream of a free-style poem Jack - your linguistic talent brings the beach and sea to lif. Fine imagery too. I have save this little gem to read over again.......... thank you for sharing your gift for words.
January 27th, 2020 11:10
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