Comments received on poems by jackeggz
Bumps in the road
Fay Slimm. said:
Mature use of rhyme and I like the fun-side of this bit of advice on getting through and moving on. Well done Jack.
January 27th, 2020 06:41
Fay Slimm. said:
Mature use of rhyme and I like the fun-side of this bit of advice on getting through and moving on. Well done Jack.
January 27th, 2020 06:41
There come a day
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a positive vibe comes from this posting - I am glad that I caught your work today Jack. Looking forward to reading more of your poems.
January 27th, 2020 06:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a positive vibe comes from this posting - I am glad that I caught your work today Jack. Looking forward to reading more of your poems.
January 27th, 2020 06:36
Bumps in the road
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good, good, good Jack. Folks are gonna like this. Rhyming is clever and makes you feel good ~ Oh yes you already know that.
Ex animo, Alan
January 27th, 2020 06:29
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good, good, good Jack. Folks are gonna like this. Rhyming is clever and makes you feel good ~ Oh yes you already know that.
Ex animo, Alan
January 27th, 2020 06:29
Bumps in the road
Rainbow said:
i like your rhyming in this poem and the way it flows
January 27th, 2020 03:30
Rainbow said:
i like your rhyming in this poem and the way it flows
January 27th, 2020 03:30
Screams
dusk arising said:
Silent screams are most perceived by those who have screamed so silently loud in their own past.
Many a poet is still screaming silently loud on these mps pages.
January 25th, 2020 05:10
dusk arising said:
Silent screams are most perceived by those who have screamed so silently loud in their own past.
Many a poet is still screaming silently loud on these mps pages.
January 25th, 2020 05:10
Screams
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
The words of your poem do resonate for miles jack. I can hear them from here.
Ex animo, Alan
January 24th, 2020 20:01
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
The words of your poem do resonate for miles jack. I can hear them from here.
Ex animo, Alan
January 24th, 2020 20:01
There come a day
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good nine liner here Jack, not before time though, it\'s nearly a month since you last posted. As LG says others may need your inspiration ~ more than you think. Writing poetry is a huge responsibility but we believe that you can handle that just fine. Can\'t wait till you\'re telling me where I\'m going wrong.
p.s. Glad you traded your profile pic. for a smiley one, it looks just like yoooooooooo.
Ex animo, Alan
January 24th, 2020 09:27
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Good nine liner here Jack, not before time though, it\'s nearly a month since you last posted. As LG says others may need your inspiration ~ more than you think. Writing poetry is a huge responsibility but we believe that you can handle that just fine. Can\'t wait till you\'re telling me where I\'m going wrong.
p.s. Glad you traded your profile pic. for a smiley one, it looks just like yoooooooooo.
Ex animo, Alan
January 24th, 2020 09:27
Ocean breeze- Paint Chip Poem
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Jackeggz ~ This poem is stunning. Only just gotten round to looking at it but wish I\'d seen it sooner.
Kind regards, Alan
January 22nd, 2020 17:57
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
Jackeggz ~ This poem is stunning. Only just gotten round to looking at it but wish I\'d seen it sooner.
Kind regards, Alan
January 22nd, 2020 17:57
Pieces
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I have to say there is no floor
If you\'re not strong then try some more!
You\'re much too young to fall apart
So make yourself a brand new start.
Life ain\'t crazy ~ never was
Life is good and here\'s because;
If a million problems you rescind
You\'ll cast the pieces to the wind.
ASJ 2019 (but only just)
The only thing in the world that\'s crazy are people who think that YOOOO are CRAZY.
Kind regards from Yorkshire, England, jackeggz ~ Alan
December 29th, 2019 18:30
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I have to say there is no floor
If you\'re not strong then try some more!
You\'re much too young to fall apart
So make yourself a brand new start.
Life ain\'t crazy ~ never was
Life is good and here\'s because;
If a million problems you rescind
You\'ll cast the pieces to the wind.
ASJ 2019 (but only just)
The only thing in the world that\'s crazy are people who think that YOOOO are CRAZY.
Kind regards from Yorkshire, England, jackeggz ~ Alan
December 29th, 2019 18:30
Shine bright
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is more like it jackeggz!
Iowa, USA, is closer to Yorkshire, England that you think.
You made me happy............
Kind regards, Alan
December 16th, 2019 08:06
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
This is more like it jackeggz!
Iowa, USA, is closer to Yorkshire, England that you think.
You made me happy............
Kind regards, Alan
December 16th, 2019 08:06
Fall leaves
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I wish you hadn\'t writ this,
When you are just thirteen;
You don\'t, at your age, writ things ~
Writ things that you don\'t mean!
It must have been downpouring,
Written in the rain;
But when the stormy gales are gone
The sun comes out again.
ASJ ~ 2019
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Poetry is a thing that happens when you have so much to say but no one to say it to...... ASJ ~ (a long time ago)
Tearfully but with kindest regards from Yorkshire, England.....Alan
December 14th, 2019 11:58
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I wish you hadn\'t writ this,
When you are just thirteen;
You don\'t, at your age, writ things ~
Writ things that you don\'t mean!
It must have been downpouring,
Written in the rain;
But when the stormy gales are gone
The sun comes out again.
ASJ ~ 2019
************
Poetry is a thing that happens when you have so much to say but no one to say it to...... ASJ ~ (a long time ago)
Tearfully but with kindest regards from Yorkshire, England.....Alan
December 14th, 2019 11:58
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