Comments received on poems by siranswerer
#Belfast
BoxMyHeart said:
I had to laugh at the end.
I see that nothings fixed!!! Haha, brilliant.
December 28th, 2022 18:05
BoxMyHeart said:
I had to laugh at the end.
I see that nothings fixed!!! Haha, brilliant.
December 28th, 2022 18:05
just friends
lalalaEulalie said:
I still dream of old lovers... I\'m married so I always feel a bit guilty. I try to push away any thoughts of tender affection, as they cause grief between my husband and I. I enjoy the encounters, and though I\'m not always sure why they visited my dreams, I take the opportunity to send a prayer up to God on their behalf. Then I let it fade, and do my best to forget.
Your poems are always very moving and speak to my own experience. I enjoy them very much! Many thanks! 🌹
-Lolly
July 23rd, 2022 22:52
lalalaEulalie said:
I still dream of old lovers... I\'m married so I always feel a bit guilty. I try to push away any thoughts of tender affection, as they cause grief between my husband and I. I enjoy the encounters, and though I\'m not always sure why they visited my dreams, I take the opportunity to send a prayer up to God on their behalf. Then I let it fade, and do my best to forget.
Your poems are always very moving and speak to my own experience. I enjoy them very much! Many thanks! 🌹
-Lolly
July 23rd, 2022 22:52
little flower
lalalaEulalie said:
My favorite compliment, of all I ever received, was to be called \"like a flower.\" 🌷 Delicate and soft. It warmed, and warms, my heart. What a special little poem.
July 21st, 2022 11:13
lalalaEulalie said:
My favorite compliment, of all I ever received, was to be called \"like a flower.\" 🌷 Delicate and soft. It warmed, and warms, my heart. What a special little poem.
July 21st, 2022 11:13
devour me
Fay Slimm. said:
A bouquet of inuendoes and written with expert ease - this goes to my list of favourites friend - thank you fior sharing.
July 21st, 2022 06:40
Fay Slimm. said:
A bouquet of inuendoes and written with expert ease - this goes to my list of favourites friend - thank you fior sharing.
July 21st, 2022 06:40
girl with no name
lalalaEulalie said:
Wow. This one hits home. ...If the men I have loved could write poetry. 🤣 I laugh only because it\'s so relatable. It is quite eloquently stated. 💎 💎 💎
July 19th, 2022 10:27
lalalaEulalie said:
Wow. This one hits home. ...If the men I have loved could write poetry. 🤣 I laugh only because it\'s so relatable. It is quite eloquently stated. 💎 💎 💎
July 19th, 2022 10:27
I\'ve been gone a while now.
lalalaEulalie said:
Super relatable. Tragic and lovely. Thank you for sharing this gem. 💎
July 19th, 2022 00:25
lalalaEulalie said:
Super relatable. Tragic and lovely. Thank you for sharing this gem. 💎
July 19th, 2022 00:25
unfiltered bullshit (a senryu)
lalalaEulalie said:
Enjoyable brevity and raw feeling.
Thanks for sharing!
Love. 💕 Joy. 🍕 Peace.✌️
-Eulalie
July 11th, 2022 08:40
lalalaEulalie said:
Enjoyable brevity and raw feeling.
Thanks for sharing!
Love. 💕 Joy. 🍕 Peace.✌️
-Eulalie
July 11th, 2022 08:40
te quiero
Paul Bell said:
Must admit, I was thinking alcohol too. As long as it keeps the love going strong.
February 6th, 2022 07:23
Paul Bell said:
Must admit, I was thinking alcohol too. As long as it keeps the love going strong.
February 6th, 2022 07:23
but when
Draven said:
Amen to this. Short, sweet and I am in complete agreeance. :)
January 2nd, 2022 10:22
Draven said:
Amen to this. Short, sweet and I am in complete agreeance. :)
January 2nd, 2022 10:22
day of the dead
A.H. Browning said:
My mom’s birthday was November 1st. She passed in 2017.
So I will “eat and drink and laugh and remember... someone who left a mark. “ I appreciate your writing here.
(Funny story… Since my mother’s birthday is November 1st, her younger sister, my aunt, always jokingly told me the witches brought her after Halloween was done)
Cheers.
November 2nd, 2021 20:55
A.H. Browning said:
My mom’s birthday was November 1st. She passed in 2017.
So I will “eat and drink and laugh and remember... someone who left a mark. “ I appreciate your writing here.
(Funny story… Since my mother’s birthday is November 1st, her younger sister, my aunt, always jokingly told me the witches brought her after Halloween was done)
Cheers.
November 2nd, 2021 20:55
memento mori
dusk arising said:
All so true. But what we leave behind is oh so important.
June 30th, 2021 21:46
dusk arising said:
All so true. But what we leave behind is oh so important.
June 30th, 2021 21:46
Fake memories
dusk arising said:
Such thoughts make you the poet that you are and will become.
May 15th, 2021 05:44
dusk arising said:
Such thoughts make you the poet that you are and will become.
May 15th, 2021 05:44
Fake memories
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a theory that there are an infinite number of parallel universes where all possibilities are happening.
Andy
May 15th, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
There is a theory that there are an infinite number of parallel universes where all possibilities are happening.
Andy
May 15th, 2021 00:52
Hometown, in 17 syllables.
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Bit hard to comment on that one, never having been there.
My knowledge of your place is solely through the eyes of Sean Duffy - so I might have just an inkling of what you are on about.
April 21st, 2021 01:11
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Bit hard to comment on that one, never having been there.
My knowledge of your place is solely through the eyes of Sean Duffy - so I might have just an inkling of what you are on about.
April 21st, 2021 01:11
time, a haiku
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
I\'m forever enthralled by language\'s ability to condense and yet simultaneously distil
such a varied cacophony of myopically blinkered human emotions,
allowing readers to connect, attain wider awareness and somehow soothe, at the same time..
thank you for sharing dear poet
March 18th, 2021 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
brilliant!
I\'m forever enthralled by language\'s ability to condense and yet simultaneously distil
such a varied cacophony of myopically blinkered human emotions,
allowing readers to connect, attain wider awareness and somehow soothe, at the same time..
thank you for sharing dear poet
March 18th, 2021 04:45
time, a haiku
Olivia. said:
Really love this! I’m constantly trying to think of a haiku but it’s hasn’t come to me yet. Xxx
March 17th, 2021 19:02
Olivia. said:
Really love this! I’m constantly trying to think of a haiku but it’s hasn’t come to me yet. Xxx
March 17th, 2021 19:02
listening
Goldfinch60 said:
Listening to the rain can be so calming in our world.
Andy
January 16th, 2021 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Listening to the rain can be so calming in our world.
Andy
January 16th, 2021 02:02
A tango
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write siranswerer, that dance can sometime be the only time they are together.
Andy
January 15th, 2021 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write siranswerer, that dance can sometime be the only time they are together.
Andy
January 15th, 2021 01:32
A tango
Doggerel Dave said:
Watching a tango myself, it\'s precisely as you write....
A really good portrait of this dance and it\'s aftermath.
Dave
January 14th, 2021 06:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Watching a tango myself, it\'s precisely as you write....
A really good portrait of this dance and it\'s aftermath.
Dave
January 14th, 2021 06:50
lost skin
L. B. Mek said:
\'I write rhyming exercises,
Nonsensical sentences, strung together.
Threads of flashes of inspiration.
I write to avoid thinking.
Thinking leads to feeling, leads to thoughts and overthinking.
Since I was a child, I pick at skin on my thumbs.
It gets worse with worry, with stress.
Its been a bad year. Everyone has had a bad year.
My thumbs are bad.
I always feel like I\'m floating.
Except when I feel like I\'m drowning.
I smile and laugh in work, make jokes.
I make jokes I shouldn\'t, and I overthink it.
I lost any filter for words a long time ago.
They spill from my mouth, into dead silence.
They spill from my thumbs, onto a too bright screen.
My thumbs are bad.\'
us scribbler\'s never know how to simplify our write\'s, sadly that means those that don\'t pay close attention - miss out, on the wonderful nuggets we burry beneath our excess, still my fellow enthusiast we live and learn,
thank you for sharing a wonderfully raw and moving read
December 3rd, 2020 06:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'I write rhyming exercises,
Nonsensical sentences, strung together.
Threads of flashes of inspiration.
I write to avoid thinking.
Thinking leads to feeling, leads to thoughts and overthinking.
Since I was a child, I pick at skin on my thumbs.
It gets worse with worry, with stress.
Its been a bad year. Everyone has had a bad year.
My thumbs are bad.
I always feel like I\'m floating.
Except when I feel like I\'m drowning.
I smile and laugh in work, make jokes.
I make jokes I shouldn\'t, and I overthink it.
I lost any filter for words a long time ago.
They spill from my mouth, into dead silence.
They spill from my thumbs, onto a too bright screen.
My thumbs are bad.\'
us scribbler\'s never know how to simplify our write\'s, sadly that means those that don\'t pay close attention - miss out, on the wonderful nuggets we burry beneath our excess, still my fellow enthusiast we live and learn,
thank you for sharing a wonderfully raw and moving read
December 3rd, 2020 06:01
little flower
Goldfinch60 said:
That wonder is within you and comes out in your words.
Andy
October 29th, 2020 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
That wonder is within you and comes out in your words.
Andy
October 29th, 2020 01:55
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