Comments received on poems by siranswerer



a colour of magic
Goldfinch60 said:

That realm from beyond fills your mind with dreams and dreams can come true.

Andy

October 3rd, 2020 00:18

just friends
Trenz Pruca said:

I like it

September 12th, 2020 16:29

just friends
MelissaJA said:

Reading this made me feel like I was the one questioning someone\'s intent.

September 11th, 2020 23:07

Can\'t sleep
Goldfinch60 said:

May she always be there for you.

Andy

September 4th, 2020 00:08

Esperanza. Amor. Muerte.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA AQUI - Hola SIRAN - como esta? Gracias por esta Poema!

HOPE is always CONDITIONAL
LOVE is always ephemeral - BUT
DEATH is always inevitable

Perhaps the question should be *What happens after DEATH?* Is it A. *Oblivion* as the Majority hope! or B. Will we have to gave an *Account* of how well we used Our individual Gift of Life ? There may not be a choice between A & B but one day Each of us will find out!

Thanks for making us all think
Amor - Alegria y Paz
Angela y Brian ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™

September 2nd, 2020 09:33

Esperanza. Amor. Muerte.
dusk arising said:

One is a definite. The other two optional.

September 2nd, 2020 07:22

lost
MelissaJA said:

I am so sorry for whatever inspired this

September 1st, 2020 21:38

damned alarm
dusk arising said:

Yep, all too often my alarm clock has ruined some of the best things that ever happened to me.... my dreams.

August 24th, 2020 15:52

my reflection
L. B. Mek said:

a measured and understated work of self-reflection, genuinely capturing universally shared introspective moments in our daily lives, the key: is finding \'our way around\'
liked the positivity, wise words Sir

August 15th, 2020 06:44

Irene Dinsmore
BoxMyHeart said:

Bold move, well played.

July 22nd, 2020 15:12

ethereal
Goldfinch60 said:

The words show the love within you.

June 30th, 2020 23:56

Forgotten
benevolentbluebabe said:

This is beautiful :)

June 24th, 2020 09:57

sleep fleeting
JustABird said:

This is really good. You have a way with words. I can feel the need.

May 19th, 2020 00:50

together ?
Goldfinch60 said:

I am sure that with your words you will never be alone.

May 16th, 2020 00:49

balance
dusk arising said:

Gosh, and you look so human too.

April 14th, 2020 18:46

balance
BoxMyHeart said:

Practicing your Haiku? x

April 14th, 2020 15:44

one breath
Goldfinch60 said:

Good senryu.

April 4th, 2020 00:15

here and now
dusk arising said:

A woman or a cat? They\'re so damned similar.

Thank you for getting the juices of my memories oiling my smile as i re-read your words.

March 26th, 2020 03:42

dreaming
BoxMyHeart said:

Nice (Y)

December 19th, 2019 13:54

history, in the style of Haiku
Goldfinch60 said:

Two good and very true 5-7-5s, I can abide with both of them.

November 1st, 2019 01:28

dreaming
dusk arising said:

Lovely romantic fairy tale poetry.

Lights up fantasy, would like to see more in this genre to be honest.

October 1st, 2019 18:56

I wish you were with me
BoxMyHeart said:

I am thankful for this poem. Hurt anger and pain are tools of the healing. On the way up!

August 8th, 2019 12:31

truth.
Jeff said:

great job here

March 20th, 2019 18:17

truth.
Poetic Dan said:

I know of this, very well done and beautifully sad

March 20th, 2019 09:06

Drowning.
Nicholas Browning said:

Maybe these things come with age, as I know I no longer possess the innocent mind of a child that allowed me to see things in a brighter way.
Best regards, S.

March 19th, 2019 14:23

Drowning.
sylviasearcher said:

Powerful emotive piece.

March 19th, 2019 05:27

memory
Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories can bring us both good and bad feelings but the good always override the bad.

February 9th, 2019 01:12

memory
dusk arising said:

Excellent, that\'s just how certain memories and loss haunt us, an feel the angst in this too.

February 8th, 2019 07:39

memory
Lorna said:

Loving this.

February 8th, 2019 06:38

Morte. The Golem.
psychofemale said:

such a great rhymer, you have a way with words :)

February 7th, 2019 20:34

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