Comments received on poems by Hedy
Cliff
MendedFences27 said:
It is a dangerous edge upon which an artist such as yourself must walk. A struggle between love of the arts and the reality of life, hoping for recognition, while trying to survive. I love the construct of your poem (like a cliff) . The closing lines are a bit frightening.
Everything you said is true, we all know it, yet naught gets done to fix it. keep strong - Phil A.
April 6th, 2020 22:13
MendedFences27 said:
It is a dangerous edge upon which an artist such as yourself must walk. A struggle between love of the arts and the reality of life, hoping for recognition, while trying to survive. I love the construct of your poem (like a cliff) . The closing lines are a bit frightening.
Everything you said is true, we all know it, yet naught gets done to fix it. keep strong - Phil A.
April 6th, 2020 22:13
Cliff
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, society is taking us to the edge of that cliff, if those in charge cared they would care for the people who put them in power.
March 27th, 2019 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, society is taking us to the edge of that cliff, if those in charge cared they would care for the people who put them in power.
March 27th, 2019 01:09
Cliff
dusk arising said:
Beautifully expressed the lust for freedom from this ludicrous society and existence into which we are born and paddle through holding onto hopes and dreams ever thwarted by reality we despise.
Beautiful writing and goes to my favourites.
March 26th, 2019 20:15
dusk arising said:
Beautifully expressed the lust for freedom from this ludicrous society and existence into which we are born and paddle through holding onto hopes and dreams ever thwarted by reality we despise.
Beautiful writing and goes to my favourites.
March 26th, 2019 20:15
Daydream
Nicholas Browning said:
Always the wonder of creativity.
Nice message.
March 17th, 2019 02:38
Nicholas Browning said:
Always the wonder of creativity.
Nice message.
March 17th, 2019 02:38
View: The Living Room Window, and Birds
SerenWise said:
Very endearing and creatively written :)
March 4th, 2019 17:59
SerenWise said:
Very endearing and creatively written :)
March 4th, 2019 17:59
Iconic
Goddess of the Mist said:
Interesting concept, and I like the imagery. And the idea of what the icon is actually worth...
March 2nd, 2019 23:45
Goddess of the Mist said:
Interesting concept, and I like the imagery. And the idea of what the icon is actually worth...
March 2nd, 2019 23:45
New Skin (aka Transportation)
SerenWise said:
Very nicely written piece, good rhythm
March 1st, 2019 17:27
SerenWise said:
Very nicely written piece, good rhythm
March 1st, 2019 17:27
