Comments received on poems by Nafis Light



An Unused Side โ€“ Strangers In Life
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I really like this poem. just the words and the tone of this poem .. makes for a great read ! )

we will never get to truly know half of the \' strangers \' we meet but lucky when we make a friend out of one of them .

i sometimes say random things to people .. say if i am in a shop in a queue or at a bus stop etc... its nice to just stop smile at someone and make small conversation.

November 27th, 2019 01:12

An Unused Side โ€“ Brian and Angela
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS FOR YOUR TRIBUTE J44 ! We often go to FANCY DRESS PARTIES as famous MF duos Samson & Delila ~ Sonny & Cher ~ Charles & Camilla etc ! Dressing as Holmes & Watson would be a new Depature ~ thnaks for the IDEA ! We do try to be Encouragers ~ especially for NEW MEMBERS. We really do our best ~ through POETRY & PURPOSE to support MPS amd ALL its MEMBERS ~ OK

Blessings & Peace & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

November 26th, 2019 03:59

An Unused Side โ€“ Brian and Angela
orchidee said:

A fine write J44.

November 26th, 2019 02:53

A Loving Side โ€“ Fountain Falls
orchidee said:

A nice write J44.

November 24th, 2019 08:33

A Loving Side โ€“ Guitars Battle Violins
FredPeyer said:

Great writing and great video, J44!

November 23rd, 2019 13:50

A Loving Side โ€“ Guitars Battle Violins
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing J44 ~ We love BLUE GRASS very evocative of the Wild West ! The Fiddle ~ Banjo ~ Mandolin & Guitar always seem to be in Competition ~ Love the APPALACIANS ! We like the concept of The GUITARS robbing the BANKS & the VIOLINS defending them ! Jango Rheinhard (GUITAR) and Stefan Grapelli (VIOLIN) in the Hot Club De Paris are the ultimate duel between GUITAR & VIOLIN ! Thanks for sharing ! We*re crossing BRIDGES today !

Blessings & PEACE to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN
๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

November 23rd, 2019 05:27

A Loving Side โ€“ Mental, Disorder...and Reorder
Zuzanna Musial said:

There is so much written in your poem. Mental disorder are complex and often times misunderstood. It takes all kind of medicine to try to cure but really seldom is cured. Your poem tells many sides of such hard to manage this disorder. I am often thinking of people who have to live with such illness. You poem is excellent and it make me feel the illness in my heart. You show only some fragments how the illness demonstrates, but really there is much more to it, then this....\"Life...Mess...Unrest;
Wake...Pushed Off...Distress.\"~ Or maybe I am not right in a description, so forgive me...Thank you for posting. Wishing you peace...Zuzanna Musial

November 22nd, 2019 11:51

A Loving Side โ€“ Paradise
Poetic Dan said:

Wow thank you so much for bringing me here, sorry I missed it but its never too late!
Keep being you my friend, your energy transferred into your words is definitely infections.

Thank you for bringing your light for all to see, especially me

Much peace and respect

November 22nd, 2019 07:36

A Loving Side โ€“ Mental, Disorder...and Reorder
Poetic Dan said:

Loved the ending to this!

November 22nd, 2019 07:24

A Loving Side โ€“ Paradise
orchidee said:

A fine write J44. I might not always see the \'joking\' in certain things of life, but better to be that I think, than to see doomy-gloom in everything!

November 21st, 2019 02:49

A Loving Side โ€“ Rock and Bot
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Good morning J44 ! Whenever we got a new gadget or widget ~ and I was trying to get it to work ~ My MUM always said *Have you read the MANUAL ?* Oddly enough ~ for a MAN ~ my DAD (being a newspaper Man) always read the Manual even befor He unpacked the BOX ! His *flat pack* furniture is still standing today ! Have you read the *MANUAL for LIFE* today ? AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™

November 19th, 2019 03:09

A Loving Side โ€“ Smile For Me
orchidee said:

OK, I will - have three! :) :) :)

November 18th, 2019 02:55

A Loving Side โ€“ Like A Flower
orchidee said:

Lovely write J.

November 16th, 2019 13:02

A Loving Side โ€“ Like A Flower
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING J44 ~ A very nice Poem to start the DAY ! Angela & I love poems that celebrate COLOUR ! We love your pairings !
RED = Summer ~ BLUE = Winter ~ PINK = Love ~ ORANGE = Autumn ~ PURPLE = Spiritual Light !

Thanks for Sharing
Please check THE PLANETS - Thanks

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™

November 16th, 2019 06:32

A Loving Side โ€“ Like A Flower
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

A very nice poem to read at the beggining of a new day. I enjoyed this piece.

Kind regards, Alan

November 16th, 2019 02:42

A Loving Side โ€“ Heavenly Tears
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing J44 an excellent ODE we have saved it as a FAVE ! Five balanced TRIPLETS - giving thanks for the FIVE most important things in LIFE - Trees - Sky - Our Mothers - Fathers & Children and an extended QUARTET for POETS ! POETS who indeed are the Embodiment of their Poetry - AMEN !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
LOVE Angela & Brian ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก
Thanks for saving *DOLDRUMS* as a Fave
Please add a comment - Thanks A & B !


November 15th, 2019 05:55

A Loving Side โ€“ Heavenly Tears
orchidee said:

A fine write J.

November 15th, 2019 02:48

My Laughing Side โ€“ Love The Self
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD AFTERNOON JOKER - ANGELA HERE - Love the MANTRA ! The Good Book says:

*We should love our NEIGHBOURS in
the same manner we love ourselves*

In my opinion (as a Paramedic) Self Esteem & Self Worth are two very important traits if we are to be of any use to others in our Community.

It really is the appreciation of the SELF that makes the day !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

November 14th, 2019 09:12

My Laughing Side โ€“ Libera Animam Meam
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING JOKER # It was a full Poem so we both felt it needed a full Comment ! Your comment on LANGUAGES is interesting ! The BRITISH have a love hate relationship with Foreign Languages and most BRITS avoid using the bit they know for fear of sounding silly or being unable to understand if they reply in Italian or whatever. Angela & I are both fluent in Spanish and have qualifications in French - Italian - German and a working knowledge of Portuguese. Pronunciation is the KEY to using ALL these Languages. I fell hopelessly in Love with ANGELA but she is from a Formal Spanish Family (MAMA is English) so I had to arrange to meet Don Pedro De La Plata to formally request Angelas Hand in Marriage ! I am a Classical Guitarist and am familiar with Andalucia where PAPA comes from ! Fortunately may accent is good ~ so when I made my request in my best Castillian Spanish ~ PAPA said ~ SI. MAMA wanted Angela to marry an English Gentleman & PAPA a Caballero so I satisfied them BOTH ! Your poem promted me to (later) post a SONNET in praise of MPS please check when it appears !

Blessings & Peace & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

November 14th, 2019 02:35

My Laughing Side โ€“ Libera Animam Meam
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

WOW J44 ~ This POEM sure was a Classic Marathon ! Over 60 lines and invoking the LATIN in the TITLE and the middle ! We both went to good Schools so we feel LATIN always gives a POEM CLASS !
LIBERA ANIMAM MEAM ~ SAVE MY LIFE ! With respect to the first half of the Poem this is an effective title ! Then in the midle (line 35 ?) we get the second LATIN MANTRA ~ AGE QUOD AGIS ~ WHAT DO YOU DO ? This is an apt description of the second half of the Poem !
ANALYSIS ~ WE have to ~ Know reality ~ Break the surface ~ Question ~ Examine our actions ~ Make MPS work for US ! ~ Do what we do ~ Realise - Laugh - Cry - Win - Keep it all in the pool ~ Walk the path ~ Love - Live - Soar - Roar ~ Give - Gain - Run & MUCH MUCH MORE !
Great POEM it made us examine our own ROLE in MPS ! Basically we are ENCOURAGERS to all especially NEW MEMBERS ! Thanks for sharing !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

November 13th, 2019 17:44

My Laughing Side โ€“ Liberata
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Morning J44 ! Thanks for your Daily Dose of Laughter - very Liberating ! Please check *MY FIRST BICYCLE* and our latest FUSION on TRANSPORT !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿงก

November 12th, 2019 02:34

My Laughing Side โ€“ Destructive Laugh
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

AS THE CACKLING OF
THORNS ~ UNDER A POT
SO IS THE LAUGHTER
OF FOOLS ................. !

Thanks for reminding us J 44 that there is no
sound more hollow than the false laughter
of an UNHAPPY CLOWN

Please check *WE TALK TO THE TREES*
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™

November 10th, 2019 08:56

My Laughing Side โ€“ Destructive Laugh
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

AS THE CACKLING OF
THORNS ~ UNDER A POT
SO IS THE LAUGHTER
OF FOOLS ................. !

Thanks for reminding us J 44 that there is no
sound more hollow than the false laughter
of an UNHAPPY CLOWN

Please check *WE TALK TO THE TREES*
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™

November 10th, 2019 08:56

My Laughing Side โ€“ Destructive Laugh
orchidee said:

I can see how some laughter can be destructive - laughing at other\'s misfortune or calamities. Then it becomes vain and tiresome, but pleases those who would laugh selfishly, sadistically, etc.
A lot of comedy these days is \'so-called\'. I think \'Oh no, another new comedy show on telly\'.

November 10th, 2019 02:40

My Laughing Side โ€“ Laughless
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS FOR SHARING J44 ~ It happens ~ Life moves on ~ and so must WE !!

Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love A & B ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก
Please check PETS ~ HAIKU

November 9th, 2019 09:48

My Laughing Side โ€“ Wasted Laughter
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

LAFF & THE WORLD LAFFS WITH YOU
CRY & YOU CRY ALONE ~ BECAUSE
IN ANY SITUATION ~ HOWEVER DIRE
LAFFTER IS ALWAYS THE BEST MEDICINE !

BRIAN HERE ~ Good Afternoon J44 ~ I agree ~ LAUGHTER
is always a very very precious thing ! When I laugh when Im
on my OWN ~ and I often DO ! I believe ~ because there is
no one to to HEAR IT ~ its not wasted ! It flows through the
atmosphere until it finds a EAR and explodes into it ! I believe
this because I sometimes hear LAUGHTER in my EAR when
nobodys there ! In my esperience A LAFF is never ever wasted !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™
Please check my POEM *CURE FOR OUR MELANCHOLY*

November 8th, 2019 12:19

My Laughing Side โ€“ Wasted Laughter
orchidee said:

Ain\'t no laughter - not much - in some \'comedy\' shows\'. I may have last laughed at one, ohh, about 1975!

November 8th, 2019 02:44

My Laughing Side โ€“ Geek Magic
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

THANKS FOR SHARING J44 ~ Yes we enjoy every type of MAGIC ~ just as long as it is MAGIC ! Please check BONFIRE NIGHT OK ~ THANKS

Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian
๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

November 5th, 2019 09:01

My Laughing Side โ€“ Night
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

YES INDEED J44 ~ When youre Young & in LOVE !

Every KISS is like the first KISS
Every EMBRACE is like the first EMBRACE
Every TOUCH is like the first TOUCH
Evert TIME really is like THE FIRST TIME ~ AMEN

Thnaks for carin* an sharin*
We*re back on line ~ please check
*GIVE EARTH A CHANCE* ~ Thanks

Blessings to You & Yours
LOVE BRIAN & ANGELA
๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™


November 4th, 2019 02:38

My Laughing Side โ€“ Comic Magicians
FineB said:

Hello JOKER44,

A magician an interesting profession/ comic magician.

I never came across throughout my school days something wanting to be a magician let alone a comic one!

A good write

Keep writing FineB

November 3rd, 2019 14:20



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