Comments received on poems by Nafis Light



My White Side - All Aboard
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI J44 - Angela here - Thanks for sharing - Love the CHRONO-CROSS - It accentuates th flow of the ODE ! To me it read like a (CON)FUSION so here is my Contubution - Hope you like it !

Swinging Hips
Straining Zips
Disco clips
Fish an* Chips
Take a dips
Hot Jacuzzi
Nice to share
Like a liquid Easy Chair
Chocolate eclaire
And your Purple Hair
I KNOW - I was THERE !

Thanks for sharing - Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘-


December 22nd, 2019 10:47

My White Side - All Aboard
Nicholas Browning said:

This is nice. Enjoyed :p

December 22nd, 2019 10:11

My White Side - Sealed Fate...By Fate
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD EVENING J44 ~ Love the intriguing CHRONOS Sound Tracks ~ they mirror the ambiguity of your Poems ! Thanks for sharing !

CAGED ~ much decided by FATE
FLOW ~ thriugh Actions & decisions
BROKEN DREAMS ~ make space for Better Dreams ?
HOPE ~ Without it we would not be here !

C*est la Vie ~ Amen !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’š

December 21st, 2019 13:55

My White Side - Delight
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing JOKER - Love the perpetuality of CHRONO ~ CROSS - I keep playing it over & over & over & over - have rerecorded it on a LOOOOOOOP !
I love vertical monoword Poems - Yours is too negative (for YULETIDE) here is my positive antiphon !

BRIGHTNESS
STILLNESS
ARRIVING
STATUS QUO
DEPTHS
CONTINUUM

Or perhaps its the same from a FEMININE PERSPECTIVE ?

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA πŸ’œπŸ’›πŸ’œπŸ’›πŸ’œ

December 18th, 2019 19:07

A Friendly Side – Life In Creation of Essence
orchidee said:

An enlightening write J.

December 17th, 2019 03:41

A Friendly Side – Optimistic Sounds
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good Evening J44 ! Love the video - very mesmeric ! Lovin* this series of semi ABSTRACT Poems ! All ours are so so CONCRET - Please check NUTS about NUTS ! What d\'you expect from two Scientists !
Love the words in the Poem - it is so Brian & I\'s relationship !
O - L - P - L - O - F - F - S - CB - PB (I was rasied Catholic)
C of C - H of P & To Love - To The Light That Shines Above !
WOW Im on a high - just reading this - Thanks for Sharin*

Bright Blessings & Love to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘

December 16th, 2019 12:24

A Friendly Side – Our Painful Cry
orchidee said:

Good write J.

December 14th, 2019 04:00

A Friendly Side – Run For Others
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for the VIDEO J44 Challenging Lyrics ! Love the POEM ! As you are aware Poets are by NATURE sensitive creatures ! Because it is mutually CATHARTIC we often bare our SOULS in our ODES. Comments on MPS POEMS ~ should always be Empthetic & Encouraging never Iconoclastic. This is not the site for POETRY SLICERS ~ AMEN !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’š
Please check GRETA THUNBERG !

December 12th, 2019 10:41

A Friendly Side – Run For Others
Goldfinch60 said:

That bright love is within us all.

December 12th, 2019 05:46

A Friendly Side – Heavenly Signs
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Morning J44 ~ Brian here ~ Just catching up on MPS ! Thanks for sharing HIGHWAY to HEAVEN ~ MEGA !
Thanks (for once again) sharing an excellent POEM it crys out for an analysis ! You have highlighted many of the *Forces for Good & Support* in our everyday lives !
Friends - Family - Lovers - Fathers & Mothers - Children - ALL are so so important and ALL add QUALITY to our lives ~ AMEN !
Also ~ for its Members ~ MPS has its part to play ! BUT it has been through a Difficult Period ~ BUT Peace & Love has been restored ! So we bring WORDS ~ Bridges of Life ~ Cathartic Poetry (for both Writer & Reader) ~ Comfort & Unity ~ We can ALL be ENCOURAGERS ~ See how this POEM has encouraged LOVERGIRL 143 ~ AMEN ! Thanks for caring & sharing !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’š

December 11th, 2019 19:54

A Friendly Side – Heavenly Signs
Goldfinch60 said:

May that love and comfort always be with us.

December 11th, 2019 01:27

A Friendly Side – Choosing Faces
orchidee said:

Good write J.

December 10th, 2019 02:59

A Friendly Side – Varied Personality...Celebrity
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD EVENING J44 ~ Thanks for sharing the VIDEO ~ We can all (to some extent) relate to the CHORUS !

We are the others ~ We are the cast outs
We are the outsiders ~ But you cannot hide us
We are the others ~ We are the cast outs
You*re not out there on your own
If you feel mistreated ~ Torn & cheated
You are not alone ~ We are the OTHERS !

V1. We are all unique and we all have our individual
part to play in the Community !
V2 Staying in a Communuty long enough ~ to make Friends
marry ~ raise a Family ~ our diversity would mould a coherent whole !
V3. The longer we stay in a Community ~ the more vital a part we play !
We become a local Pillar ~ a Minor Celebrity !
V4. Grass roots security and being a COG in the Community is important 1
BUT ~ People are much more MOBILE than they were in the 1950\'s .............
V5. When we relocate ~ especially to another Country ~ we become temporary
~ unspecified & unknown !

Thnaks for sharing ~ much food for thought !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Love ~ Angela & Brian πŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘

December 9th, 2019 16:57

A Friendly Side – Frozen Inside
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING J44 ~ Great VIDEO & ODE ~ thanks for caring ! We have all been through a *SLOUGH 0f DESPOND* on MPS and some alas have fallen by the wayside ! Poetry est tousjours CATARTIC and MPS is in essence a very positive site on which we can all share Love ~ Light ~ Liberty and even Laments. We can all share our inner feelings and UNFREEZE all our ANGST and Rejooice in our mutual love for POETRY however different & diverse. Thanks for choosing our C-MAS TREE as a fave !

Blessings & Peace & for ADVENT !
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘

December 8th, 2019 04:36

A Friendly Side – Friendly Time
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Afternoon J44 ~ thnaks for sharing a great video & lyrics ! Your POEM reflects the LYRIC ! Those FRIENDS we spent NIGHTS with @ UNI and in the Community in our 20s ~ putting the *World to Rights* will always be *Our Friends for LIFE* AMEN ! We keep in touch in the Flesh & on Facebook etc.

Blessings & Peace & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’š
Please check *WOMEN ARE FROM VENUS* Thanks !

December 7th, 2019 09:19

A Friendly Side – Friendly Time
orchidee said:

A fine write J.

December 7th, 2019 02:59

An Unused Side – Breathing To The Next Ground
Nafis Light said:

\'very short time on Planet Earth (36 years!)??

No way...I mean, it is not short (to me), and you will be much much longer and continue on to do great things.
At least, that\'s how I see it.

December 6th, 2019 20:40

An Unused Side – Breathing To The Next Ground
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks once again J44 for a great video and an equally great POEM ! In my very short time on PLANET EARTH (36 years !) I have learned one key motivation ~ YOU HAVE TO KEEP GOING ! Love your third STANZA ~ SILENT (like Prayer) RESILIENT (like Heart) DETERMINED (like Lion) UNSHAKEN (like Air) We all have unknown desires ~ we all need to keep going ~ day by day by day ! Fear ~ Wisdom ~ Light & Dark ~ these too are traits which ~ keep us going !

Blessings & Light to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’š

December 6th, 2019 18:57

An Unused Side – Idol Donald Duck
Bragee said:

great light hearted write that forced a smile out of me!

December 4th, 2019 12:47

An Unused Side – Idol Donald Duck
orchidee said:

A good write Joker. Hey - why Donald Duck wear no trousers?! The \'snowflakes\' will complain! lol.

December 4th, 2019 02:34

An Unused Side – Illusionary Vision
🐀s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow I like the unique one word lines in awesome rhyming. You wrote it in n melody of its own, a musical poem. Kudos .
Pls pleez do review comment my newest poem too.


December 3rd, 2019 15:53

An Unused Side – Illusionary Vision
orchidee said:

Pity it might be me that might sing to the tune, and ruin everything! heehee. Well, one never knows - have ya heard me singing? I have to stop insulting cats by saying I sound like two of them fighting! lol.

December 3rd, 2019 04:47

An Unused Side – Angelic Madness
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD EVENING J44 ~ Thanks for sharing the VIDEO ! We love the group ANGELS and it is a fantastic LYRIC ~ FORGIVEN ! *Ive tried to shield you from the World ~ but youve given up the fight !* We all try to protect the ones we love !
Love the POEM ! You are excelling yourself ! Five neat quatrains replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ! The BIBLE is full of acounts of ANGELS often they act unseen but they do manifest themselves (as at the Incarnation) which is why they are very important @ Christmas ! Books and magazines about Angela are very prevalent in the USA and some of the (Christian) Houses we stay in have many ceramic Angels ! God can use Christians as Angels in many situations. Because Angela is medically trained (as a Physio) she always has a large first aid kit in her car ~ and a smaller one on her large handbag ! She is always ready to help if there is an accident and is often called an ANGEL. Her name ANGELA ~ in Spanish ~ means Angel ! I too am first aid trained (for leading Field Courses & Fell walking) and always have FIRST AID KIT in my car. Like Scouts & Guides ~ ANGELS always have to *BE PREPARED* ! Thanks for sharing a very big SUBJECT !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Brian & Angela πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’š
Please check my latest FUSION ~ CHRISTMAS ?

December 1st, 2019 17:32

An Unused Side – Forgotten Forgiveness
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING J44 ~ Thanks for sharing the VIDEO ~ great lyric !

Ive tried to shield you from the WORLD
But you gave up the FIGHT !

Love the Poem too ! Forsaking ones SELF to save someone ~ Nothing else matters but that someome ! Hands of healing ! Love can be very dangerous ~ thats how I feel about ANGELA ~ Nohing else matters to me but HER ! Much food for thought !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN (& ANGELA) πŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘πŸ’šπŸ§‘



November 30th, 2019 03:40

An Unused Side – Discarded Memories
SabreLi said:

I love the story you tell here, you take us on the journey with you and we can all take a piece away from this read.

Great work :)

November 29th, 2019 12:08

A Loving Side – Guitars Battle Violins
FineB said:

A good write, Joker44.

I would have to say I would go for Guitars all the time.

There is a rock chick in me dying to get out!

Keep writing FineB

November 29th, 2019 07:05

An Unused Side – Discarded Memories
Alan .S. Jeeves said:

I think this is you at your best (up until now) Joker. I enjoyed my morning read.

Thanks also for faving my \'Thanksgiving\' poem.

Kind regards, Alan

November 29th, 2019 04:59

An Unused Side – Unquestionable Love
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks for sharing J44 ! We can certainly empathise with the Poem & The Video !

Some enchanted Evening ~ You may see a Stranger
Across a crowded room ~ You fly to Her side ..........
And the STATIC UNKNOWN ~ ACTIVATES ********* !

Thanks for sharing & caring
MPS seems to be back in EQUILIBRIUM !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIANπŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘

November 28th, 2019 10:09

An Unused Side – Strangers In Life
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

STRANGERS
Weve found a kind of paradise in a flowers bloom
Weve seen the end of a mystic land so close it meets the parting sun
Weve shared the thoughts that two could share - we feel the truth - magic that we send

Searching for something new
Isle of Gold in flowers bloom

Angela here - An awesome SONG - We can always learn somethings from STRANGERS and our MANTRA is *A Stranger is just a FRIEND you havent met* ! This explains WHY we try to welcome NEW MEMBERS to MPS and give them ENCOURAGEMENT as Poets and a welcome as NEWBEES !
Your Poem (love the shape) covers similar ground) In the course of a Year we meet & converse (en passant) with hundreds of STRANGERS ! But Work Colleagues and those we meet @ Church and in Interest Groups (Poetry Circles (inc MPS) Lunch Clubs - Language Circles - etc ! We reckon after 10 meetings they become Acquaintances and after 20 Friends ! Because of our DISCOURSE we would consider YOU to be a Friend and vice-versa ! We invite Members to become MPS Friends but not ALL clique ! Some of our CYBER FRIENDS are more real than some of our Flesh & Blood Social Friends. On a site like MPS ~ because there are TROLLS ~ we reveal or ages (31 & 35) and that we currently live in Essex and our Occupations etc ! BUT we never post PHOTOS or reveal our true Names or e-mails or phone-numbers etc. Females are more vunerable on Chat Sites which is why I prefer to share with BRIAN rather than have my OWN SITE. Members have been very understanding about this. I have had sexually orientated messages on other sites but NOT this one so far ! Thanks for your POEMS - Comments & Cyber Friendship !

Blessings & Peace & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘
We send HEARTS as a token of shared Friendship !

November 27th, 2019 09:28

An Unused Side – Strangers In Life
orchidee said:

A nice write J44.

November 27th, 2019 02:55



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