Comments received on poems by Nafis Light



Closed Side - Believe
Saxon Crow said:

Very optimistic and hopeful. A happy love poem. Nice one :)

February 25th, 2020 02:09

Closed Side - Thoughts To Ourselves
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening JOKER - We love you elegant ode & its message ! Our inner thoughts are so important and affect our Public Performance !
In Pauls letter to Phillipi he lists SIX things that our thoughts should center on ! 1. Truth 2. Honesty 3. Puurity 4. Of Good Report 5. Virtuous & 6. Praiseworthy.
Your list of SIX is similar but 4 & 6 are centered on PEOPLE not ATTITUDES ! Settle your innermost thoughts on 1. Love 2. Gratitude 3. Prayer 4. YOU 5. Things to be 6. EVERYONE. We love the list of adverbs you have chosen to embelish these thoughts. For example - For thoughts of LOVE ~ Beauty - Shining - Touching - Lively ~ AWESOME. there is so so much in this Poem that each verse could be expanded to a Chapter in a Book entitled *The Beauty of our Inner Thoughts* AMEN. An absolute fave with US ~ AMEN !
WE LOVE The Video ! We are both Scientists (Angela Anatomy & Physiology and Brian Biochemistry & Ecology) so we are well aware that *Life on Earth* is totally dependent on WATER ! It is the most amazing compound especially in its solid state (ICE) which has the same structure as DIAMOND ! That is why an ICEBERG could tear holes underwater in the steel hull of the unsinkable TITANIC in 1912 ! Never underestimate WATER it may only be H--O--H but it is the most amazing MOLECULE in its SOLID (ICE) LIQUID (WATER) & GASEOUS FORM (STEAM) ~ AMEN !

Blessing & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

February 23rd, 2020 16:59

Closed Side - Time To Go
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOID EVENING JOKER ! Thanks for sharing. I always like a Poem in the form of a letter ~because it demands a reply !
You inform us that you have to go back to your ROOTS (very cathartic) to Find ~ to Give ~ To Say ~ to Write and then you will come back DIFFERENT ~ I bet you will ! Thanks for informing us we await your return and another missive describing your sojourn ~ AMEN ! Journey of the JOKER !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Brian & Angela πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

February 22nd, 2020 15:07

Closed Side - Matter To Me
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GUTEN ABEND JOKER ! Tnaks for another MEGA SAGA ! GIFT S are important and they do strengthen our RELATIONSHIPS. They can be (list one) Physical - Verbal - Ephemeral or Real. Gifts do tell Family & Friends who we are and how much we love & care for them ! What more is there to say ? The Spiritual Dimension and the greateqst gifts we can offer our Fellow Man are indeed Prayers - Blessings - Hope & Joy ! Gifts can be one-sided but the Bible say *It is more Blessed to GIVE than to RECEIVE - AMEN ! Thanks for sharing & caring - a very moving POEM.

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

February 20th, 2020 18:28

Silent Side - Soon
Saxon Crow said:

Enjoyed your poem Joker and can relate. Faved!

February 19th, 2020 12:32

Silent Side - Soon
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA & BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks JOKER for a very haunting tune which complemented the Poem ~ which spoke to me ~ what did it say !

V 1. Sans Air we cannot LIVE -
Sans Life we cannot weave Poems !
V 2. While we weave we think of tommorow
While we weave we compile a list !
V 3. I compost a new Poem just for MPS - BUT
I am still ephemeral - A Ghost - A Spirit - A Giver !
V 4. BUT - I am still a JOKE(R) - Anonymous - Nobody ?
BUT - I am worthy of being SOMEBODY - Cos Im a GIVER !

IS THERE ANYBODY OUT THERE LISTENING TO ME ?

Thanks JOKER for sharing your HEART & SOUL
We all feel UNKNOWN sometimes - BUT WE LOVE YOU !

Bright Blessings & Love to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘πŸ’™πŸ§‘




February 19th, 2020 10:12

Silent Side - Waters
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening JOKER ! We love the Style & Substance of this EL GRECO POEM ! The average.HUMAN is over 60% water which is why we have such an affinity with it, We can last three weeks without food but only three days without water ! The shape of your Poem resembes a Waterfall ~ My (B) fave form of Water ~ I love sliding down & Climbing up waterfalls ~ AMEN Angela prefers Lakes & Esturies for Sailing ! The 17 adjectives / adverbs you use to describe water are perfect and add action & life. In Nature water is everywhere ~ mostly constructive ~ but also destructive F L O O D S !!!!! Without water there is no LIFE. Th Sun driven Water Cycle is one of GODS great blessings to Planet Earth we should never take such Blessings for granted or grumble when it rains. Always buy a house on Higher Ground and NEVER on the bank of a RIVER ! Thanks for another wicked Poem ! Please check our POEM ~ Thanks

Blesings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

February 18th, 2020 14:24

Silent Side - Henry Ayala (The Prince of Clowns)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BON APRES MIDI JOKER ~ We loved the video it has given us an idea for a sketch @ the Christmas Party ! Love the video ! We always find Restaurants & Waiters (especially Somelliers) a bit BURLESQUE ! Real Clowns are a DYING BREED and some Circuses dont have the wayout CLOWNS anymore ~ because they frighten the KIDS ~ which is exactly waht they are meant to do ! JOKER in Batman is a prime example ! Your poetic tribute to HENRY AYALA is excellent ! Plus merci !

Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

February 17th, 2020 11:03

Silent Side - This is Me
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD SUNDAY - JOK-ER EST IL ? ! Great Muisc & Movement Video ! I (Angela) as a PHYSIO love it - it exercises every muscle in the BODY - MEGA ! Love the POEM J44 - MPS is indeed a FANTASY LAND where we can all escape from the WORLD of Time & Sense ! We find when one eats alone (especially PIES !) one does escape into the PIE (Apple or otherwise) ! We regret ur lonliness - but focus on the PIE which provide our liberation from NEGATIVE ~ AMEN. Thnaks for sharing - Im still digesting the POEM (and the PIE)

Joy & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIANπŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›

February 16th, 2020 08:32

Silent Side - This is Me
Saxon Crow said:

You want uninhibited, unfiltered and unafraid to be yourself check out Miriam margoyles on any grahm Norton show interview!

February 16th, 2020 06:47

Silent Side - Elemental Mercy
Jane Frye said:

Wow, just wow! I like the way you write.

February 14th, 2020 22:19

Silent Side - Bye and Hi
dusk arising said:

Yes you\'re so right we do tend to live like that.... as Neville pointed out today it\'s a use and discard world - throw away world.

Though I\'m not so sure about lighter days than the past as i age nowdays.

February 14th, 2020 09:46

Silent Side - Fake
Poetic Dan said:

Don\'t let those questions drive you insane but as the joker, maybe that\'s the way ;)

Well expressed!

Much peace and respect

February 14th, 2020 08:26

Silent Side - Fake
Saxon Crow said:

All is as it is. Quite right Joker. Cool poem.

February 13th, 2020 14:59

Silent Side - Fake
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BUENAS TARDES JOKER ~ BRIAN HERE ~ Love the cadance in the Song very soothing ! Poets & Jokers often try to hide their true identity so Im taking V 1. at its face value. One thing about MPS is the more poems we write the more facets of our *True Existance* we reveal but (because of TROLLS ~ who hide their identity) we exclude pictures & exact locations ~ Essex is a very large County ! Our ages & occupations are reflected in our Poetry and of course when Angela was in Auckland for 15 Months it was obvious from our Poetry. Being a little covert allows us to stretch our raison d\'etre through our odd odes ! Enjoy but dont expect every *I* to be dotted or every *T* to be crossed ! Poetry is much more mystical & ephemeral than that ! Thanks for posting - very intriguing !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love YIN & YANG πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›
Please check our Poem & latest FUSION - Thanks Y & Y !

February 13th, 2020 14:34

Silent Side - Wars on Mars
Bjorn W. said:

\"when the curtain of tomorrow is torn\"

This part is nice, to me it implies that tomorrow will come whether or not you want it.

Entertaining read.

PS: the picture in the video is of Far Cry 2, a game I have very fond memories of, thanks for that unintentional trip down memory lane

February 13th, 2020 06:21

Silent Side - Purple Scarf
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Gutt Morgan JOKER ~ Love the video ~ haunting but not daunting ! Love your latest seies of ODES ~ they touch a chord ! Purple is a very enigmatic colour Royalty & Sanctity ~ AMEN. I lost my bright Purple Sweater (or was it STOLEN ?) which I wore to make a statement in the Board Room in Winter - Spring - Summer - Autumn ~ Cooler than VIVALDI ! But ANGELICA bought me a New & more VIVID one from ALDI for Chrismas ~ so when I wear it I too feel Light - Nice - Wise - Cool - True - Balanced - Clear - Courageous - Strong & Full of Love and I too can unlock the GATE to my FUTURE ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing another GEM !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ’™
Please check LOVE & MARRIAGE ~ Thanks A & B !

February 12th, 2020 06:26

Silent Side - Purple Scarf
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Gutt Morgan JOKER ~ Love the video ~ haunting but not daunting ! Love your latest seies of ODES ~ they touch a chord ! Purple is a very enigmatic colour Royalty & Sanctity ~ AMEN. I lost my bright Purple Sweater (or was it STOLEN ?) which I wore to make a statement in the Board Room in Winter - Spring - Summer - Autumn ~ Cooler than VIVALDI ! But ANGELICA bought me a New & more VIVID one from ALDI for Chrismas ~ so when I wear it I too feel Light - Nice - Wise - Cool - True - Balanced - Clear - Courageous - Strong & Full of Love and I too can unlock the GATE to my FUTURE ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing another GEM !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ’™

February 12th, 2020 06:26

Silent Side - Purple Scarf
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Gutt Morgan JOKER ~ Love the video ~ haunting but not daunting ! Love your latest seies of ODES ~ they touch a chord ! Purple is a very enigmatic colour Royalty & Sanctity ~ AMEN. I lost my bright Purple Sweater (or was it STOLEN ?) which I wore to make a statement in the Board Room in Winter - Spring - Summer - Autumn ~ Cooler than VIVALDI ! But ANGELICA bought me a New & more VIVID one from ALDI for Chrismas ~ so when I wear it I too feel Light - Nice - Wise - Cool - True - Balanced - Clear - Courageous - Strong & Full of Love and I too can unlock the GATE to my FUTURE ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing another GEM !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ’™

February 12th, 2020 06:25

Silent Side - Elemental Mercy
Poetic Dan said:

Nicely done.

A greatful read

Always appreciated

Much peace and respect

February 11th, 2020 12:17

Silent Side - Elemental Mercy
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

LOVE THE BALLARINA ! WOW JOKER ~ All five elements combined to generate LOVE & BLESSING !
WATER ~ You lose some you gain some ~ fluidity !
FIRE ~ Burns out the dross & purifies ~ GAIN
AIR ~ Volatile but sustaining ~ GAIN
EARTH ~ Unique element ~ MEGA GAIN
LOVE ~ Inside & Out ~ always GAIN !

Thanks J 44 for an optimistic share !

Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›
Please check *10 Senior Mantras* Thnaks !

February 11th, 2020 07:41

Silent Side - Wars on Mars
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GUTEN ABEND ~ J44 ~ We loved the MUSIC very haunting ! very soon when the Human population exceeds the EARTH ~ we will colonise MARS. There will of course be Wars (on Mars) and roumers of Wars.
V 1. The Authorities are unaware that the 2 Billion Martians live underground due to the inhospitable atmosphere & temperature on the surface ! They are pure white with large ovel eyes (low light intensity) average adult height about 1 M.
V 2. Wars dont last forever so there is HOPE that we will establish an ENTENTE CORDIALE (Martians speak a sort of French !) between MARS & EARTH !
V 3. the Martian ~ Earth War No 1. ends with Love - Hope - Light & Life.
So we remain (V 4.) Alive - Being - Here & for the foreseeable future CLEAR ~ AMEN
If you want updates email ~ [email protected] OK

BONSANCEATUETTETUS (Martian)
(Good Luck to You & Yours)
Love Angela & Brian πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š





February 10th, 2020 15:14

Silent Side - Wars on Mars
Fractured Dreams said:

Enjoyable read and music complimented the piece

February 10th, 2020 04:48

Silent Side - Stars
Goldfinch60 said:

Those places are within us all.

Andy

February 10th, 2020 02:41

Silent Side - Stars
dusk arising said:

Offering us big questions of what it\'s all about, what\'s it all for. And leaving us with wonderment.

I really like the way this piece just \'hangs in the atmosphere\' without trying to answer.

February 9th, 2020 19:31

Silent Side - Loved
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Good evening J 44 ! Love this poem ! It reminds me that even though MAN has opted out of the Natural Food Chains & Food Cycles we are & always will be an integral part of the Natural (Flora & Fauna) World. I guess thats why we have Millions of Pets and Pot Plants etc living in our Homes ! They sure are our Kith & Kin I talk to the TREES ! Your perfect linear El Greco style Poem amplifies this Message perfectly - Gracias for sharing - AMEN - Saved as a Fave !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›
Please check our POEM ~ Thanks A & B !

February 8th, 2020 14:37

Silent Side - One
Bragee said:

Sitting outside in nature is one way to truly create inner peace.
great write!

February 4th, 2020 12:03

Silent Side - One
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD AFTERNOON J44

WE talk to the Trees
Always in the LANGUAGE
Of the soil in which they are GR(L)OWING
BUT ~ They dont always ANSWER !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’›
Please check SUNDAY 02 - 02 - 2020
& our latest FUSION ~ Thanks A & B !

February 4th, 2020 11:58

The Child’s Side – Hypnotic Laughter
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD EVENING ~ J44 ~ We enjoyed the VIDEO after a busy day in the Shops ~ I (BRIAN) alwys need a LAFF after shopping ~ Ladies take it so so seriously ! Men are in & out (like the LOO) Ladies always have try something SOMETHING and if it fits buy SOMETHING ! I think 36 Years is too long to be a Batchelor ! Thanks for sharing !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Brian & Angela. πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ’™
Please check *BEYOND THE SUNSET* Thanks A & B !

February 1st, 2020 15:02

The Child’s Side - Being Nice
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharin* J44 ! The Good Book says *Be ye kind to one another* Thats what this ugly World needs !
More Kindeness - Niceness - Goodness & Peace. Please check my Poem *Saturday Sunrise* New day - New month - New resolve TO BE NICER - AMEN !

Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ’™

January 31st, 2020 15:57



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