Comments received on poems by Nafis Light
My Soul
GeekSusie said:
The complexity of life, the universe, and our place in it are all captured in your poem, and it says a lot. It\'s encouraging to see that you\'ve recognized the need for healing through acts of giving and receiving in the midst of the chaos you describe. This speaks to me on a deep level; it\'s a never-ending cycle that we must sustain.
Your understanding of your own \"old soul\" and the necessity of change is inspiring and relatable. The constant transformation of our culture necessitates that we likewise adapt.
I, too, am on a quest to discover myself and the world around me through the power of words. I think many of us are headed in that direction, and that\'s encouraging.
September 24th, 2023 11:29
GeekSusie said:
The complexity of life, the universe, and our place in it are all captured in your poem, and it says a lot. It\'s encouraging to see that you\'ve recognized the need for healing through acts of giving and receiving in the midst of the chaos you describe. This speaks to me on a deep level; it\'s a never-ending cycle that we must sustain.
Your understanding of your own \"old soul\" and the necessity of change is inspiring and relatable. The constant transformation of our culture necessitates that we likewise adapt.
I, too, am on a quest to discover myself and the world around me through the power of words. I think many of us are headed in that direction, and that\'s encouraging.
September 24th, 2023 11:29
A Train
jarcher54 said:
Pleasant rhythm and rhyme... not overly heavy and regulated. The endings \"weak\" and \"obsolete\" are bitter and intense. Good work!
April 7th, 2023 22:43
jarcher54 said:
Pleasant rhythm and rhyme... not overly heavy and regulated. The endings \"weak\" and \"obsolete\" are bitter and intense. Good work!
April 7th, 2023 22:43
The Mind’s Poet – Page 1
Eugene S. said:
Well said. It seems to be a common theme these days. A newer song by the name of \'Hi Ren\' feels similar to this, just in a different way. Hope all works out.
January 11th, 2023 12:31
Eugene S. said:
Well said. It seems to be a common theme these days. A newer song by the name of \'Hi Ren\' feels similar to this, just in a different way. Hope all works out.
January 11th, 2023 12:31
My Heartbeat - 7
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Love the last line, in particular.
September 19th, 2022 17:11
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Love the last line, in particular.
September 19th, 2022 17:11
My Heartbeat - 5
shaa said:
Beautiful you literally took my feelings and expressed them through your words. I love this
September 13th, 2022 14:21
shaa said:
Beautiful you literally took my feelings and expressed them through your words. I love this
September 13th, 2022 14:21
The Name ‘Nafest’
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Nice Job. Thanks for liking my Spine Crime piece. :)
September 10th, 2022 10:13
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Nice Job. Thanks for liking my Spine Crime piece. :)
September 10th, 2022 10:13
Here I Am (August 27th, 2022)
LittleTalks said:
Your words allowed your heart to be heard. Nicely done.
August 27th, 2022 14:57
LittleTalks said:
Your words allowed your heart to be heard. Nicely done.
August 27th, 2022 14:57
Here I Am (August 27th, 2022)
mfhanyx_ said:
i LOVE the last paragraph or whatever it\'s called
August 27th, 2022 11:08
mfhanyx_ said:
i LOVE the last paragraph or whatever it\'s called
August 27th, 2022 11:08
Rose
L. B. Mek said:
well written, a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 22nd, 2022 02:55
L. B. Mek said:
well written, a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 22nd, 2022 02:55
Poet
Thekkinkkattil said:
Yes Joker you write your thoughts in a beautiful way.
August 21st, 2022 01:34
Thekkinkkattil said:
Yes Joker you write your thoughts in a beautiful way.
August 21st, 2022 01:34
Poet
dusk arising said:
And so may it continue for you as your writing goes from strength to strength with newfound confidence.
August 20th, 2022 10:26
dusk arising said:
And so may it continue for you as your writing goes from strength to strength with newfound confidence.
August 20th, 2022 10:26
I Want To Break Free – 1
Raven333 said:
I liked this poem and the message it puts out, and so true.
June 30th, 2022 20:39
Raven333 said:
I liked this poem and the message it puts out, and so true.
June 30th, 2022 20:39
I Can Walk Again – 3
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, that\'s an analogy I like
\'creativity\' as our key, to life
a wonderful shorty, thanks for sharing
June 21st, 2022 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, that\'s an analogy I like
\'creativity\' as our key, to life
a wonderful shorty, thanks for sharing
June 21st, 2022 03:23
I Start Facing North – 1
dean langmuir said:
Nice write,keep following that internal motivation,take care.
June 16th, 2022 08:53
dean langmuir said:
Nice write,keep following that internal motivation,take care.
June 16th, 2022 08:53
The Good Things Recently - 1
L. B. Mek said:
good on you
for obtaining, wisdom enough
to heed those words
and humility, enough
to question, interpret
and verify, their worth
to your life..
knowledge, begins
when you can read
beyond, ancient texts
and relate - empathise
with those
flesh n blood
wading, through life
by your side...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(I read and learn)
March 31st, 2022 04:14
L. B. Mek said:
good on you
for obtaining, wisdom enough
to heed those words
and humility, enough
to question, interpret
and verify, their worth
to your life..
knowledge, begins
when you can read
beyond, ancient texts
and relate - empathise
with those
flesh n blood
wading, through life
by your side...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(I read and learn)
March 31st, 2022 04:14
The Good Things Recently - 1
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds like you\'ve had an encounter with an angel,joker
March 30th, 2022 22:12
Crowns4Christ said:
Sounds like you\'ve had an encounter with an angel,joker
March 30th, 2022 22:12
Of All That I Am - 2
Crowns4Christ said:
Short and honest, I never plan what I write, I just write on the spur of the moment, which is probably why my work seems lacking
March 28th, 2022 19:10
Crowns4Christ said:
Short and honest, I never plan what I write, I just write on the spur of the moment, which is probably why my work seems lacking
March 28th, 2022 19:10
I AM HERE...FOR YOU – 1
Crowns4Christ said:
You\'re right joker, always aim high,or we may never know how we can climb
March 18th, 2022 19:54
Crowns4Christ said:
You\'re right joker, always aim high,or we may never know how we can climb
March 18th, 2022 19:54
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