Comments received on poems by Nafis Light



My Soul
GeekSusie said:

The complexity of life, the universe, and our place in it are all captured in your poem, and it says a lot. It\'s encouraging to see that you\'ve recognized the need for healing through acts of giving and receiving in the midst of the chaos you describe. This speaks to me on a deep level; it\'s a never-ending cycle that we must sustain.

Your understanding of your own \"old soul\" and the necessity of change is inspiring and relatable. The constant transformation of our culture necessitates that we likewise adapt.

I, too, am on a quest to discover myself and the world around me through the power of words. I think many of us are headed in that direction, and that\'s encouraging.


September 24th, 2023 11:29

Sweet – 1
orchidee said:

Good write JL.

June 3rd, 2023 01:47

It is ‘The Ticking Time’
orchidee said:

Now..... it\'s a good write J!

April 15th, 2023 10:56

We Carry
2781 said:

Be perfect, even as your Father in heaven is perfect.

April 14th, 2023 18:37

A Train
jarcher54 said:

Pleasant rhythm and rhyme... not overly heavy and regulated. The endings \"weak\" and \"obsolete\" are bitter and intense. Good work!

April 7th, 2023 22:43

The Mind’s Poet – Page 1
Eugene S. said:

Well said. It seems to be a common theme these days. A newer song by the name of \'Hi Ren\' feels similar to this, just in a different way. Hope all works out.

January 11th, 2023 12:31

My Heartbeat - 7
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

Love the last line, in particular.

September 19th, 2022 17:11

My Heartbeat - 5
shaa said:

Beautiful you literally took my feelings and expressed them through your words. I love this

September 13th, 2022 14:21

The Name ‘Nafest’
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:

Nice Job. Thanks for liking my Spine Crime piece. :)

September 10th, 2022 10:13

Here I Am (August 27th, 2022)
dean langmuir said:

Good write,poem on

August 27th, 2022 17:50

Here I Am (August 27th, 2022)
LittleTalks said:

Your words allowed your heart to be heard. Nicely done.

August 27th, 2022 14:57

Here I Am (August 27th, 2022)
mfhanyx_ said:

i LOVE the last paragraph or whatever it\'s called

August 27th, 2022 11:08

Rose
L. B. Mek said:

well written, a wonderful read
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 22nd, 2022 02:55

Poet
Thekkinkkattil said:

Yes Joker you write your thoughts in a beautiful way.

August 21st, 2022 01:34

Poet
dean langmuir said:

Very nicely done Joker poem on

August 20th, 2022 19:21

Poet
dean langmuir said:



August 20th, 2022 19:21

Poet
dusk arising said:

And so may it continue for you as your writing goes from strength to strength with newfound confidence.

August 20th, 2022 10:26

To Lord Morpheus
orchidee said:

I don\'t know the guy myself! lol.

August 17th, 2022 01:37

I Want To Break Free – 1
Raven333 said:

I liked this poem and the message it puts out, and so true.

June 30th, 2022 20:39

I Can Walk Again – 3
L. B. Mek said:

yeah, that\'s an analogy I like
\'creativity\' as our key, to life
a wonderful shorty, thanks for sharing

June 21st, 2022 03:23

I Can Walk Again – 2
JudyStella said:

Wishing you strength along the way!

June 19th, 2022 10:35

I Start Facing North – 1
dean langmuir said:

Nice write,keep following that internal motivation,take care.

June 16th, 2022 08:53

I Am Still A Joker
CST said:

Mmmmm?

May 5th, 2022 14:22

I Need To Breathe - 3
Alexander Pope III said:

good

April 7th, 2022 11:28

The Good Things Recently - 1
L. B. Mek said:

good on you
for obtaining, wisdom enough
to heed those words
and humility, enough
to question, interpret
and verify, their worth
to your life..
knowledge, begins
when you can read
beyond, ancient texts
and relate - empathise
with those
flesh n blood
wading, through life
by your side...
thanks for sharing, dear poet
(I read and learn)

March 31st, 2022 04:14

The Good Things Recently - 1
Crowns4Christ said:

Sounds like you\'ve had an encounter with an angel,joker

March 30th, 2022 22:12

Of All That I Am - 2
Crowns4Christ said:

Short and honest, I never plan what I write, I just write on the spur of the moment, which is probably why my work seems lacking

March 28th, 2022 19:10

I AM HERE...FOR YOU – 4
dean langmuir said:

I agree Joker,take care

March 22nd, 2022 08:58

I AM HERE...FOR YOU – 2
dean langmuir said:

Relate,take care,poet on

March 19th, 2022 18:26

I AM HERE...FOR YOU – 1
Crowns4Christ said:

You\'re right joker, always aim high,or we may never know how we can climb

March 18th, 2022 19:54

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