Comments received on poems by Demi.T



Mental Health
baddaytobealive said:

This is wonderful. I hope you\'re okay. I am currently struggling with my mental health a lot so this hits hard. Take care :)

August 1st, 2019 13:46

Mental Health
Neville said:

I wish more folk would write about their experience of mental health..

I am convinced if much of the stigma could be removed folk would feel less inclined to keep quiet and in turn others would benefit.... just sayin.. well done you..

August 1st, 2019 13:23

Mental Health
Christina8 said:

You are not alone. You are doing the right things. Just keep doing what you are doing....like you said.. it\'s ok to get help.

August 1st, 2019 13:12

Be Kind
FineB said:

Hello Demi.T

A thought provoking and vivid poem. Superb write.

In today\'s social media age kindness is indeed lacking.

Keep writing Fine B

May 23rd, 2019 05:01

Be Kind
dusk arising said:

Great message but i fear those it is directed toward are deaf to the message.
Religions which rely upon fear for their grip upon feeble minded will never permit your message to be uttered.

May 22nd, 2019 12:12

Don’t Cry
Neville said:

emotionally charged but enjoyed by me... Neville

May 20th, 2019 11:52

Thoughts
Poetic Dan said:

You may not mean much to someone but with a heart so pure and open, you will be well loved here.

This gave me goosebumps, thank you and I wish you a warm welcome.

Keep writing
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect

May 20th, 2019 07:21

Don’t Cry
Poetic Dan said:

Wow, I felt every word till the end as my tear began. I just let it gently fade away, thank you for sharing this heart felt pain.

Always deeply appreciated!

May 20th, 2019 07:16

Don’t Cry
dusk arising said:

Don\'t look too closely, no one else sees the you which you see.
So brave face on for the world... why? Because out there is where a happier tomorrow starts. Tomorrow IS the first day of the rest of your life and there\'s something wonderful out there for you.

Your writing is excellent.

May 20th, 2019 05:37

Everyday I still remember
dusk arising said:

This is a really moving and heartfelt tribute to a loved person.
It is a treasure to devote time to memories and commit to written words some of our feelings. Almost a homage, and why shouldn\'t we pay homage to one who taught us so much about love.

Very moving.

May 19th, 2019 10:12

TODAY
dusk arising said:

Good one.... i agree with you oh so much too.
Well written and contemporary.

May 18th, 2019 16:31

Thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:

Help will be there for you, those thoughts can be so demoralising but they will get better.

Welcome to MPS.

April 18th, 2019 10:48

Thoughts
Neville said:

Where would we be without them.. Thoughts that is... Now there\'s a thought... and while we are at it, welcome to MPS.... be happy Neville

April 18th, 2019 08:32