Comments received on poems by Lulu Boatwright
Wanted
Lulu Boatwright said:
She didn’t want to be left ie deserted with three kids
September 6th, 2021 10:20
Lulu Boatwright said:
She didn’t want to be left ie deserted with three kids
September 6th, 2021 10:20
Wanted
Doggerel Dave said:
Difficult to work this one out - never got past the three kids she really didn\'t want - maybe she should have kept her knees together with more discrimination.....
September 6th, 2021 04:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Difficult to work this one out - never got past the three kids she really didn\'t want - maybe she should have kept her knees together with more discrimination.....
September 6th, 2021 04:06
Forever
Goldfinch60 said:
She will always be with you, meories of her will come to you at the most unexpected times.
June 14th, 2019 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
She will always be with you, meories of her will come to you at the most unexpected times.
June 14th, 2019 00:34
Forever
dusk arising said:
Lovely tribute to a missed someone special.
May i politely suggest that you consider replacing the word \'sneaked\' because it has a negative feel which is in such contrast to the affectionate feel of your writing here.
June 13th, 2019 07:17
dusk arising said:
Lovely tribute to a missed someone special.
May i politely suggest that you consider replacing the word \'sneaked\' because it has a negative feel which is in such contrast to the affectionate feel of your writing here.
June 13th, 2019 07:17
No-one cares
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning LULU ~ Welcome to MPS ! Thanks for your first Poem beautifully structured ~ excellent Rhythm & consistent Rhyme pattern, Repetition is very important in Classical Poetry and your repetition of *I wandered lonely as a Girl* empathises your message and the Title *No-one cares* The neglect you empathise is the situation of many Urban Teen Girls todays Society ! No advice ~ No-one to care or cuddle ~ Unkempt ~ Rebellious ~ Formidable ~ Biddable ~ Watched & Abused. I (BRIAN) work in a Vocational College with TEENS and ANGELA & I work as Youth Leaders in a Church. Your poem rings very true for many vulnerable Teen Girls we encounter.
Thinking of YOU ~ Every blessing for the Future
Yours through poetry ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
Please visit our SITE ~ Thanks A & B 🧡🧡
May 11th, 2019 03:35
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning LULU ~ Welcome to MPS ! Thanks for your first Poem beautifully structured ~ excellent Rhythm & consistent Rhyme pattern, Repetition is very important in Classical Poetry and your repetition of *I wandered lonely as a Girl* empathises your message and the Title *No-one cares* The neglect you empathise is the situation of many Urban Teen Girls todays Society ! No advice ~ No-one to care or cuddle ~ Unkempt ~ Rebellious ~ Formidable ~ Biddable ~ Watched & Abused. I (BRIAN) work in a Vocational College with TEENS and ANGELA & I work as Youth Leaders in a Church. Your poem rings very true for many vulnerable Teen Girls we encounter.
Thinking of YOU ~ Every blessing for the Future
Yours through poetry ~ ANGELA & BRIAN
Please visit our SITE ~ Thanks A & B 🧡🧡
May 11th, 2019 03:35
No-one cares
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, that so powerful and sad
If this is you I hope this brought some peace.
Thank you for sharing
I must also add a massive welcome!
May 11th, 2019 03:21
Poetic Dan said:
Wow, that so powerful and sad
If this is you I hope this brought some peace.
Thank you for sharing
I must also add a massive welcome!
May 11th, 2019 03:21
