Comments received on poems by Chagrined
Attention Deficit
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a brilliant poem, stellar eloquence! I like to incorporate science in my poems so I enjoyed yours. Kudos for this great muse.
Pls do read my newest poem too, thanks,
March 1st, 2020 00:13
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a brilliant poem, stellar eloquence! I like to incorporate science in my poems so I enjoyed yours. Kudos for this great muse.
Pls do read my newest poem too, thanks,
March 1st, 2020 00:13
Attention Deficit
sylviasearcher said:
I might call this feeling restless
You know mindfulness doesn’t often work for me but maybe it might?
It’s funny how reading this felt like my mind was being pulled in different directions. It was like I could sense the battle.
August 12th, 2019 01:06
sylviasearcher said:
I might call this feeling restless
You know mindfulness doesn’t often work for me but maybe it might?
It’s funny how reading this felt like my mind was being pulled in different directions. It was like I could sense the battle.
August 12th, 2019 01:06
Futility
Chagrined said:
Maybe we can embrace the gloom together, creating our own light in the murky depths?
August 10th, 2019 11:37
Chagrined said:
Maybe we can embrace the gloom together, creating our own light in the murky depths?
August 10th, 2019 11:37
Futility
sylviasearcher said:
I think I know this feeling.
But you write it with an intoxicating beauty that makes me want to drown in the depths of your dark 😌
August 6th, 2019 01:59
sylviasearcher said:
I think I know this feeling.
But you write it with an intoxicating beauty that makes me want to drown in the depths of your dark 😌
August 6th, 2019 01:59
Two Souls
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will forever be with you in your memories.
July 20th, 2019 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will forever be with you in your memories.
July 20th, 2019 00:51
The Basin In the Meadow
Christina8 said:
Very sad write but it is also a great one. Thanks for sharing!
July 12th, 2019 20:28
Christina8 said:
Very sad write but it is also a great one. Thanks for sharing!
July 12th, 2019 20:28
The Basin In the Meadow
sylviasearcher said:
This is such an achingly beautiful piece but it makes me very sad to read it.
😓
July 12th, 2019 02:31
sylviasearcher said:
This is such an achingly beautiful piece but it makes me very sad to read it.
😓
July 12th, 2019 02:31
Alone in the Dust
Chagrined said:
New treasures eh... what might those be? @sylviasearcher. Thanks for reading....again!
July 10th, 2019 06:04
Chagrined said:
New treasures eh... what might those be? @sylviasearcher. Thanks for reading....again!
July 10th, 2019 06:04
Alone in the Dust
sylviasearcher said:
You know reading this again from a far was enabled me to appreciate it even more.
I wonder about the cycle within. It reminded me of a wave, relentless, inevitable but it will retreat and may even leave new treasure to be discovered on your shore 😌
July 10th, 2019 01:43
sylviasearcher said:
You know reading this again from a far was enabled me to appreciate it even more.
I wonder about the cycle within. It reminded me of a wave, relentless, inevitable but it will retreat and may even leave new treasure to be discovered on your shore 😌
July 10th, 2019 01:43
Alone in the Dust
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write but that darkness can be overcome as the light is always there.
Welcome to MPS.
July 10th, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write but that darkness can be overcome as the light is always there.
Welcome to MPS.
July 10th, 2019 00:16
Alone in the Dust
Christina8 said:
This is a great rhyme! Evokes feelings of sadness but at the same time I am so glad to see another poet with talent like yours!
July 9th, 2019 18:48
Christina8 said:
This is a great rhyme! Evokes feelings of sadness but at the same time I am so glad to see another poet with talent like yours!
July 9th, 2019 18:48
