Comments received on poems by AYESHABEG



Prince of pains (Garbage boy)
Cheeky Missy said:

Wow. It is very sad. Excellently drawn from the perfect picture to the concluding sorrowful line. I like it because it seems so well done, yet it is so very sad.

January 3rd, 2011 23:14

Places at wars
Cheeky Missy said:

You drew the scene of the ugliness of it all excellently.....it is a nightmare, and yet they live...it is so very sad....thank you for this reminder. And yet, how much do we live in war with words and hatefilled actions, just as much a nightmare, though often hardly seen/recognized.

January 1st, 2011 21:11

The lost soul
Lifewellspoken said:

I love this poem, keep up the great writing.
Nice photo.

December 9th, 2010 17:43

A day at a beach
ironmaiden_81186 said:

its amazing how you connect the beauty of a sunset on the beach with the strange and ruthless world of ours.....beautifully written

November 11th, 2010 08:56

My Brother-in–law
jvl narasimha rao said:

Dear Ayeshabeg, This is an excellent poem for your age.I wonder how could you write such a beautiful poem on your brother-in-law at your age.Please convey my respects to him as he is a great man

September 11th, 2010 11:12

My Brother-in–law
bernard franklin said:

Very Nice Ayeshabeg, A fitting tribute to your brother-in-law, you must respect him very much. BF

September 8th, 2010 01:21

The lost soul
bernard franklin said:

Hi Ayeshabeg, I really enjoyed reading your poem, It's full of poignant remembrance for something treasured and now lost. Your poems are really very accomplished. keep up the good work.
Bernard Franklin

September 7th, 2010 10:26

The lost soul
jvl narasimha rao said:

Dear AYESHABEG, This is a wonderful poem.It inspires me to write better poetry.
yours lovingly,
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
INDIA

September 6th, 2010 11:50