Comments received on poems by thewayiwrite



Youth
A.D. Small said:

I really enjoyed your poem great job!!!

April 3rd, 2024 03:05

How could I forget?
HannahElisabeth said:

\"And it is now that i realise, it’s not long forgotten faces that haunt me, but my own poetry.\"

I used to think I wrote to get my thoughts out of my own head, but this... I haunt myself with my own poetry. This was amazing, thank you for sharing

August 24th, 2021 20:14

How could I forget?
Jay-Lee Jane said:

the hairs on the back of my neck stood up! Beautiful, beautiful words

August 24th, 2021 18:24

Untitled
L. B. Mek said:

\'I write because it makes me feel like someone is listening, even if it\'s just me finally listening to myself.\'
words that all scribblers can relate with so easily,
thanks for sharing

April 6th, 2021 03:25

Untitled
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true words TWIW.

Andy

April 5th, 2021 00:32

Untitled
Poetic Dan said:

Fantastic ending and so wonderful true, its just me, my words and the universe and who ever passes through.
So glad I caught yours, keep shining and being you!

Thanks for the inspiration!

April 5th, 2021 00:25

She was poetry
Caring dove said:

Very lovely words 🙂

March 24th, 2021 01:59

She was poetry
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words twiw, that respect can sometimes only be seen by one person but we all see things in different ways, if only we could see through others eyes sometimes the world would be a better place.

Andy

March 24th, 2021 01:37

People
L. B. Mek said:

there is a reason brevity is championed so widely, mainly because like those same coffee slurper\'s your write laments, the legacy of modern evolution: is ever decreasing attention spans,
so short and straight to the point, works

March 22nd, 2021 05:16

People
Eugene S. said:

Ha! Yes! Love it!

March 21st, 2021 09:22

People
orchidee said:

Oohh, only 5 minutes allowed?!
Some allow 5 hours or thereabouts, as we waffle on! lol. Good write there.

March 21st, 2021 03:23

People
Goldfinch60 said:

Observance can bring so much to our lives.

Andy

March 21st, 2021 01:51

People
FredPeyer said:

And too busy pecking away on their cell phones! Short and good, thewayiwrite!

March 20th, 2021 22:54

You must write
Mizgeen Berzinari said:

We must write.
Thank you.

March 16th, 2021 05:55

You must write
AlitaOpal said:

You said it and penned it all in five minutes.. I salute you 🌹🌹🌹

February 23rd, 2021 17:08

You must write
L. B. Mek said:

so very true!
thanks for sharing dear poet

February 23rd, 2021 04:39

You must write
Doggerel Dave said:

You speak for yourself - manifestly there are other motivations (though I doubt you\'ll find them admitted to very often on MPS).
Enjoyed and admired your words but (sceptical as ever) I find the 5 mins difficult to believe.


February 23rd, 2021 04:02

You must write
Caring dove said:

True . I think writing can be healing sometimes, on some level , especially if your expressing feelings which need speaking of .
But personally I do prefer writing about other things . Yes , write for yourself , write for the reader

February 23rd, 2021 02:58

You must write
Goldfinch60 said:

Totally agree, we must always write our words each day.

Andy

February 23rd, 2021 02:01

You must write
FredPeyer said:

You said it well! It doesn\'t matter what you write, or how good you write, or how long you write, as long as you write!

February 22nd, 2021 22:00

I pray
FredPeyer said:

So you love him/her with all your heart, no matter the lies, illusions, or rumors. A fresh new take on the standard love poem. Congratulations!

February 21st, 2021 22:36

I pray
Doggerel Dave said:

Oh go on – beat yourself up, why don’t you?
Not sure of the last line: are you keen to give whoever it is a good flogging too?
Good read - You know what you are doing.


February 21st, 2021 21:33

Autumn
heatherbee said:

Lovely words heart felt.

February 18th, 2021 04:37

Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:

Feelings must always be within people to show you who they really are, in this case they are non existent and so should he be in your life.

Andy

February 18th, 2021 01:37

Autumn
Doggerel Dave said:

Found him out,did you? Good.
I hope you successfully walked away ...

February 17th, 2021 20:52

Humanity
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful positive words twiw may all humanity be like this.

Andy

February 17th, 2021 01:23

There is nothing to declare
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow you chronicled life from childhood to aged, its all very poetically related, how time flies, a child becomes a grandfather all in one century. Kudos for a great fab poem.

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.



February 16th, 2021 08:58

There is nothing to declare
Doggerel Dave said:

That\'s not a \'random stream\' - your claim after your last poem; that\'s a well constructed poem full of vivid imagery and a hell of a lot of insight for someone who definitely is NOT an oldie.
.

February 16th, 2021 06:46

There is nothing to declare
L. B. Mek said:

this, here is that graceful wisdom of age, nothing like that bitterness of dotage \'some\' choose to dwell within, yes you lament
but also, more importantly you choose to remember those brief rainbows that came with all that rain and therein exists all the difference, that gives every life: true meaning..
brilliantly executed, in both tone and flow

February 16th, 2021 06:17

There is nothing to declare
Goldfinch60 said:

This is going into my favourites.

February 16th, 2021 02:34

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