Comments received on poems by thewayiwrite
There is nothing to declare
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem thewayiwrite, it is so meaningful to all especially to an oldie like me.
Andy
February 16th, 2021 02:34
Goldfinch60 said:
What a wonderful poem thewayiwrite, it is so meaningful to all especially to an oldie like me.
Andy
February 16th, 2021 02:34
There is nothing to declare
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully said, thewayiwrite, we are all in the same boat.
February 15th, 2021 19:58
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully said, thewayiwrite, we are all in the same boat.
February 15th, 2021 19:58
Tiredness
heatherbee said:
Totally got where you were coming from with this potent words.
February 15th, 2021 07:49
heatherbee said:
Totally got where you were coming from with this potent words.
February 15th, 2021 07:49
Tiredness
Olivia. said:
I really connected to this poem, the current lockdown situations can definitely make us feel these emotions. But there is always light at the end of the tunnel. A great expression x
February 15th, 2021 07:23
Olivia. said:
I really connected to this poem, the current lockdown situations can definitely make us feel these emotions. But there is always light at the end of the tunnel. A great expression x
February 15th, 2021 07:23
Tiredness
L. B. Mek said:
sharing your truth\'s is a brutal journey, dear fellow scribbler
see, when others read your words, we do so through our own distorted prism\'s, replying with commentary that alienates you from the very words you penned...
so firstly and most importantly: write for yourself!
if you deem it worthy, then let that be enough for you...
the instance you allow other\'s to value your worth, will be the moment those vultures will rise to swallow your confidence - whole, why?
cause that is how they sustain that warped delusion of self-indulgently morose, judgemental perspectives of life, to demean other\'s worth with...
yes, by all means heed advise that is aimed at aiding your growth, but never let other\'s opinions discourage you from writing your truth\'s!
I found your write an interesting read, admittedly it lacks a secondary point of view or rather a more rounded look at your situation, but no journey starts at the end, so I appreciate you must first begin by writing what you see, maybe later as you reflect and revise, you may see an alternative perspective that can help guide a more positive outlook on your situation, all in all it was a good read, keep writing and sharing, we are here and all traversing that same journey on the rivers of ink, my literary minded friend...
February 15th, 2021 06:04
L. B. Mek said:
sharing your truth\'s is a brutal journey, dear fellow scribbler
see, when others read your words, we do so through our own distorted prism\'s, replying with commentary that alienates you from the very words you penned...
so firstly and most importantly: write for yourself!
if you deem it worthy, then let that be enough for you...
the instance you allow other\'s to value your worth, will be the moment those vultures will rise to swallow your confidence - whole, why?
cause that is how they sustain that warped delusion of self-indulgently morose, judgemental perspectives of life, to demean other\'s worth with...
yes, by all means heed advise that is aimed at aiding your growth, but never let other\'s opinions discourage you from writing your truth\'s!
I found your write an interesting read, admittedly it lacks a secondary point of view or rather a more rounded look at your situation, but no journey starts at the end, so I appreciate you must first begin by writing what you see, maybe later as you reflect and revise, you may see an alternative perspective that can help guide a more positive outlook on your situation, all in all it was a good read, keep writing and sharing, we are here and all traversing that same journey on the rivers of ink, my literary minded friend...
February 15th, 2021 06:04
An ode to the arts
L. B. Mek said:
our ability to express thought\'s and feelings is an essential element for maintaining our sanity in this crazy world, it seems you\'ve found your preferred avenues for self-expression, which is half the battle I think,
thanks for sharing, look forward to reading your work
February 15th, 2021 03:56
L. B. Mek said:
our ability to express thought\'s and feelings is an essential element for maintaining our sanity in this crazy world, it seems you\'ve found your preferred avenues for self-expression, which is half the battle I think,
thanks for sharing, look forward to reading your work
February 15th, 2021 03:56
Tiredness
Goldfinch60 said:
I can understand your feelings but there is goodness out there in these sad times, just keep looking and you will be surprised at what is there for you.
Andy
February 15th, 2021 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
I can understand your feelings but there is goodness out there in these sad times, just keep looking and you will be surprised at what is there for you.
Andy
February 15th, 2021 01:34
Tiredness
Doggerel Dave said:
I read it, would like to give feedback but am too depressed now.
February 15th, 2021 00:27
Doggerel Dave said:
I read it, would like to give feedback but am too depressed now.
February 15th, 2021 00:27
Tiredness
thewayiwrite said:
Please please give feedback, I haven’t written for months and months until yesterday and now suddenly the words have come flooding back and are flowing out into what I think are random streams that I dare to hope might be thought of as poetry
February 14th, 2021 18:58
thewayiwrite said:
Please please give feedback, I haven’t written for months and months until yesterday and now suddenly the words have come flooding back and are flowing out into what I think are random streams that I dare to hope might be thought of as poetry
February 14th, 2021 18:58
An ode to the arts
dusk arising said:
So lets see more than the occasional post....poet. LOL
February 13th, 2021 22:31
dusk arising said:
So lets see more than the occasional post....poet. LOL
February 13th, 2021 22:31
From me, a dyslexic poet
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing wrong with being a dyslexic poet. Dyslexic or not, you have the gift of words. Command them as you will.
June 30th, 2020 19:19
Accidental Poet said:
Nothing wrong with being a dyslexic poet. Dyslexic or not, you have the gift of words. Command them as you will.
June 30th, 2020 19:19
Being human
germanamericanchurch said:
New concept very original - emotions are hard - but not real as rain can be :)
May 8th, 2020 18:19
germanamericanchurch said:
New concept very original - emotions are hard - but not real as rain can be :)
May 8th, 2020 18:19
Isolation
clarissavibes said:
I love this! I am inspired write my own version.
April 27th, 2020 21:49
clarissavibes said:
I love this! I am inspired write my own version.
April 27th, 2020 21:49
A future Love letter
Goldfinch60 said:
You have your life ahead of you and when that person comes into your life there will be no doubt that it will be forever.
April 20th, 2020 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
You have your life ahead of you and when that person comes into your life there will be no doubt that it will be forever.
April 20th, 2020 00:31
A future Love letter
anonymousblue said:
Such pure and intense feeling in your words. Much enjoyed.
April 19th, 2020 19:41
anonymousblue said:
Such pure and intense feeling in your words. Much enjoyed.
April 19th, 2020 19:41
Strawberries
dusk arising said:
Lately the early strawberries here in UK come from a place where they manage to grow lovely looking fruit but completely devoid of the lovely strawberry sweetness.
Come to think of it, many ladies i have met are of the same ilk.
April 14th, 2020 18:49
dusk arising said:
Lately the early strawberries here in UK come from a place where they manage to grow lovely looking fruit but completely devoid of the lovely strawberry sweetness.
Come to think of it, many ladies i have met are of the same ilk.
April 14th, 2020 18:49
My song
dusk arising said:
Sad. But if this is a reflection of whats happening in your life, then writing it down is a great way of giving it finality.
April 12th, 2020 13:20
dusk arising said:
Sad. But if this is a reflection of whats happening in your life, then writing it down is a great way of giving it finality.
April 12th, 2020 13:20
Writing
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, when that first word is written I never know where it will lead me. Good write.
Andy
February 3rd, 2020 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, when that first word is written I never know where it will lead me. Good write.
Andy
February 3rd, 2020 01:18
Writing
dusk arising said:
Oh i totally agree. Like a drug of self exploration.... vivid pictures and sensations waiting for you to find the words to colour a readers mind. Whilst lifting many of the tensions and frustrations we ourselves are burdened with.
A very enjoyable read.
February 2nd, 2020 07:40
dusk arising said:
Oh i totally agree. Like a drug of self exploration.... vivid pictures and sensations waiting for you to find the words to colour a readers mind. Whilst lifting many of the tensions and frustrations we ourselves are burdened with.
A very enjoyable read.
February 2nd, 2020 07:40
Without you
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I enjoyed this poem very much. I don\'t think it can be improved in any way.
I would like to include it in my favourites if I may.
Kind regards, Alan
December 22nd, 2019 02:18
Alan .S. Jeeves said:
I enjoyed this poem very much. I don\'t think it can be improved in any way.
I would like to include it in my favourites if I may.
Kind regards, Alan
December 22nd, 2019 02:18
Friends
Goldfinch60 said:
Those friendships can be mostly seen through the eyes.
October 17th, 2019 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those friendships can be mostly seen through the eyes.
October 17th, 2019 00:26
The way I write
Poetic Dan said:
O my days that was Incredible.. You took all the thoughts out of my head and I don\'t even think I blinked out took a breath... Outstandingly done from my view, thank you so much for being you!
October 15th, 2019 14:40
Poetic Dan said:
O my days that was Incredible.. You took all the thoughts out of my head and I don\'t even think I blinked out took a breath... Outstandingly done from my view, thank you so much for being you!
October 15th, 2019 14:40
A thousand delicious ill-advised ways
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Powerful stuff! Thank you for sharing!
October 15th, 2019 14:34
Poetic Dan said:
Wow... Powerful stuff! Thank you for sharing!
October 15th, 2019 14:34
To the princesses
Clara said:
Quite an eye opener this one, deserves more views.
October 8th, 2019 14:45
Clara said:
Quite an eye opener this one, deserves more views.
October 8th, 2019 14:45
Tell me I’m beautiful
dusk arising said:
Love the way you have written the tease which surrounds this.
October 1st, 2019 14:40
dusk arising said:
Love the way you have written the tease which surrounds this.
October 1st, 2019 14:40
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