Comments received on poems by thewayiwrite
Tell me I’m beautiful
Bragee said:
Beautiful poem here.
Very interesting depiction of loving someone for their true self.
October 1st, 2019 11:16
Bragee said:
Beautiful poem here.
Very interesting depiction of loving someone for their true self.
October 1st, 2019 11:16
The way I write
Clara said:
This is truly a joy to read. The words you\'ve chosen, what you are expressing ties in beautifuilly with the structure of the poem. Well done. Keep going the way you are. Write those thoughts. Write them all for they are you.
October 1st, 2019 06:33
Clara said:
This is truly a joy to read. The words you\'ve chosen, what you are expressing ties in beautifuilly with the structure of the poem. Well done. Keep going the way you are. Write those thoughts. Write them all for they are you.
October 1st, 2019 06:33
The way I write
thewayiwrite said:
Please do comment, I would love to hear any feedback, positive or negative, all is gratefully recieved!
September 30th, 2019 17:18
thewayiwrite said:
Please do comment, I would love to hear any feedback, positive or negative, all is gratefully recieved!
September 30th, 2019 17:18
The Wild Gypsy
FredPeyer said:
If it ain\'t a two-way street, it ain\'t nothing.
Another good write, keep on!
September 28th, 2019 14:23
FredPeyer said:
If it ain\'t a two-way street, it ain\'t nothing.
Another good write, keep on!
September 28th, 2019 14:23
different
FredPeyer said:
Great poem! Reminds me a bit of the 60\'s Hippie movement where everybody wanted to be different just to end up the same.
Love the lines \'I want to write stories, poems, beautiful lies and call it truth\'. What is truth anyway? Does it depend on the view? For example, a terrorist is somebody else\'s freedom fighter. I do like poems that make me think. Good job!
September 28th, 2019 14:21
FredPeyer said:
Great poem! Reminds me a bit of the 60\'s Hippie movement where everybody wanted to be different just to end up the same.
Love the lines \'I want to write stories, poems, beautiful lies and call it truth\'. What is truth anyway? Does it depend on the view? For example, a terrorist is somebody else\'s freedom fighter. I do like poems that make me think. Good job!
September 28th, 2019 14:21
Praise
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but most angels are good and kind.
Welcome to MPS.
September 27th, 2019 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write but most angels are good and kind.
Welcome to MPS.
September 27th, 2019 00:58
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