Comments received on poems by benevolentbluebabe
Crows
Laura🌻 said:
benevolentbluebabe,
A fine write.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts in the author’s comment box! Very sensible.
Laura🌻
June 26th, 2020 04:39
Laura🌻 said:
benevolentbluebabe,
A fine write.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts in the author’s comment box! Very sensible.
Laura🌻
June 26th, 2020 04:39
Crows
orchidee said:
A fine write B. I quite like crows - their size, colour, etc.
Yes, I\'ve seen one alone, or even a few, in places deserted at present, e.g. school playing fields.
I thought - enjoying having the fields all to yourself, you crows (and other birds).
June 26th, 2020 01:58
orchidee said:
A fine write B. I quite like crows - their size, colour, etc.
Yes, I\'ve seen one alone, or even a few, in places deserted at present, e.g. school playing fields.
I thought - enjoying having the fields all to yourself, you crows (and other birds).
June 26th, 2020 01:58
On Dying Love
siranswerer said:
The sun always leads to pain,
Lifted from the start.
Ocean blue stain,
Love\'s never smart.
Sun fades to skies greyed light,
Swallowed in a sleeve.
Steadfast in memory bright,
Hearts, never relieved.
June 24th, 2020 12:03
siranswerer said:
The sun always leads to pain,
Lifted from the start.
Ocean blue stain,
Love\'s never smart.
Sun fades to skies greyed light,
Swallowed in a sleeve.
Steadfast in memory bright,
Hearts, never relieved.
June 24th, 2020 12:03
Perception
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, finding \'reality in fantasy\' can be so wonderful.
December 2nd, 2019 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, finding \'reality in fantasy\' can be so wonderful.
December 2nd, 2019 01:57
Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may those dreams always be filled with colour.
November 29th, 2019 17:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, may those dreams always be filled with colour.
November 29th, 2019 17:16
Time
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening *BBB* thanks for sharing an excellent Poem ! Excellent STRUCTURE replete with Rhyme & Rhythm and an important SUBJECT ~ TIME ! We all waste time on TRIVIA ~ and neglect to focus on the important things in LIFE ~ It made us THINK ! More please !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙
November 29th, 2019 15:41
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening *BBB* thanks for sharing an excellent Poem ! Excellent STRUCTURE replete with Rhyme & Rhythm and an important SUBJECT ~ TIME ! We all waste time on TRIVIA ~ and neglect to focus on the important things in LIFE ~ It made us THINK ! More please !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙
November 29th, 2019 15:41
Nostalgia
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, tender, loving. I like it a lot.
November 28th, 2019 12:23
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful writing, tender, loving. I like it a lot.
November 28th, 2019 12:23
Distance
ron parrish aka wordman said:
pain,not far to travel i guess,but still hurts
November 27th, 2019 19:27
ron parrish aka wordman said:
pain,not far to travel i guess,but still hurts
November 27th, 2019 19:27
Distance
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ GOOD EVENING FRIEND ~ Welcome to MPS and thanks for your FIRST POEM. A perfect LOVE SONG ! Brian is my Fiance and we know the pain of Physical Distance because until recently I was in New Zealand on work experience and BRIAN was in the UK near London (11,500 MILES) Your poem speaks of TWO HEARTS out of sync and that pain really is greater than physical separation. Brian & I have both experienced that in previous relationships. When two hearts beat as ONE - we can bear the pain of Physical Separation ~ OK
Thanks for your poem ~ more please
MPS works by reading & commenting on each others POEMS ~ OK.
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
November 27th, 2019 17:46
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ GOOD EVENING FRIEND ~ Welcome to MPS and thanks for your FIRST POEM. A perfect LOVE SONG ! Brian is my Fiance and we know the pain of Physical Distance because until recently I was in New Zealand on work experience and BRIAN was in the UK near London (11,500 MILES) Your poem speaks of TWO HEARTS out of sync and that pain really is greater than physical separation. Brian & I have both experienced that in previous relationships. When two hearts beat as ONE - we can bear the pain of Physical Separation ~ OK
Thanks for your poem ~ more please
MPS works by reading & commenting on each others POEMS ~ OK.
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
November 27th, 2019 17:46
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