Comments received on poems by benevolentbluebabe
Finn
L. B. Mek said:
I find myself imagining the voice of Captain Ahab from Moby-Dick, in your work
August 5th, 2020 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
I find myself imagining the voice of Captain Ahab from Moby-Dick, in your work
August 5th, 2020 04:10
Blotting out thoughts
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write but I am sure that desolation will soon come to an end while your words fill our lives.
Andy
July 28th, 2020 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write but I am sure that desolation will soon come to an end while your words fill our lives.
Andy
July 28th, 2020 00:22
F*ck You
DianeKey6 said:
i can read this and understand your emotion as it irrors mine sometimes. a good fuck you helps us all. kindly Diane
July 16th, 2020 03:59
DianeKey6 said:
i can read this and understand your emotion as it irrors mine sometimes. a good fuck you helps us all. kindly Diane
July 16th, 2020 03:59
F*ck You
jarcher54 said:
I once read about a serious linguistic study of the use of the f-word in the military. The study determined that the participle (f-ing) form of the word indicated nothing other than that the next work is a noun, adjective, or verb (\"I f-ing never remember to take my f-ing hat.\"). The word added virtually no substantive meaning, tone, or emotion. The study concluded that the word was mainly a verbal signal that the speaker is one of the in-group. A significant observation was made that, when the speaker wanted to be taken seriously, they stopped using the word, like when showing some one how to load a weapon or describing an important assignment. Go figure!
July 15th, 2020 13:00
jarcher54 said:
I once read about a serious linguistic study of the use of the f-word in the military. The study determined that the participle (f-ing) form of the word indicated nothing other than that the next work is a noun, adjective, or verb (\"I f-ing never remember to take my f-ing hat.\"). The word added virtually no substantive meaning, tone, or emotion. The study concluded that the word was mainly a verbal signal that the speaker is one of the in-group. A significant observation was made that, when the speaker wanted to be taken seriously, they stopped using the word, like when showing some one how to load a weapon or describing an important assignment. Go figure!
July 15th, 2020 13:00
F*ck You
dusk arising said:
It is good to release frustration rather than bottle it up in the british ...stiff upper lip ... fashion of old.
Though your words do provide ample justification, I can imagine the tone of your voice, the vehemence expressed was to anyone in earshot, equally telling of the justification of the expletive.
July 15th, 2020 12:27
dusk arising said:
It is good to release frustration rather than bottle it up in the british ...stiff upper lip ... fashion of old.
Though your words do provide ample justification, I can imagine the tone of your voice, the vehemence expressed was to anyone in earshot, equally telling of the justification of the expletive.
July 15th, 2020 12:27
I miss you
Noah Malice said:
this really connects with me. so elegantly heartfelt.
July 12th, 2020 03:47
Noah Malice said:
this really connects with me. so elegantly heartfelt.
July 12th, 2020 03:47
Untitled no.1
dusk arising said:
Enduring a similar existence here. One wonders if we are returning to the egg, preparing to be reborn? How long before helplessness sets in?
July 10th, 2020 08:31
dusk arising said:
Enduring a similar existence here. One wonders if we are returning to the egg, preparing to be reborn? How long before helplessness sets in?
July 10th, 2020 08:31
Mi Amor
dusk arising said:
Indeed love conquers all and teaches us more and more about love itself.
Once discovered, it can be addictive (not referring to romantic love here) but where\'s the harm in that?
July 4th, 2020 00:22
dusk arising said:
Indeed love conquers all and teaches us more and more about love itself.
Once discovered, it can be addictive (not referring to romantic love here) but where\'s the harm in that?
July 4th, 2020 00:22
Heartache
peto said:
Ouch
Very courageous
I do love reading but when it\'s real and raw it can\'t be beat
I hope you are not as broken as the notes say
Your writing would suggest not
Superb read that goes straight for the heart
July 3rd, 2020 11:28
peto said:
Ouch
Very courageous
I do love reading but when it\'s real and raw it can\'t be beat
I hope you are not as broken as the notes say
Your writing would suggest not
Superb read that goes straight for the heart
July 3rd, 2020 11:28
Heartache
dusk arising said:
Lies are so awful. They cheat you, abuse you and place you somewhere unimportant in the liars life. When you know you are the most significant person in your partners life, to be displaced in this way is not unusually unforgivable.
I admire the way you have crafted this poem to entice your reader into a romantic frame of mind then to stab with the punch lines. For that is exactly what the realisation of being lied to feels like.
July 3rd, 2020 09:42
dusk arising said:
Lies are so awful. They cheat you, abuse you and place you somewhere unimportant in the liars life. When you know you are the most significant person in your partners life, to be displaced in this way is not unusually unforgivable.
I admire the way you have crafted this poem to entice your reader into a romantic frame of mind then to stab with the punch lines. For that is exactly what the realisation of being lied to feels like.
July 3rd, 2020 09:42
If you\'re a bird
scarlet poet said:
Very beautiful and very intriguing. Almost mysterious but comforting. I love this poem!
July 2nd, 2020 12:26
scarlet poet said:
Very beautiful and very intriguing. Almost mysterious but comforting. I love this poem!
July 2nd, 2020 12:26
Ages Past
Bragee said:
In the moment things always seem better.
In reflection without our the love action sensory details many memories turn to “bleh”.
July 1st, 2020 23:00
Bragee said:
In the moment things always seem better.
In reflection without our the love action sensory details many memories turn to “bleh”.
July 1st, 2020 23:00
Ages Past
dusk arising said:
On sunshiney days when the gameball is in your hands the past is nothing except that it brought you here.
July 1st, 2020 09:43
dusk arising said:
On sunshiney days when the gameball is in your hands the past is nothing except that it brought you here.
July 1st, 2020 09:43
Lovebirds
Fay Slimm. said:
The love in this ode reaches the heart and stays - -- mated for life birds such as these linger with other long after death.
June 29th, 2020 06:31
Fay Slimm. said:
The love in this ode reaches the heart and stays - -- mated for life birds such as these linger with other long after death.
June 29th, 2020 06:31
Lovebirds
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good morning FRIEND ~ Thanks for a heart warming ode on Monday Morning. Elegantly penned & rhymed ! We can all learn a lot about Love & Dedication from the Animal Kingdom ! Thanks for caring & sharing .!
Love Peace & Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
June 29th, 2020 04:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good morning FRIEND ~ Thanks for a heart warming ode on Monday Morning. Elegantly penned & rhymed ! We can all learn a lot about Love & Dedication from the Animal Kingdom ! Thanks for caring & sharing .!
Love Peace & Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
June 29th, 2020 04:30
Lovebirds
Neville said:
they dont call em lovebirds for nothing, do they... nicely poemed if I may say so....
Neville
June 29th, 2020 04:02
Neville said:
they dont call em lovebirds for nothing, do they... nicely poemed if I may say so....
Neville
June 29th, 2020 04:02
Dear M
MissileOfUncertainty said:
Omg this is literally so beautiful and I want to cry. You have AMAZING flow! I’m gonna favorite this so I can always look back on it. 🤭🥰
June 28th, 2020 17:05
MissileOfUncertainty said:
Omg this is literally so beautiful and I want to cry. You have AMAZING flow! I’m gonna favorite this so I can always look back on it. 🤭🥰
June 28th, 2020 17:05
Dear M
orchidee said:
Bit of French there at the end?! lol. Ohh, I dunno, I was no good at languages. heehee.
June 28th, 2020 10:33
orchidee said:
Bit of French there at the end?! lol. Ohh, I dunno, I was no good at languages. heehee.
June 28th, 2020 10:33
Crows
Fay Slimm. said:
An admirable comparison and well worded - showing crows can show us a lot - - thanks for these thoughts.
June 26th, 2020 04:48
Fay Slimm. said:
An admirable comparison and well worded - showing crows can show us a lot - - thanks for these thoughts.
June 26th, 2020 04:48
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