Comments received on poems by benevolentbluebabe



Mi Amor
dusk arising said:

Indeed love conquers all and teaches us more and more about love itself.

Once discovered, it can be addictive (not referring to romantic love here) but where\'s the harm in that?

July 4th, 2020 00:22

Heartache
peto said:

Ouch
Very courageous
I do love reading but when it\'s real and raw it can\'t be beat
I hope you are not as broken as the notes say
Your writing would suggest not
Superb read that goes straight for the heart

July 3rd, 2020 11:28

Heartache
dusk arising said:

Lies are so awful. They cheat you, abuse you and place you somewhere unimportant in the liars life. When you know you are the most significant person in your partners life, to be displaced in this way is not unusually unforgivable.

I admire the way you have crafted this poem to entice your reader into a romantic frame of mind then to stab with the punch lines. For that is exactly what the realisation of being lied to feels like.

July 3rd, 2020 09:42

If you\'re a bird
scarlet poet said:

Very beautiful and very intriguing. Almost mysterious but comforting. I love this poem!

July 2nd, 2020 12:26

Ages Past
Bragee said:

In the moment things always seem better.
In reflection without our the love action sensory details many memories turn to “bleh”.

July 1st, 2020 23:00

Ages Past
dusk arising said:

On sunshiney days when the gameball is in your hands the past is nothing except that it brought you here.

July 1st, 2020 09:43

Ages Past
siranswerer said:

I like it.

July 1st, 2020 09:26

Lovebirds
Fay Slimm said:

The love in this ode reaches the heart and stays - -- mated for life birds such as these linger with other long after death.

June 29th, 2020 06:31

Lovebirds
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good morning FRIEND ~ Thanks for a heart warming ode on Monday Morning. Elegantly penned & rhymed ! We can all learn a lot about Love & Dedication from the Animal Kingdom ! Thanks for caring & sharing .!

Love Peace & Joy
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛

June 29th, 2020 04:30

Lovebirds
Neville said:


they dont call em lovebirds for nothing, do they... nicely poemed if I may say so....

Neville

June 29th, 2020 04:02

Lovebirds
orchidee said:

Good write B.

June 29th, 2020 01:37

Dear M
MissileOfUncertainty said:

Omg this is literally so beautiful and I want to cry. You have AMAZING flow! I’m gonna favorite this so I can always look back on it. 🤭🥰

June 28th, 2020 17:05

Dear M
orchidee said:

Bit of French there at the end?! lol. Ohh, I dunno, I was no good at languages. heehee.

June 28th, 2020 10:33

Crows
Fay Slimm said:

An admirable comparison and well worded - showing crows can show us a lot - - thanks for these thoughts.

June 26th, 2020 04:48

Crows
Laura said:

benevolentbluebabe,

A fine write.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts in the author’s comment box! Very sensible.

Laura🌻

June 26th, 2020 04:39

Crows
orchidee said:

A fine write B. I quite like crows - their size, colour, etc.
Yes, I\'ve seen one alone, or even a few, in places deserted at present, e.g. school playing fields.
I thought - enjoying having the fields all to yourself, you crows (and other birds).

June 26th, 2020 01:58

On Dying Love
siranswerer said:

The sun always leads to pain,
Lifted from the start.
Ocean blue stain,
Love\'s never smart.

Sun fades to skies greyed light,
Swallowed in a sleeve.
Steadfast in memory bright,
Hearts, never relieved.

June 24th, 2020 12:03

Apple Blossoms
orchidee said:

Lovely write Blue.

May 2nd, 2020 01:49

Perception
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, finding \'reality in fantasy\' can be so wonderful.

December 2nd, 2019 01:57

Time
lovedud said:

love this, always dreaming ❤️

November 30th, 2019 17:08

An Iris
sarahlynne said:

An interesting perspective...nicely done.

November 30th, 2019 15:27

An Iris
ron parrish aka wordman said:

some great metaphors for love

November 30th, 2019 13:55

An Iris
orchidee said:

A fine write B.

November 30th, 2019 11:21

Time
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, may those dreams always be filled with colour.

November 29th, 2019 17:16

Time
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening *BBB* thanks for sharing an excellent Poem ! Excellent STRUCTURE replete with Rhyme & Rhythm and an important SUBJECT ~ TIME ! We all waste time on TRIVIA ~ and neglect to focus on the important things in LIFE ~ It made us THINK ! More please !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙

November 29th, 2019 15:41

Nostalgia
FredPeyer said:

Beautiful writing, tender, loving. I like it a lot.

November 28th, 2019 12:23

Distance
FredPeyer said:

Short and true, well written!

November 28th, 2019 12:21

Nostalgia
Unsub said:

Eloquently written piece of poetry. Enjoyed the tranquility of the emotion & mood.

Unsub.

November 28th, 2019 10:39

Distance
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true, good write.

Welcome to MPS.

November 28th, 2019 02:49

Distance
ron parrish aka wordman said:

pain,not far to travel i guess,but still hurts

November 27th, 2019 19:27

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