Comments received on poems by sarahlynne

Chosen Path
Zuzanna Musial said:

A wonderful reflection poem dear saralynne, I am enjoying your beautiful poem, dear poetess. It makes me feel like a dream. A long time ago I was young, wanted to conquered the world. Life chosen a different path...Thank you for the journey in words with you..Love it...Have a great New Year 2020...Zuzanna

February 2nd, 2020 20:46

Restless Feet
FineB said:

Thanks Sarahlynne,

A wonderful write

Keep writing FineB

January 7th, 2020 08:47

Restless Feet
Poetic Dan said:

Wow... I shall keep a look out for those snake pits!

Great stuff!

January 6th, 2020 14:59

Restless Feet
dusk arising said:

Fascinating read about contemporary politics. A certain president comes to mind. The blind man leading those who will not see. Thank goodness he isn\'t a dictator. But prepare for repercussions to his actions.

A good fun read.

January 6th, 2020 13:15

Ballet of Nature
Zuzanna Musial said:

A great Nature poem, at times life is not the way we would wish dear SarahLynne. I am totally immersed in your \'Ballet of Nature\' words. Great poem my friend! :-) ~ Zuzanna

November 29th, 2019 23:18

Ballet of Nature
FredPeyer said:

Love that last line! I guess we are writing our way to nowhere.

November 28th, 2019 12:41

FredPeyer said:

So well written! Not only could I see that house, I felt it.

November 28th, 2019 12:40

Olivia said:

Really enjoyed this, you can see the time you have put into each line. Very emotional and well written, it’s thoughtful but not too confusing so it really hits. Read it 3 times over.
If you’d like to checkout my 2 I’d really appreciate some feedback :) -Liv xo

November 25th, 2019 18:20

Poetic Dan said:

Wow.. Brilliant flow right to the end, like unique year drop. Thank you for your pen, have a wonderful day

November 25th, 2019 05:16

Goldfinch60 said:

This is a wonderful write, I was standing at the gate with you.
Welcome to MPS.

November 25th, 2019 01:51


Thanks for sharing SARAHLYNNE - Welcome to MPS. Thanks for sharing your first Poem ! It is very elegantly written and very readable and recitable - hallmarks of a GOOD POEM ! Nine perfectly rhyming couplets - our favourite !There is good rhythm throughout. The Subject is as important as the Structure - ABANDONED HOUSES ! I have seen some in New Jersey and they all looked very SAD - so I know what you mean. You have described the sad state of the House perfectly and also your own feelings ! It made the POEM all the more poignant when you revealed it was YOUR OLD HOUSE - WOOOOOOOOW ! I (Brian) have visited several of My Parents (who are still alive) former Homes but they were all well preserved and occupied ! Real Estate in the UK is much more expensive than in the USA and we have EIGHT TIMES less space per person than in the USA - OK. I share this site with Angela my Fiancee and we are buying our FIRST HOUSE next YEAR ! Thanks for sharing - MORE PLEASE !

Blessings & Peace & Joy

November 24th, 2019 16:36

ron parrish aka wordman said:

i have came upon old abandoned houses and wondered who lived there before,you painted a lovely image

November 24th, 2019 16:01