Comments received on poems by jubshaw
Autumn
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening JUBSHAW - Fast forward to Autumn - One of our fave Seasons as well ! Cool breezes aftertheat of Summer and ature slowing down to prepare for the Winter. The Aspens in Colorado Springs are awesome ! Morning walks in Autumn are always very special ! Winter is special too - but Autumn prepares us for Snowy Winter lockdowns ! Kids love the colours of Autumn and a trip tp New England in the Fall is on our LIST ! Thanks for sharing. Brian & I has SUMMERTIME draughted out for today - Please Check. You maight also be intersted in our FUSION POEM *Science Fact or Science Fiction* You have to click on DEVELOPING to see it. Yoy can add your own Poem on the same theme. If you write a FUSION - we promise to add a POEM - OK !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat !
June 3rd, 2020 14:57
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening JUBSHAW - Fast forward to Autumn - One of our fave Seasons as well ! Cool breezes aftertheat of Summer and ature slowing down to prepare for the Winter. The Aspens in Colorado Springs are awesome ! Morning walks in Autumn are always very special ! Winter is special too - but Autumn prepares us for Snowy Winter lockdowns ! Kids love the colours of Autumn and a trip tp New England in the Fall is on our LIST ! Thanks for sharing. Brian & I has SUMMERTIME draughted out for today - Please Check. You maight also be intersted in our FUSION POEM *Science Fact or Science Fiction* You have to click on DEVELOPING to see it. Yoy can add your own Poem on the same theme. If you write a FUSION - we promise to add a POEM - OK !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat !
June 3rd, 2020 14:57
Autumn
jarcher54 said:
My daughter was born on the first day of autumn, and we considered it for her name, but did not use it after all. I\'m glad you decided to name yours that. It was a sweet reminder of my daughter\'s birth. Having a name like that is like not having a name at all. You don\'t have an arbitrary appellation, a mere name... you ARE something! It must be lovely to be called something like that, like autumn. No more Tom, Dick, and Harry... only Wind, Rain, and Fire! And thank you for inventing something we all need... joy-bells!
June 3rd, 2020 02:25
jarcher54 said:
My daughter was born on the first day of autumn, and we considered it for her name, but did not use it after all. I\'m glad you decided to name yours that. It was a sweet reminder of my daughter\'s birth. Having a name like that is like not having a name at all. You don\'t have an arbitrary appellation, a mere name... you ARE something! It must be lovely to be called something like that, like autumn. No more Tom, Dick, and Harry... only Wind, Rain, and Fire! And thank you for inventing something we all need... joy-bells!
June 3rd, 2020 02:25
Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Jubshaw, such wonderful words about my favourite season. Nature\'s artwork certainly does gives us such wonderful images in autumn, as do your words.
Andy
June 3rd, 2020 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Jubshaw, such wonderful words about my favourite season. Nature\'s artwork certainly does gives us such wonderful images in autumn, as do your words.
Andy
June 3rd, 2020 00:53
Thank You,Teacher
Goldfinch60 said:
Teachers are so important in life, even in my dotage I can still recall the teachers that lead me to find the way to where I am now.
Andy
June 3rd, 2020 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Teachers are so important in life, even in my dotage I can still recall the teachers that lead me to find the way to where I am now.
Andy
June 3rd, 2020 00:27
Thank You,Teacher
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening JUBSHAW - Thanks for your second Poem - Excellent in Structure & Subject ! It is true of Teachers of All Grades & Subjects - They play a special role in Our Lives because they open the *Doors of Learning & Opportunity* for us ! I am Head of Aplied Science in a Vocational College so all my studnts are 16+ Some are Full-time and some are Day-release ore ALL Literate - Numerate & IT~Literate and study Subjects & Skills they have chosen. My job is to Teach & Explain the importance of Science in understanding and Performing as An Engineer - Caterer - Hair & Beauty - Paramedic etc etc. As TEACHERS we know we are special to our Students just as they are Special to us ~ AMEN ! ANGELA is a Tutor in Physiotherapy !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat !
Please check *YESTERDAY* ~ alsoour FUSION
*Science Fact or Science Fiction ~ Thanks A & B
June 2nd, 2020 18:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening JUBSHAW - Thanks for your second Poem - Excellent in Structure & Subject ! It is true of Teachers of All Grades & Subjects - They play a special role in Our Lives because they open the *Doors of Learning & Opportunity* for us ! I am Head of Aplied Science in a Vocational College so all my studnts are 16+ Some are Full-time and some are Day-release ore ALL Literate - Numerate & IT~Literate and study Subjects & Skills they have chosen. My job is to Teach & Explain the importance of Science in understanding and Performing as An Engineer - Caterer - Hair & Beauty - Paramedic etc etc. As TEACHERS we know we are special to our Students just as they are Special to us ~ AMEN ! ANGELA is a Tutor in Physiotherapy !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey Cat !
Please check *YESTERDAY* ~ alsoour FUSION
*Science Fact or Science Fiction ~ Thanks A & B
June 2nd, 2020 18:18
What is Silence?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE (on Lockdown !) Good Afternoon JUBSHAW - Welcome to MPS it is very intersting & interactive site which function s by reading (and commenting) on each others Poems. Thanks for your first poem - Well penned with a consistent Rhythm & Rhyme Pattern (abab cdcd etc) very recitable ! My Wife - Angela is Spanish and we have a Mantra *Silencio es d*Oro* implying that *Silence* is something of great value. Prior to Lockdown we lived in an increasingly cacophonous World ! The streets are a little quieter now and allow Natures *Sound of Silence* to filter through. I like your descripters : Snow - Mime - View through a closed Window - Meditation ! I wouls add Desert & High Hills & Arable Farmland ! Homes are seldom silent now with Radio - TV and now ALEXA ! We are too young (36 & 31) to remember the pre-electronic age and even Shops are now filled with MUSAK. Thanks for sharing
Shalom ~ Brian & Angela & Smokey
Please check our site - Thanks A & B
May 26th, 2020 09:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE (on Lockdown !) Good Afternoon JUBSHAW - Welcome to MPS it is very intersting & interactive site which function s by reading (and commenting) on each others Poems. Thanks for your first poem - Well penned with a consistent Rhythm & Rhyme Pattern (abab cdcd etc) very recitable ! My Wife - Angela is Spanish and we have a Mantra *Silencio es d*Oro* implying that *Silence* is something of great value. Prior to Lockdown we lived in an increasingly cacophonous World ! The streets are a little quieter now and allow Natures *Sound of Silence* to filter through. I like your descripters : Snow - Mime - View through a closed Window - Meditation ! I wouls add Desert & High Hills & Arable Farmland ! Homes are seldom silent now with Radio - TV and now ALEXA ! We are too young (36 & 31) to remember the pre-electronic age and even Shops are now filled with MUSAK. Thanks for sharing
Shalom ~ Brian & Angela & Smokey
Please check our site - Thanks A & B
May 26th, 2020 09:20
What is Silence?
orchidee said:
A fine write J. Silence is golden - when I\'m not singing, that is! heehee.
May 26th, 2020 01:33
orchidee said:
A fine write J. Silence is golden - when I\'m not singing, that is! heehee.
May 26th, 2020 01:33
What is Silence?
Goldfinch60 said:
Silence in life can be very valuable on many occasions and it can be so special at times.
Welcome to MPS.
May 26th, 2020 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Silence in life can be very valuable on many occasions and it can be so special at times.
Welcome to MPS.
May 26th, 2020 01:32
