Comments received on poems by Vacancy
Alone
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I relate to this like you wouldn\'t believe,..had to mark it a favourite🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟You have a great talent. I agree with petos comment above😀✌️🕊
January 13th, 2022 15:04
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
I relate to this like you wouldn\'t believe,..had to mark it a favourite🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟You have a great talent. I agree with petos comment above😀✌️🕊
January 13th, 2022 15:04
Death Bed
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Sad,but also very contemplative,..it made me think. That\'s one of the aspects of a good writer,..to make the reader think,..and feel. Bravo! Mission accomplished. Thanks for sharing🌟😀✌🕊
January 13th, 2022 14:54
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Sad,but also very contemplative,..it made me think. That\'s one of the aspects of a good writer,..to make the reader think,..and feel. Bravo! Mission accomplished. Thanks for sharing🌟😀✌🕊
January 13th, 2022 14:54
I Dont Know What To Do
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive words Vacancy, I hope all will be well soon.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive words Vacancy, I hope all will be well soon.
Andy
September 8th, 2021 00:15
Death Bed
L. B. Mek said:
we - too readily, assume
being born is us being \'switched-on\'
and with unfounded maths
we suppose, death is being \'switched-off\'
into blissful nothingness...
yet, I ponder
who remembers being \'switched-on\'
when was it exactly
when, the biology books say? or earlier
when we\'re fighting millions of sperms
for a fight at life, or dare we contemplate
even earlier?
and later, too
is being \'switched-off\', like falling asleep
only deeper and far more profound
where we\'re utilising, even more
of our mostly dormant, cognitive capabilities?
(you think my theorising, pointless?
cos it be cyclically endless
a loop of wishful guessing\'s, loop-holes
to escape, a dreary reality?)
oh, I agree
maybe: I should just concentrate
on the now - fingertip of opportunity, before me
and the past, searing sensation of regret\'s, reality...
just, Maybe?
(a wonderfully thought provoking read
thanks for sharing, and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
September 6th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
we - too readily, assume
being born is us being \'switched-on\'
and with unfounded maths
we suppose, death is being \'switched-off\'
into blissful nothingness...
yet, I ponder
who remembers being \'switched-on\'
when was it exactly
when, the biology books say? or earlier
when we\'re fighting millions of sperms
for a fight at life, or dare we contemplate
even earlier?
and later, too
is being \'switched-off\', like falling asleep
only deeper and far more profound
where we\'re utilising, even more
of our mostly dormant, cognitive capabilities?
(you think my theorising, pointless?
cos it be cyclically endless
a loop of wishful guessing\'s, loop-holes
to escape, a dreary reality?)
oh, I agree
maybe: I should just concentrate
on the now - fingertip of opportunity, before me
and the past, searing sensation of regret\'s, reality...
just, Maybe?
(a wonderfully thought provoking read
thanks for sharing, and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)
September 6th, 2021 05:44
Alone
peto said:
Great read
No need to suffer in silence when you have the ability to write like this
Look forward to reading more
May 28th, 2020 09:02
peto said:
Great read
No need to suffer in silence when you have the ability to write like this
Look forward to reading more
May 28th, 2020 09:02
Empty Chair
Saxon Crow said:
Hey V. Another good poem. I love your writing style!
February 19th, 2020 01:56
Saxon Crow said:
Hey V. Another good poem. I love your writing style!
February 19th, 2020 01:56
Falling Behind
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FRIEND ~ This one thing I (BRIAN) do ~ forgetting (and hopefully forsaking) those things which are in the past. I press on with a wiser and renewed mind ~ To the high prize of life itself with all its possibilities & infinite opportunities ! We are doomed if we cant learn from our own mistakes. Our life on Earth is (the) Gods Gift to US ~ what we do with it is our Gift back to (the) God(s) ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Love - Joy & Peace
Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
February 17th, 2020 15:38
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing FRIEND ~ This one thing I (BRIAN) do ~ forgetting (and hopefully forsaking) those things which are in the past. I press on with a wiser and renewed mind ~ To the high prize of life itself with all its possibilities & infinite opportunities ! We are doomed if we cant learn from our own mistakes. Our life on Earth is (the) Gods Gift to US ~ what we do with it is our Gift back to (the) God(s) ! Thanks for caring & sharing !
Love - Joy & Peace
Brian & Angela 💛💛💛
February 17th, 2020 15:38
Falling Behind
Poetic Dan said:
That it did many years ago, to the point I was just robbing car stereos. The problem was coming back from the rush, as the darkened heart got hardened up. Looking back, time was the only answer!
Powerfully moving, thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
Keep giving it!
February 17th, 2020 03:49
Poetic Dan said:
That it did many years ago, to the point I was just robbing car stereos. The problem was coming back from the rush, as the darkened heart got hardened up. Looking back, time was the only answer!
Powerfully moving, thank you for sharing
Much peace and respect
Keep giving it!
February 17th, 2020 03:49
Falling Behind
Goldfinch60 said:
Good dark write but in the end your heart beats again and in that beating it will beat the darkness and light will be within you again. Look forward to the light.
Andy
February 17th, 2020 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Good dark write but in the end your heart beats again and in that beating it will beat the darkness and light will be within you again. Look forward to the light.
Andy
February 17th, 2020 01:08
Night
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning FRIEND - Thanks for an elegant PANTOUM which allows a repetition of each perfect line ! It is a form well suited to a melancholic poem. For me it painted a picture of a bygone age (Victorian ?) when all was choaking smoke and sewage ! Or perhaps it is a metaphor for life today in the inner Industrial Cities - the smoke of grime & crime - and the sewage of wasted lifes ! Or perhaps it is all in the mind as much of our Poetry is ! Thanks for sharing - more please !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
February 16th, 2020 03:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Morning FRIEND - Thanks for an elegant PANTOUM which allows a repetition of each perfect line ! It is a form well suited to a melancholic poem. For me it painted a picture of a bygone age (Victorian ?) when all was choaking smoke and sewage ! Or perhaps it is a metaphor for life today in the inner Industrial Cities - the smoke of grime & crime - and the sewage of wasted lifes ! Or perhaps it is all in the mind as much of our Poetry is ! Thanks for sharing - more please !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
February 16th, 2020 03:56
Night
Goldfinch60 said:
That red moon is there for you to show you the way, that red will turn into yellow and white and the light from it will then comfort you into a wonderful life.
Andy
February 16th, 2020 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
That red moon is there for you to show you the way, that red will turn into yellow and white and the light from it will then comfort you into a wonderful life.
Andy
February 16th, 2020 01:11
Night
Saxon Crow said:
You create such imagery for me V. Total fan of yours!
February 15th, 2020 15:31
Saxon Crow said:
You create such imagery for me V. Total fan of yours!
February 15th, 2020 15:31
Absorb
Saxon Crow said:
V I love how you express yourself through your poetry
February 15th, 2020 03:00
Saxon Crow said:
V I love how you express yourself through your poetry
February 15th, 2020 03:00
Car Ride
Goldfinch60 said:
Your life is still before you, follow that light and the love of the world will always be with you. Great write.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Your life is still before you, follow that light and the love of the world will always be with you. Great write.
Andy
February 15th, 2020 01:07
Car Ride
Neville said:
Darn write it is.... and well poemed my friend.... thoroughly enjoyed....
Neville
February 14th, 2020 03:58
Neville said:
Darn write it is.... and well poemed my friend.... thoroughly enjoyed....
Neville
February 14th, 2020 03:58
Car Ride
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic stuff.. Ghost of the passed, can\'t catch the car! Must be why I like the motorbike so much as they can\'t even get me in the traffic!
Sing on and be free, I had a great mixture of tunes as your words accompany me.
Thanks for the inspiration and sharing
Much peace and respect
February 13th, 2020 23:16
Poetic Dan said:
Fantastic stuff.. Ghost of the passed, can\'t catch the car! Must be why I like the motorbike so much as they can\'t even get me in the traffic!
Sing on and be free, I had a great mixture of tunes as your words accompany me.
Thanks for the inspiration and sharing
Much peace and respect
February 13th, 2020 23:16
Car Ride
Saxon Crow said:
\"I could scream mountains....\" Amazing line. I LOVE this poem. Totally faved!
February 13th, 2020 15:01
Saxon Crow said:
\"I could scream mountains....\" Amazing line. I LOVE this poem. Totally faved!
February 13th, 2020 15:01
Fear yourself
Daydream Believer said:
We can become our own obstacle in life. You made me think of a song from a band called White Lies. It’s called Death, but he sings about how fear takes ahold of him. I think you described that so well here.
Welcome to MPS
February 10th, 2020 05:38
Daydream Believer said:
We can become our own obstacle in life. You made me think of a song from a band called White Lies. It’s called Death, but he sings about how fear takes ahold of him. I think you described that so well here.
Welcome to MPS
February 10th, 2020 05:38
