Comments received on poems by Amon
THE UNFULFILLED DREAMS OF AN ORPHAN
Rocky Lagou said:
What a touching piece Amon! It truly possesses character and vigor. I see the yearning! 👏
March 14th, 2022 08:05
Rocky Lagou said:
What a touching piece Amon! It truly possesses character and vigor. I see the yearning! 👏
March 14th, 2022 08:05
THE UNFULFILLED DREAMS OF AN ORPHAN
L. B. Mek said:
I was a little lost
by your phrase
\'to one day jell my father\',
dear poet
not sure I grasped
what you fully intended to express
in this poem;
but those longing, threads
you invoked
to that disrupted triangle
of grandfather, father and son
makes this an emotive read for me,
(I never met any of my grandparents)
thanks for sharing
March 14th, 2022 06:55
L. B. Mek said:
I was a little lost
by your phrase
\'to one day jell my father\',
dear poet
not sure I grasped
what you fully intended to express
in this poem;
but those longing, threads
you invoked
to that disrupted triangle
of grandfather, father and son
makes this an emotive read for me,
(I never met any of my grandparents)
thanks for sharing
March 14th, 2022 06:55
FREED
Rocky Lagou said:
This was a poem so filled with truth! \"To die is gain, not loss\" is such a powerful line and the whole poem expresses the idea of the death so well. People often weep the dead but then overlook the fact that they often neglected them while they were alive. Well done! 💖
February 28th, 2022 11:48
Rocky Lagou said:
This was a poem so filled with truth! \"To die is gain, not loss\" is such a powerful line and the whole poem expresses the idea of the death so well. People often weep the dead but then overlook the fact that they often neglected them while they were alive. Well done! 💖
February 28th, 2022 11:48
FREED
L. B. Mek said:
so well written
lovely to read your work again, dear poet
thank you!
February 28th, 2022 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
so well written
lovely to read your work again, dear poet
thank you!
February 28th, 2022 06:31
BANE OF LIFE
Rocky Lagou said:
\"Perseverance is the weapon to victory\" is such a line to remember! Very powerful work. We must push on in order to survive in this hectic world. Great poem! 👏💖
February 17th, 2022 09:22
Rocky Lagou said:
\"Perseverance is the weapon to victory\" is such a line to remember! Very powerful work. We must push on in order to survive in this hectic world. Great poem! 👏💖
February 17th, 2022 09:22
NECESSITY
orchidee said:
It\'s necessary for me to say - good write Amon! :)
December 14th, 2021 09:34
orchidee said:
It\'s necessary for me to say - good write Amon! :)
December 14th, 2021 09:34
LOVE
dusk arising said:
Love is lifes rainbow and only arrives when all is right.
December 10th, 2021 19:35
dusk arising said:
Love is lifes rainbow and only arrives when all is right.
December 10th, 2021 19:35
LOVE
L. B. Mek said:
it can, when we all join hands
or at least
that\'s, what I: choose to believe!
such an uplifting read
thank you! dear poet
December 10th, 2021 06:17
L. B. Mek said:
it can, when we all join hands
or at least
that\'s, what I: choose to believe!
such an uplifting read
thank you! dear poet
December 10th, 2021 06:17
FABULOUS GOD
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ve found that God is a touchy subject within these walls of MPS. There are those who believe, and t hose who don\'t believe. Personally, I do believe, and I\'m trying to understand those who don\'t. They have their reasons, and to them they are legitimate reasons. I wish, for the sake of all humanity that God could speak to us all at once and clarify his and our existence in this universe. Not that I question God\'s motives towards us , but there are those who do and don\'t understand. Excellent write Amon. ; ) AP
May 11th, 2021 11:38
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ve found that God is a touchy subject within these walls of MPS. There are those who believe, and t hose who don\'t believe. Personally, I do believe, and I\'m trying to understand those who don\'t. They have their reasons, and to them they are legitimate reasons. I wish, for the sake of all humanity that God could speak to us all at once and clarify his and our existence in this universe. Not that I question God\'s motives towards us , but there are those who do and don\'t understand. Excellent write Amon. ; ) AP
May 11th, 2021 11:38
SORRY
Accidental Poet said:
The past is exactly that. The future is there for you to reinvent yourself. Be the person you can be proud of. By the way, excellent write. ; ) AP
May 11th, 2021 11:08
Accidental Poet said:
The past is exactly that. The future is there for you to reinvent yourself. Be the person you can be proud of. By the way, excellent write. ; ) AP
May 11th, 2021 11:08
THE CRUX OF LIFE
L. B. Mek said:
I like it best when the Poet utilises art, as their exclamation point
to the insightful points: excavated, with their poetic words...
a wonderful message, good write
April 22nd, 2021 04:07
L. B. Mek said:
I like it best when the Poet utilises art, as their exclamation point
to the insightful points: excavated, with their poetic words...
a wonderful message, good write
April 22nd, 2021 04:07
THE CRUX OF LIFE
Goldfinch60 said:
This is where experience in life begins, it cannot be taught but makes us what we become.
Andy
April 22nd, 2021 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
This is where experience in life begins, it cannot be taught but makes us what we become.
Andy
April 22nd, 2021 00:20
THE CRUX OF LIFE
dusk arising said:
Without darkness how can we appreciate the light. Pleasure is all the richer for sufferings endured beforehand. All these wisdoms are contained in your words today. Good stuff indeed.
April 21st, 2021 09:28
dusk arising said:
Without darkness how can we appreciate the light. Pleasure is all the richer for sufferings endured beforehand. All these wisdoms are contained in your words today. Good stuff indeed.
April 21st, 2021 09:28
TREASURES OF THE SNOW
Amon said:
thanks Dusk but my \'divers\' here is an adjective meaning several; of varying types
April 21st, 2021 03:59
Amon said:
thanks Dusk but my \'divers\' here is an adjective meaning several; of varying types
April 21st, 2021 03:59
TREASURES OF THE SNOW
dusk arising said:
\"Divers troubles had befallen me\" - the \'bends\' perhaps - or running out of oxygen - a shark attack perhaps?
I think you may have meant \'diverse troubles\' but thanks for a good laugh.
April 20th, 2021 05:36
dusk arising said:
\"Divers troubles had befallen me\" - the \'bends\' perhaps - or running out of oxygen - a shark attack perhaps?
I think you may have meant \'diverse troubles\' but thanks for a good laugh.
April 20th, 2021 05:36
FABULOUS GOD
Goldfinch60 said:
If you god exists why did he not help my wife overcome her dementia and death!! She had prayed to him and sung his praises all her long life but was not there when needed!!
January 27th, 2021 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
If you god exists why did he not help my wife overcome her dementia and death!! She had prayed to him and sung his praises all her long life but was not there when needed!!
January 27th, 2021 01:41
FABULOUS GOD
orchidee said:
We all need spiritual understanding, as you will know. A fine write Amon.
There are tones of Psalm 139 in this.
I like \'words....before they leak\'. I think it could equally well be \'speak\'.
January 26th, 2021 09:43
orchidee said:
We all need spiritual understanding, as you will know. A fine write Amon.
There are tones of Psalm 139 in this.
I like \'words....before they leak\'. I think it could equally well be \'speak\'.
January 26th, 2021 09:43
SACRED TEMPLE
dusk arising said:
Don\'t tell me, let me guess. A man told you all this as a part of your brainwashing.
January 22nd, 2021 10:53
dusk arising said:
Don\'t tell me, let me guess. A man told you all this as a part of your brainwashing.
January 22nd, 2021 10:53
SACRED TEMPLE
orchidee said:
A lovely write Amon. And not just a \'nice write\' but a reality for believers.
I like \'conformation\'. It could be \'confirmation\' as well, I think.
January 22nd, 2021 10:00
orchidee said:
A lovely write Amon. And not just a \'nice write\' but a reality for believers.
I like \'conformation\'. It could be \'confirmation\' as well, I think.
January 22nd, 2021 10:00
WHEN THE DEVIL GOES HUNTING
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Amon, those ladies can be so alluring yet so dangerous.
Andy
January 9th, 2021 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Amon, those ladies can be so alluring yet so dangerous.
Andy
January 9th, 2021 01:26
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