Comments received on poems by Moyu Aoki



Spring
Cassia DeSousa said:

Hello Moyu Aoki
This is very lovely as we are indulging in springtime ..tchau..Cassia

April 16th, 2022 10:25

Spring
jarcher54 said:

Clever... it\'s hard to use modern, technology-based imagery in a nature poem, but you did it nicely.

April 15th, 2022 12:31

Spring
jarcher54 said:

I like how you started with nature, then abruptly inserted yourself into the poem, and finally tied it all together. Very playful.

April 15th, 2022 12:29

Spring
Rocky Lagou said:

Yes! I love this succinct yet powerful poem. The use of the word \"molt\" to reference a new season is so clever.

April 14th, 2022 08:25

Spring
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful, thanks for sharing

April 14th, 2022 05:31

untitled no.6
dusk arising said:

And had it shipped to timbuktu, now the hills and valleys look so much cleaner.

July 3rd, 2020 08:19

untitled no.6
Neville said:

I dont know where this is coming from, but I would sure like to take a copy home with me....

July 3rd, 2020 03:01

untitled no.5
dusk arising said:

I hope there were no slugs involved in those memories.

July 1st, 2020 06:38

untitled no.5
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks MOYU for a soothing 6 4 Decaku (10 syllables in ENGLISH) ~ Memories (mem*ries) only has two in spoken English ! Moss does contain hidden secrets & memories ~ as your Ode says. Thanks for enlightening & caring & sharing ~ AMEN

Peace & Joy & Love
Angela & Brian 💛💛
Please check my Ballad *ANGELA MY WIFE* Thanks B !

July 1st, 2020 03:39

untitled no.4
dusk arising said:

Icarus dickerous dock, the poet flew round the clock.

June 30th, 2020 06:23

untitled no.4
Neville said:


when you have enough to fly.. then fly, but be sure to call me ..

June 30th, 2020 06:13

untitled no.3
dusk arising said:

many look, few see.

June 29th, 2020 07:30

untitled no.3
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Morning MOYU ! Thank you for a very calming (7 3 7) triplet on a Monday Morning. So few words ~ so much wisdom !

Peace & Joy & Love
Angela & Brian 💛💛💛

June 29th, 2020 04:23

untitled no.3
Neville said:

although very much enjoyed at face value.. I am sure this is far cleverer than many might imagine... top marks from me regardless...

Neville

June 29th, 2020 03:52

untitled no.2
dusk arising said:

and in the trees my tomorrows slept.

June 28th, 2020 03:54

untitled no.1
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Excellent
Filling in blanks is a hobby of mine

June 27th, 2020 07:41

untitled no.1
dusk arising said:

Have the op. and fire them too!

June 27th, 2020 04:45