Comments received on poems by carolkirby1952
Robin Williams
jbritt321 said:
So many people living with their own private pain. All of us, really. So grateful for the joy and wisdom he left behind.
December 5th, 2020 21:05
jbritt321 said:
So many people living with their own private pain. All of us, really. So grateful for the joy and wisdom he left behind.
December 5th, 2020 21:05
A World Without Them
dusk arising said:
As will the children and grandchildren live in a world without us.
With grace we hand over the reins of the world to them as did our elders.
Now is the time of sitting back and watching the world change, admiring the fullness of fruit which still falls from the tree.
December 4th, 2020 07:10
dusk arising said:
As will the children and grandchildren live in a world without us.
With grace we hand over the reins of the world to them as did our elders.
Now is the time of sitting back and watching the world change, admiring the fullness of fruit which still falls from the tree.
December 4th, 2020 07:10
A World Without Them
carolkirby1952 said:
Life will carry on in me. And take me to a place beyond memories. A place beyond duality. A place where the souls unite in pure perfect peace.
Thank you for your encouraging comment.
December 4th, 2020 02:45
carolkirby1952 said:
Life will carry on in me. And take me to a place beyond memories. A place beyond duality. A place where the souls unite in pure perfect peace.
Thank you for your encouraging comment.
December 4th, 2020 02:45
A World Without Them
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive write but you will carry on in your life and treasure the memories.
Andy
December 4th, 2020 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive write but you will carry on in your life and treasure the memories.
Andy
December 4th, 2020 02:06
Sacred Breath
Goldfinch60 said:
May that breath be forever with you and take you to your one true love.
Andy
December 2nd, 2020 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
May that breath be forever with you and take you to your one true love.
Andy
December 2nd, 2020 01:28
Sacred Breath
orchidee said:
Good write Carol.
I not got the hang of it though. I tried to save air by holding my breath for 24 hours one day. I didn\'t feel very well afterwards. Dunno why! (Note to self: Do shut up now Orchi. lol).
December 1st, 2020 04:10
orchidee said:
Good write Carol.
I not got the hang of it though. I tried to save air by holding my breath for 24 hours one day. I didn\'t feel very well afterwards. Dunno why! (Note to self: Do shut up now Orchi. lol).
December 1st, 2020 04:10
Caught You
L. B. Mek said:
witty and with much more depth than its seemingly cat-n-mouse aesthetics,
fun read
November 30th, 2020 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
witty and with much more depth than its seemingly cat-n-mouse aesthetics,
fun read
November 30th, 2020 05:32
Caught You
Goldfinch60 said:
Well you caught me in your words Carol.
Welcome to MPS.
November 29th, 2020 15:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Well you caught me in your words Carol.
Welcome to MPS.
November 29th, 2020 15:25
Caught You
orchidee said:
A fine write Carol.
You caught me singing? Other poets may have. But they can\'t tell if it was me singing or two cats fighting! lol.
That\'s all you gotta learn to avoid on here. heehee.
November 29th, 2020 11:13
orchidee said:
A fine write Carol.
You caught me singing? Other poets may have. But they can\'t tell if it was me singing or two cats fighting! lol.
That\'s all you gotta learn to avoid on here. heehee.
November 29th, 2020 11:13
Caught You
Michael Edwards said:
A good one - and a big welcome to the site - it is really simple to use and look forward to seeing more of your work.
November 29th, 2020 09:23
Michael Edwards said:
A good one - and a big welcome to the site - it is really simple to use and look forward to seeing more of your work.
November 29th, 2020 09:23
Caught You
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning Carol ~ Welcome to MPS. It is a proactive sit & operates by Reading & commenting on each others Poetry ! Thanks for your first Poem ~ please check our site ~ Thanks A & B.
Your Poem states a truism *Love is a tender trap* for Moment - Thought & Omission. Im 37 and got married (for the first time) to Angela (32) 8 months ago for True Love ! Thanks for sharing !
Love Peace & Joy ~ Brian & Angela
November 29th, 2020 07:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning Carol ~ Welcome to MPS. It is a proactive sit & operates by Reading & commenting on each others Poetry ! Thanks for your first Poem ~ please check our site ~ Thanks A & B.
Your Poem states a truism *Love is a tender trap* for Moment - Thought & Omission. Im 37 and got married (for the first time) to Angela (32) 8 months ago for True Love ! Thanks for sharing !
Love Peace & Joy ~ Brian & Angela
November 29th, 2020 07:09
