Comments received on poems by Shearonder1987
God\'s accountability
dusk arising said:
So refreshing to see someone posting fairy tales on MPS
January 29th, 2021 12:07
dusk arising said:
So refreshing to see someone posting fairy tales on MPS
January 29th, 2021 12:07
Soul Tied
L. B. Mek said:
I will admit that notion of \'soul\', is so divisively over-populated with self-indulgent ideology\'s its meaning is hard to identify with wholeheartedly, and yet:
\'The love we share will always be wise.\'
are words of pure distilled truth, no one can fail to gravitate towards,
a wonderfully - life-affirmingly (?): sincere write my friend,
thanks for sharing
January 8th, 2021 06:40
L. B. Mek said:
I will admit that notion of \'soul\', is so divisively over-populated with self-indulgent ideology\'s its meaning is hard to identify with wholeheartedly, and yet:
\'The love we share will always be wise.\'
are words of pure distilled truth, no one can fail to gravitate towards,
a wonderfully - life-affirmingly (?): sincere write my friend,
thanks for sharing
January 8th, 2021 06:40
I LOVE ME
SiwelMadaC said:
I thought it was necessary for the contrast and color selection! Damn. Second poem I\'ve read from you. This poem goes hard!! I enjoy the different ways I keep reading it. The build up is genius!! Thank you for sharing. Guess I\'ll go on to the third now.
January 7th, 2021 08:41
SiwelMadaC said:
I thought it was necessary for the contrast and color selection! Damn. Second poem I\'ve read from you. This poem goes hard!! I enjoy the different ways I keep reading it. The build up is genius!! Thank you for sharing. Guess I\'ll go on to the third now.
January 7th, 2021 08:41
One moment
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment in our lives is so important, enjoy every one of them.
Andy
January 6th, 2021 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Every moment in our lives is so important, enjoy every one of them.
Andy
January 6th, 2021 01:36
Forever Mines
Poetic Dan said:
I definitely loved this! Perfectly timed to send to the wife or read out loud to her!
Much peace and respect!
January 4th, 2021 07:04
Poetic Dan said:
I definitely loved this! Perfectly timed to send to the wife or read out loud to her!
Much peace and respect!
January 4th, 2021 07:04
Forever Mines
L. B. Mek said:
sings a pulse\'s beat so purely - to a chosen deity or that special somebody you\'ve intrusted
with what meaning: you\'ve gleaned from life...
what a wonderful read you\'ve shared,
Happy New year
January 4th, 2021 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
sings a pulse\'s beat so purely - to a chosen deity or that special somebody you\'ve intrusted
with what meaning: you\'ve gleaned from life...
what a wonderful read you\'ve shared,
Happy New year
January 4th, 2021 05:54
Forever Mines
Goldfinch60 said:
Good loving words Shearonder, that love will always be there.
Andy
January 4th, 2021 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good loving words Shearonder, that love will always be there.
Andy
January 4th, 2021 01:48
Peace
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful thoughts Shearonder, it may not be fantasy if people could all work together in peace and love.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 02:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Such wonderful thoughts Shearonder, it may not be fantasy if people could all work together in peace and love.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 02:36
The potential
L. B. Mek said:
life affirmingly powerful, who needs red bull: when we\'ve got your words to gift us our wings... lol
great write, have a great weekend dear Poet 🍻
December 24th, 2020 05:57
L. B. Mek said:
life affirmingly powerful, who needs red bull: when we\'ve got your words to gift us our wings... lol
great write, have a great weekend dear Poet 🍻
December 24th, 2020 05:57
The potential
Goldfinch60 said:
There are some very special people that come into our lives and we must keep them close to us at all times.
Andy
December 24th, 2020 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
There are some very special people that come into our lives and we must keep them close to us at all times.
Andy
December 24th, 2020 01:31
Imagine That
Poetic Dan said:
We are the Kings & Queens of this rock! With words like yours keeping us afloat....
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
December 23rd, 2020 23:15
Poetic Dan said:
We are the Kings & Queens of this rock! With words like yours keeping us afloat....
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
December 23rd, 2020 23:15
The potential
Poetic Dan said:
Outstandingly done! Can\'t help but feel powerful after this... Definitely not going back to sleep now...
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
December 23rd, 2020 23:05
Poetic Dan said:
Outstandingly done! Can\'t help but feel powerful after this... Definitely not going back to sleep now...
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
December 23rd, 2020 23:05
Imagine That
RDS said:
Nice positive vibes and sweet pace to the rhymes. Good post.
J
December 23rd, 2020 16:03
RDS said:
Nice positive vibes and sweet pace to the rhymes. Good post.
J
December 23rd, 2020 16:03
My Better Half
L. B. Mek said:
a beautiful dedication, full of raw passion and devotion,
thank you for sharing!
December 22nd, 2020 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
a beautiful dedication, full of raw passion and devotion,
thank you for sharing!
December 22nd, 2020 05:47
Weak for your mind
L. B. Mek said:
reads like love Poetry penned by those intellectual elite, doing everything they can to complicate Nature\'s simple truth\'s, in all things extenuated by elitist vocabulary\'s, as if \'attraction\' is experienced different by what IQ numbers we\'re biologically gifted... pfffttt, lmao!
forgive me, it\'s that Monday morning coffee, I\'m only joking dear Poet, truly
indeed, you\'ve penned a wonderfully worded declaration of appreciation for that most attractive aesthetic in all humanity: a beautiful mind...
a great write!
December 21st, 2020 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
reads like love Poetry penned by those intellectual elite, doing everything they can to complicate Nature\'s simple truth\'s, in all things extenuated by elitist vocabulary\'s, as if \'attraction\' is experienced different by what IQ numbers we\'re biologically gifted... pfffttt, lmao!
forgive me, it\'s that Monday morning coffee, I\'m only joking dear Poet, truly
indeed, you\'ve penned a wonderfully worded declaration of appreciation for that most attractive aesthetic in all humanity: a beautiful mind...
a great write!
December 21st, 2020 05:15
I LOVE ME
Goldfinch60 said:
That love within you and within each of us must be spread to others and maybe one day the love of all will be the norm and the world will be a better place.
Andy
December 21st, 2020 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
That love within you and within each of us must be spread to others and maybe one day the love of all will be the norm and the world will be a better place.
Andy
December 21st, 2020 01:36
I LOVE ME
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Shironder: Apologies, but I have to agree with them above: for me It\'s impossible to read.
But there\'s two commonalities which link all of us: we\'re all on the, er, mature side and male.
So perhaps you perceive your readership as young folk, female (who haven\'t complained) all with 20/20 Vision? :-)
Dave
December 21st, 2020 01:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Shironder: Apologies, but I have to agree with them above: for me It\'s impossible to read.
But there\'s two commonalities which link all of us: we\'re all on the, er, mature side and male.
So perhaps you perceive your readership as young folk, female (who haven\'t complained) all with 20/20 Vision? :-)
Dave
December 21st, 2020 01:11
I LOVE ME
FredPeyer said:
Shearonder, Robert and Orchie are right, it is a little hard to read. But I like the content! Before we can spread love all around, we do have to love ourselves! Well penned!
December 20th, 2020 12:07
FredPeyer said:
Shearonder, Robert and Orchie are right, it is a little hard to read. But I like the content! Before we can spread love all around, we do have to love ourselves! Well penned!
December 20th, 2020 12:07
I LOVE ME
orchidee said:
Good write, but it\'s starting to give me a headache, I know that! Them colours. lol.
December 20th, 2020 11:13
orchidee said:
Good write, but it\'s starting to give me a headache, I know that! Them colours. lol.
December 20th, 2020 11:13
I LOVE ME
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
This red-on-black presentation is nearly unreadable.
December 20th, 2020 10:03
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
This red-on-black presentation is nearly unreadable.
December 20th, 2020 10:03
Value of respect
RDS said:
Nice sentiments Shearonder, even having this presence of mind 6/10 times makes us a better person.
J
December 19th, 2020 17:33
RDS said:
Nice sentiments Shearonder, even having this presence of mind 6/10 times makes us a better person.
J
December 19th, 2020 17:33
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