Comments received on poems by Shearonder1987
Weak for your mind
L. B. Mek said:
reads like love Poetry penned by those intellectual elite, doing everything they can to complicate Nature\'s simple truth\'s, in all things extenuated by elitist vocabulary\'s, as if \'attraction\' is experienced different by what IQ numbers we\'re biologically gifted... pfffttt, lmao!
forgive me, it\'s that Monday morning coffee, I\'m only joking dear Poet, truly
indeed, you\'ve penned a wonderfully worded declaration of appreciation for that most attractive aesthetic in all humanity: a beautiful mind...
a great write!
December 21st, 2020 05:15
L. B. Mek said:
reads like love Poetry penned by those intellectual elite, doing everything they can to complicate Nature\'s simple truth\'s, in all things extenuated by elitist vocabulary\'s, as if \'attraction\' is experienced different by what IQ numbers we\'re biologically gifted... pfffttt, lmao!
forgive me, it\'s that Monday morning coffee, I\'m only joking dear Poet, truly
indeed, you\'ve penned a wonderfully worded declaration of appreciation for that most attractive aesthetic in all humanity: a beautiful mind...
a great write!
December 21st, 2020 05:15
I LOVE ME
Goldfinch60 said:
That love within you and within each of us must be spread to others and maybe one day the love of all will be the norm and the world will be a better place.
Andy
December 21st, 2020 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
That love within you and within each of us must be spread to others and maybe one day the love of all will be the norm and the world will be a better place.
Andy
December 21st, 2020 01:36
I LOVE ME
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Shironder: Apologies, but I have to agree with them above: for me It\'s impossible to read.
But there\'s two commonalities which link all of us: we\'re all on the, er, mature side and male.
So perhaps you perceive your readership as young folk, female (who haven\'t complained) all with 20/20 Vision? :-)
Dave
December 21st, 2020 01:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Shironder: Apologies, but I have to agree with them above: for me It\'s impossible to read.
But there\'s two commonalities which link all of us: we\'re all on the, er, mature side and male.
So perhaps you perceive your readership as young folk, female (who haven\'t complained) all with 20/20 Vision? :-)
Dave
December 21st, 2020 01:11
I LOVE ME
FredPeyer said:
Shearonder, Robert and Orchie are right, it is a little hard to read. But I like the content! Before we can spread love all around, we do have to love ourselves! Well penned!
December 20th, 2020 12:07
FredPeyer said:
Shearonder, Robert and Orchie are right, it is a little hard to read. But I like the content! Before we can spread love all around, we do have to love ourselves! Well penned!
December 20th, 2020 12:07
I LOVE ME
orchidee said:
Good write, but it\'s starting to give me a headache, I know that! Them colours. lol.
December 20th, 2020 11:13
orchidee said:
Good write, but it\'s starting to give me a headache, I know that! Them colours. lol.
December 20th, 2020 11:13
I LOVE ME
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
This red-on-black presentation is nearly unreadable.
December 20th, 2020 10:03
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
This red-on-black presentation is nearly unreadable.
December 20th, 2020 10:03
Value of respect
RDS said:
Nice sentiments Shearonder, even having this presence of mind 6/10 times makes us a better person.
J
December 19th, 2020 17:33
RDS said:
Nice sentiments Shearonder, even having this presence of mind 6/10 times makes us a better person.
J
December 19th, 2020 17:33
Weak for your mind
FredPeyer said:
Shearonder, you said it well. Intellectual love can be intoxicating.
December 19th, 2020 12:27
FredPeyer said:
Shearonder, you said it well. Intellectual love can be intoxicating.
December 19th, 2020 12:27
Value of respect
Goldfinch60 said:
Respect is so wonderful in life, it is a pity that it seems to be drifting away from many people. If respect came back to the fore the word could be a much better place.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Respect is so wonderful in life, it is a pity that it seems to be drifting away from many people. If respect came back to the fore the word could be a much better place.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 02:39
Value of respect
FredPeyer said:
Well written Shearonder. Sounds like superman or superwoman though. Easier said than done.
December 18th, 2020 21:56
FredPeyer said:
Well written Shearonder. Sounds like superman or superwoman though. Easier said than done.
December 18th, 2020 21:56
Value of respect
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you, Shearonder.
Just wish it was that easy...
Regards Dave
December 18th, 2020 21:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Good for you, Shearonder.
Just wish it was that easy...
Regards Dave
December 18th, 2020 21:01
Sweetness
L. B. Mek said:
I kinda have an image of you hoarding all the sweets over the holidays, those poor kids... lol
an uplifting read indeed,
Happy Holidays dear Poet
December 18th, 2020 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
I kinda have an image of you hoarding all the sweets over the holidays, those poor kids... lol
an uplifting read indeed,
Happy Holidays dear Poet
December 18th, 2020 05:48
Sweetness
Goldfinch60 said:
My that sweetness never leave you Shearonder.
Andy
December 18th, 2020 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
My that sweetness never leave you Shearonder.
Andy
December 18th, 2020 01:49
God\'s accountability
Amon said:
You are brethren in deed, it\'s good Shearonder
December 17th, 2020 06:16
Amon said:
You are brethren in deed, it\'s good Shearonder
December 17th, 2020 06:16
Your Love
AwHec8 said:
Yep I concur with Goldfinch60, very good words put together indeed. Don
December 16th, 2020 08:05
AwHec8 said:
Yep I concur with Goldfinch60, very good words put together indeed. Don
December 16th, 2020 08:05
God\'s accountability
AwHec8 said:
Love the message you have sent there Shearonda 1987. Don
December 16th, 2020 08:03
AwHec8 said:
Love the message you have sent there Shearonda 1987. Don
December 16th, 2020 08:03
Neverland
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful song to all things nature and existence, immersive in its melodic gaiety,
a brilliant read on a sunny Winter\'s, Monday morning,
thanks for sharing
December 14th, 2020 05:18
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful song to all things nature and existence, immersive in its melodic gaiety,
a brilliant read on a sunny Winter\'s, Monday morning,
thanks for sharing
December 14th, 2020 05:18
Neverland
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes I would like to be there as well Shearonder.
Andy
December 14th, 2020 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes I would like to be there as well Shearonder.
Andy
December 14th, 2020 02:39
Neverland
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Hi Shearonder ~ Thanks for a beautiful Poem replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ! LOVE the positivity ! Happiness - Love - Comforts your mind - Sooths your emotions - Pleasure - Joy & Bliss - Sweet & Magic - Dreamworld - Gods Creation - Sensionally & Peace ~ AMEN
We have been to some Lovely places in the USA ~ Grand & Bryce Canyons - Aspens @ Colorado in the Fall - the Big Sur - The Everglades - Austin Texas - Alaska & Hawaii etc etc ! However for US the most Beautiful Place on Earth (our Shangri La) is the English Lake District in any Season ! The Village of Grassmere is in the Middle and the Ten major Lakes radiate out like Spokes on a Wheel ! The Peaks (highest is 3200 ft) are in between the Lakes and the longest Lake is 11 miles (Windermere !). Small by USA standards but on a Human Scale ! Like the whole of the UK which is 40 times smaller than the USA. Thanks for sharing ! Please check our POEM for TODAY ~ TRUE LOVE ~ Thanks ABC !!!
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
December 13th, 2020 10:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Hi Shearonder ~ Thanks for a beautiful Poem replete with Rhyme & Rhythm ! LOVE the positivity ! Happiness - Love - Comforts your mind - Sooths your emotions - Pleasure - Joy & Bliss - Sweet & Magic - Dreamworld - Gods Creation - Sensionally & Peace ~ AMEN
We have been to some Lovely places in the USA ~ Grand & Bryce Canyons - Aspens @ Colorado in the Fall - the Big Sur - The Everglades - Austin Texas - Alaska & Hawaii etc etc ! However for US the most Beautiful Place on Earth (our Shangri La) is the English Lake District in any Season ! The Village of Grassmere is in the Middle and the Ten major Lakes radiate out like Spokes on a Wheel ! The Peaks (highest is 3200 ft) are in between the Lakes and the longest Lake is 11 miles (Windermere !). Small by USA standards but on a Human Scale ! Like the whole of the UK which is 40 times smaller than the USA. Thanks for sharing ! Please check our POEM for TODAY ~ TRUE LOVE ~ Thanks ABC !!!
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
December 13th, 2020 10:11
Loyalty
Poetic Dan said:
Now that felt like loyalty through & through and a wonderful last read to remember what love can do!
Thanks for helping my Sunday flow as smoothly as your words
December 13th, 2020 07:49
Poetic Dan said:
Now that felt like loyalty through & through and a wonderful last read to remember what love can do!
Thanks for helping my Sunday flow as smoothly as your words
December 13th, 2020 07:49
Perfection
Poetic Dan said:
The universe is my god and i am all it as are you with this lyrical whip!
Thanks for taking me on an awesome trip, with your outstanding spirit!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect!
December 13th, 2020 07:45
Poetic Dan said:
The universe is my god and i am all it as are you with this lyrical whip!
Thanks for taking me on an awesome trip, with your outstanding spirit!
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect!
December 13th, 2020 07:45
Neverland
Poetic Dan said:
You got with the title as its a place I\'ve been many times and then by the end of your flow, I felt the beach on my toes!
How easy it is to miss what\'s right underneath our nose!
Thanks for sharing and the reminder
Much peace and respect
December 13th, 2020 07:36
Poetic Dan said:
You got with the title as its a place I\'ve been many times and then by the end of your flow, I felt the beach on my toes!
How easy it is to miss what\'s right underneath our nose!
Thanks for sharing and the reminder
Much peace and respect
December 13th, 2020 07:36
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