Comments received on poems by preeti



Milk and Honey poetry book inspired poem
soloo said:

omg u did rlly good with the inspo this gives major rupi kaur vibes.

November 16th, 2022 18:55

It\'s Coming Home!
L. B. Mek said:

love the positivity!
shame about the final
but it was a fun few weeks of dreaming;
a welcome break
from all that dreary of normality,
only another 54 years to go
till our next Wembley final, wooot! lol
thanks for sharing

July 12th, 2021 03:29

Alphabet
FredPeyer said:

and where, dear preeti, are i to z? :-)

February 1st, 2021 20:50

Moon
M Yasir said:

Well I found some new words from your Poem thanks for sharing good work !👍

January 30th, 2021 20:21

Vulva
FredPeyer said:

I like your metaphors. Well done.

January 29th, 2021 11:54

Vulva
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read Preeti. Nice lantern.

January 29th, 2021 10:18

Haiku 1
L. B. Mek said:

clever write both in word choices and broken form utilisation, with an equally meaningful message
(though maybe more accurate to title your series:
\'In Search of Haiku\')

January 28th, 2021 04:52

Haiku 1
Jerry Reynolds said:

the crescent moon
sips from the lake.


January 27th, 2021 17:58

Mango
L. B. Mek said:

how wonderfully you\'ve chosen to highlight, what brief bright sparks - exist, in this depressingly dim tale (Brixton Beach),
a good use of poetry\'s juxtaposing tools, to lend a different perspective for established literature,
a bold and creative write

January 26th, 2021 05:22

Mango
Goldfinch60 said:

Well as Fred has said I will now have to look at mangoes in a different way.

Andy

January 26th, 2021 01:54

Mango
FredPeyer said:

In Hawaii we eat local mangoes all the time. But now, after reading your beautiful poem, I will never be able to eat these fruits the same way! :-)

January 25th, 2021 20:05

Mango
Doggerel Dave said:

There you go - that kind of intelligence (Brixton Beach by Roma Tearne) is one of the things which can make MPS so worthwhile. I\'m going to put it on order,as Roma Tearne has a rich biography and must surely have something to say.
BTW your poem made me a little warm and sweaty, I have to add...!

January 25th, 2021 18:45

Toblerone
L. B. Mek said:

an intriguing dedication to one of my favourite childhood treats,
thanks for sharing

January 25th, 2021 05:46

Toblerone
FredPeyer said:

Preeti, I grew up in Switzerland. That poem is right down my alley! And the reason it is called Toblerone is because it was made by Mr. Tobler. Oh, and by the way, the triangle represents the Matterhorn mountain.
Man, just reading about it makes me want one.

January 24th, 2021 19:45

Toblerone
Doggerel Dave said:

Your poems are pretty enigmatic - to my eyes at least. Would you care to add \'Comment from author...\' (entry on right) when you give us your next?

Regards, Dave

January 24th, 2021 18:27

Toblerone
orchidee said:

Good write Preeti.

January 24th, 2021 08:53

Moon
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Preeti, may that world be full of words and birth.

Andy

January 24th, 2021 01:51

Moon
FredPeyer said:

Very nicely written, Preeti, like that last three w line!

January 23rd, 2021 18:49

Moon
Pacifique Niyitanga said:

Beautiful one Preeti.

January 23rd, 2021 15:44

Rear View
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write. Happy New Years Eve.
see you on the
other side

December 31st, 2020 11:16

Cuckoo calling
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read, Stay Safe and Have a Happy New Year

December 30th, 2020 17:55

Cuckoo calling
orchidee said:

Good write Preeti.

December 30th, 2020 03:08