Comments received on poems by PrEm Ji

L. B. Mek said:

ok please to any who reads this, it is Mainly dark comedy
and not subjective commentary - only!
its just that tongue in the cheek, has been distilled
to its most potent and surgical: state
so these words you read may come across
a little too sharp, at first - taste..
a great read! thanks for sharing
(careful how well you tiptoe chauvinism\'s tightrope, my friend)..
\'Solitude is the best friend of an artist!
I reserved a bullet for that bastard who told it!\'

April 19th, 2021 04:43

FOR YOUR EYES ONLY! (Short story)
Fay Slimm. said:

A captivating account of finding what true love means and told with honest assessment of youth and how it needs such reminders - first class story dear Prem.

April 16th, 2021 15:39

L. B. Mek said:

\'Ours is a small family and we used to complete all cooking jobs before 8’O clock. She used to make boiled rice and break-fast and I, all curries.\'
for me this was not about theological commentary,
what I read is a subtle, personable and grounded write: sumptuously penned..
thanks for sharing dear poet

April 16th, 2021 04:18

Goldfinch60 said:

That new world will be with us soon, we are gradually unlocking into it Premji.


April 13th, 2021 00:26

HOLY INNOCENTS (Short story)
L. B. Mek said:

you dear gifted wordsmith, stretched the very limits of my speed reading capabilities, because I refused to give up and simply surmise concepts or meanings to your well thought-out write,
I dare say I may need to reread this again to grasp all its nuanced sentiment\'s, but still
devoid of any alignment with theological or other concept\'s you\'ve so skilfully introduced,
I can proudly proclaim to marvel at your ability to keep your readers engaged and enthralled, utilising few literary devices,
a wonderful display of your inking\'s practised skill:
\'As far as you happy with the least element of self-contempt, there ends the whole burden of life!

When Simon Sir was about to leave in the evening, he asked me a simple question. “Prem, can you tell me the importance of today?”

“Sir, I am afraid, no…”

What could be the importance of today? Unfortunately, I stopped reading almost all dailies as they spew most dangerous venom than anything truly important, on a regular basis.

“Human memory is temporary, my friend… It was on the same day, Shirin was introduced to our lives... It has been nine years since then…” he told.\'

March 9th, 2021 06:15

Fay Slimm. said:

Such a moving account of how tragedies like floods bring out the essence of those affected. Your words echo well the lady who gave all dear Prem and thank you for sharing those chaotic days back in August again with us here at MPS - welcome to this friendly site and am looking forward to reading more of your talented work.

February 5th, 2021 07:10

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