Comments received on poems by PrEm Ji
A CHRISTMAS CAROL (Short story)
L. B. Mek said:
ok please to any who reads this, it is Mainly dark comedy
and not subjective commentary - only!
its just that tongue in the cheek, has been distilled
to its most potent and surgical: state
so these words you read may come across
a little too sharp, at first - taste..
a great read! thanks for sharing
(careful how well you tiptoe chauvinism\'s tightrope, my friend)..
\'Solitude is the best friend of an artist!
I reserved a bullet for that bastard who told it!\'
lol!!!
April 19th, 2021 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
ok please to any who reads this, it is Mainly dark comedy
and not subjective commentary - only!
its just that tongue in the cheek, has been distilled
to its most potent and surgical: state
so these words you read may come across
a little too sharp, at first - taste..
a great read! thanks for sharing
(careful how well you tiptoe chauvinism\'s tightrope, my friend)..
\'Solitude is the best friend of an artist!
I reserved a bullet for that bastard who told it!\'
lol!!!
April 19th, 2021 04:43
FOR YOUR EYES ONLY! (Short story)
Fay Slimm. said:
A captivating account of finding what true love means and told with honest assessment of youth and how it needs such reminders - first class story dear Prem.
April 16th, 2021 15:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A captivating account of finding what true love means and told with honest assessment of youth and how it needs such reminders - first class story dear Prem.
April 16th, 2021 15:39
HOLY BROTHERS (Short Story)
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ours is a small family and we used to complete all cooking jobs before 8’O clock. She used to make boiled rice and break-fast and I, all curries.\'
for me this was not about theological commentary,
what I read is a subtle, personable and grounded write: sumptuously penned..
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 16th, 2021 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'Ours is a small family and we used to complete all cooking jobs before 8’O clock. She used to make boiled rice and break-fast and I, all curries.\'
for me this was not about theological commentary,
what I read is a subtle, personable and grounded write: sumptuously penned..
thanks for sharing dear poet
April 16th, 2021 04:18
PANDEMIC DREAMS
Goldfinch60 said:
That new world will be with us soon, we are gradually unlocking into it Premji.
Andy
April 13th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
That new world will be with us soon, we are gradually unlocking into it Premji.
Andy
April 13th, 2021 00:26
WOUNDS OF MONSOON (Short story)
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a moving account of how tragedies like floods bring out the essence of those affected. Your words echo well the lady who gave all dear Prem and thank you for sharing those chaotic days back in August again with us here at MPS - welcome to this friendly site and am looking forward to reading more of your talented work.
February 5th, 2021 07:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a moving account of how tragedies like floods bring out the essence of those affected. Your words echo well the lady who gave all dear Prem and thank you for sharing those chaotic days back in August again with us here at MPS - welcome to this friendly site and am looking forward to reading more of your talented work.
February 5th, 2021 07:10
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