Trick or Treat, That\'s What They Say
sorenbarrett said:

A very good poem indeed and I had a similar experience in the 7th grade where my English teacher told me my poem must have been plagiarized but I won because I told her in an American court one is innocent until proven guilty and challenged her to find what was the poem I had copied. Very nice for the 6th grade I have to say

October 6th, 2025 14:34

drift in static
sorenbarrett said:

The use of colors heightens the mood described in this poem. There seems to be a mental drift as well and it carries me to a different dimension. Nicely done.

October 2nd, 2025 12:44

Ballad of Skybound Thieves
sorenbarrett said:

A great narrative poem about an actual event. Well rhymed and metered it flows well and told the story well.

September 29th, 2025 13:07

Dandelion Hymn
sorenbarrett said:

I love this poem a fave for me. The metaphor rings through to those who have the same humble resilience in life. A most lovely write with such nice rhyme and flow.

September 25th, 2025 09:22

Hoozah Goodboy
sorenbarrett said:

A fun poem about man\'s best friend. Nicely written with good rhyme and flow. Well done

September 23rd, 2025 09:27

A Hammer a Day Keeps the Assholes Away
Doggerel Dave said:

Neva thought of the hammer - mine has always been the Majic Instant Vaporizer; I\'d rid the world of idiots I encounter and simultaneously reduce the world population to manageable levels.
Good write - I must suss out some of your others...

September 21st, 2025 01:19

A Hammer a Day Keeps the Assholes Away
Paul Bell said:

Should be compulsory to carry a remind you hammer.
The amount of people you have to remind of getting out of your way, brutal.

September 19th, 2025 11:40

A Hammer a Day Keeps the Assholes Away
orchidee said:

Ahh, bit different to an apple a day keeps the........ lol.

September 19th, 2025 10:41

Glooscap Speaks
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:

This poem reads like a modern myth, celebrating wisdom, leadership, and the nurturing power of guidance over brute force. Nicely written

September 17th, 2025 16:36

The Weight of Every Choice
sorenbarrett said:

A concept I have pondered many times over the years. It is well worded in this poem that contains good rhyme and flow. For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction is the law but as on a snooker table it is almost impossible to predict all the ending positions of all the balls on a break. What will the consequences be of an action today in an hour, day, year, decade, or millennia.

September 15th, 2025 04:58

The Cow That Stood Too Firm
sorenbarrett said:

We often put on ourselves the strangest challenges overestimating our own abilities and underestimating the difficulty of the task. A fun read put to great rhyme in a limerick style

September 13th, 2025 04:19

On Abraham Lincoln’s ‘My Childhood Home I See Again’
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of memory\'s warmth and the feel of the familiar. A lovely write

September 12th, 2025 04:45

The
sorenbarrett said:

Etymological a poem of grammar full of meaning and lessons for the poet or writer. A wonderful poem well penned. A fave

September 10th, 2025 08:20

99.999%
Caring dove said:

Lovely poem ))

September 9th, 2025 07:56

Brisket Friend
sorenbarrett said:

Love brisket and loved the allegory as well. Nicely drawn out in all its points this poem paints a picture of a person inside and out.

September 8th, 2025 04:58