Comments received on poems by shadow424
EVEN IN SILENCE
L. B. Mek said:
elevated poetry
painting a landscape
of sincere emotionality
with choice words
alone..
a wonderful showcase
of your talent\'s practised skills
thank you, dear Poet
a great read! a beautiful dedication
October 2nd, 2023 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
elevated poetry
painting a landscape
of sincere emotionality
with choice words
alone..
a wonderful showcase
of your talent\'s practised skills
thank you, dear Poet
a great read! a beautiful dedication
October 2nd, 2023 05:17
LIGHT, ALWAYS
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully succinct
be it faith or a significant other
we all need our anchors
a lovely read, thank you dear poet
July 10th, 2023 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully succinct
be it faith or a significant other
we all need our anchors
a lovely read, thank you dear poet
July 10th, 2023 04:42
DREAM DENIED
L. B. Mek said:
\'vapored images
like drips of water
from a place
remembered
without reserve\'
wonderful imagery, so well written
thank you, dear poet
April 17th, 2023 03:38
L. B. Mek said:
\'vapored images
like drips of water
from a place
remembered
without reserve\'
wonderful imagery, so well written
thank you, dear poet
April 17th, 2023 03:38
POSTCARD STORIES
L. B. Mek said:
where brevity reigns
archaic orthodoxy fails
be it in art
or ignorance\'s profane..
(an engaging, demanding read
to contemplate
each line, a window to wisdom
and self reflective, discovery)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
write however you want
(loved this lines:
\'soft laughter
seasons discarded
partial escape
ashes raining\')
March 21st, 2023 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
where brevity reigns
archaic orthodoxy fails
be it in art
or ignorance\'s profane..
(an engaging, demanding read
to contemplate
each line, a window to wisdom
and self reflective, discovery)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
write however you want
(loved this lines:
\'soft laughter
seasons discarded
partial escape
ashes raining\')
March 21st, 2023 04:23
POSTCARD STORIES
David Wakeling said:
Is this a Spelling test.I have dyslexia so I\'m not good and Spelling .Why not write proper sentences
March 20th, 2023 21:41
David Wakeling said:
Is this a Spelling test.I have dyslexia so I\'m not good and Spelling .Why not write proper sentences
March 20th, 2023 21:41
STONINGTON
L. B. Mek said:
(keep it classic
simplicity at its subtle, best
and watch it last...)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
November 25th, 2022 04:09
L. B. Mek said:
(keep it classic
simplicity at its subtle, best
and watch it last...)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
November 25th, 2022 04:09
ROOFTOP GARDEN
L. B. Mek said:
yes, I am a fan of Stefano Boeri
and all similar attempts
to imbue Nature\'s touch
within our concrete buildings
from roof gardens
to forest buildings
all, a step forward in the right
direction..
(thank you, a wonderful read
I think your sparse wording worked really well)
June 28th, 2022 02:28
L. B. Mek said:
yes, I am a fan of Stefano Boeri
and all similar attempts
to imbue Nature\'s touch
within our concrete buildings
from roof gardens
to forest buildings
all, a step forward in the right
direction..
(thank you, a wonderful read
I think your sparse wording worked really well)
June 28th, 2022 02:28
MISS IT NOT
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing, beautiful in its simplicity and yet insightfully complex..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 18th, 2022 04:59
L. B. Mek said:
intriguing, beautiful in its simplicity and yet insightfully complex..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 18th, 2022 04:59
EACH WAVE HAS A NAME
L. B. Mek said:
so well written, beautiful imagery
thanks for sharing
February 7th, 2022 05:37
L. B. Mek said:
so well written, beautiful imagery
thanks for sharing
February 7th, 2022 05:37
DREAM JOURNEY
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(how to purchase a ticket?
dear poet
and a belated Happy New Year!
my friend)
January 17th, 2022 06:32
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(how to purchase a ticket?
dear poet
and a belated Happy New Year!
my friend)
January 17th, 2022 06:32
CHRISTMAS POINSETTIA
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully festive
I like your blend of melancholy and positivity
in this write, a true reflection
of how most of us are feeling this year
I truly believe, we owe it
to those, no longer by our side
to make the best
of experiences in life,
however fake or shallow that may seem
I think, if you asked those
who no longer, get a say or choice
more than likely, most
would agree...
(thanks for sharing
such a timely and festive write;
Hope you have a wonderful
festive season
and a peaceful New Year, dear poet)
December 23rd, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully festive
I like your blend of melancholy and positivity
in this write, a true reflection
of how most of us are feeling this year
I truly believe, we owe it
to those, no longer by our side
to make the best
of experiences in life,
however fake or shallow that may seem
I think, if you asked those
who no longer, get a say or choice
more than likely, most
would agree...
(thanks for sharing
such a timely and festive write;
Hope you have a wonderful
festive season
and a peaceful New Year, dear poet)
December 23rd, 2021 05:00
COTTAGE LANE
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, like your choice wording
thanks for sharing
November 18th, 2021 04:42
L. B. Mek said:
an intriguing read, like your choice wording
thanks for sharing
November 18th, 2021 04:42
I THOUGHT
Nicholas Browning said:
Thoughts are powerful. I hope that dream is a pleasant one.
November 14th, 2021 09:11
Nicholas Browning said:
Thoughts are powerful. I hope that dream is a pleasant one.
November 14th, 2021 09:11
I HAVE YOUR SHADOW
L. B. Mek said:
that last stanza is just beautiful, thanks for sharing
it\'s such a soothing read
November 1st, 2021 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
that last stanza is just beautiful, thanks for sharing
it\'s such a soothing read
November 1st, 2021 06:29
JOURNEY OF WORDS
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful ambience you\'ve managed to build, in such a short write
portraying their intimacy, with subtle imagery
and their wordless conversation, of poetic brevity..
a delightful read, thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 04:26
L. B. Mek said:
what a wonderful ambience you\'ve managed to build, in such a short write
portraying their intimacy, with subtle imagery
and their wordless conversation, of poetic brevity..
a delightful read, thanks for sharing
October 29th, 2021 04:26
JOURNEY OF WORDS
dusk arising said:
And so begins the voyage of discoveryand mutual adventure.... fiction?... who knows?
October 28th, 2021 20:56
dusk arising said:
And so begins the voyage of discoveryand mutual adventure.... fiction?... who knows?
October 28th, 2021 20:56
UNSCRIPTED DAYS
L. B. Mek said:
\'silhouettes
of grayness\'..
intriguing imagery, thanks for sharing
October 22nd, 2021 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'silhouettes
of grayness\'..
intriguing imagery, thanks for sharing
October 22nd, 2021 04:18
HIDDEN MOON
L. B. Mek said:
\'at the high tide of being alone
under a drizzle of desperation
above,
unbalanced air
trenched
in cold, free falls
between season\'s
with pointed winds and cloud puzzles
somewhere
higher than we are,
beyond dreams
and the remembers,\'..
(Loved these lines!
forgive my rudeness in rearranging the layout
but this is how your brilliant poetry presented itself to me)
thanks for sharing
October 12th, 2021 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'at the high tide of being alone
under a drizzle of desperation
above,
unbalanced air
trenched
in cold, free falls
between season\'s
with pointed winds and cloud puzzles
somewhere
higher than we are,
beyond dreams
and the remembers,\'..
(Loved these lines!
forgive my rudeness in rearranging the layout
but this is how your brilliant poetry presented itself to me)
thanks for sharing
October 12th, 2021 04:22
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