Comments received on poems by shadow424
ASKING
L. B. Mek said:
insightful observation, worded with arrowed precision to insure, those who choose to read and engage with this poem,
can only walk away
a little more aware,
a little more nuanced, in short
a little - more - than they were when they first read your write..
thanks for choosing to share
(I read and learn)
October 4th, 2021 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
insightful observation, worded with arrowed precision to insure, those who choose to read and engage with this poem,
can only walk away
a little more aware,
a little more nuanced, in short
a little - more - than they were when they first read your write..
thanks for choosing to share
(I read and learn)
October 4th, 2021 05:55
BLUEBIRDS
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nicely expressed ) good poem , I like this and the mention of blue birds )
October 2nd, 2021 00:52
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nicely expressed ) good poem , I like this and the mention of blue birds )
October 2nd, 2021 00:52
A GOOD SUMMER
L. B. Mek said:
a poignant scene, worded so vivid..
there\'s a sense of displacement that occurs, while experiencing loss
and your insightful write, tapped into those feelings really well..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 1st, 2021 04:10
L. B. Mek said:
a poignant scene, worded so vivid..
there\'s a sense of displacement that occurs, while experiencing loss
and your insightful write, tapped into those feelings really well..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
October 1st, 2021 04:10
RIPTIDE
L. B. Mek said:
insightful, revealing and
thought provoking, a unique write
open to such diverse interpretations,
a great read!
(in my humble opinion)
September 3rd, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
insightful, revealing and
thought provoking, a unique write
open to such diverse interpretations,
a great read!
(in my humble opinion)
September 3rd, 2021 04:49
WHERE NIGHT SLEEPS
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, has such an enticing flow
subtle yet bold in its purposed minimalism
a joy to read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 19th, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful, has such an enticing flow
subtle yet bold in its purposed minimalism
a joy to read!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
August 19th, 2021 04:15
FOLLOWING
L. B. Mek said:
we must believe in ourselves
even if failure is what\'s seemingly awaiting
around every corner of our toiling,
because only by Following our instincts
and striving
for what we can\'t explain clearly
or word poetically eloquent,
do we get to experience
the many rewarding surprises of life,
(a really empowering message
worded so accessibly relatable
thank you for sharing)
August 17th, 2021 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
we must believe in ourselves
even if failure is what\'s seemingly awaiting
around every corner of our toiling,
because only by Following our instincts
and striving
for what we can\'t explain clearly
or word poetically eloquent,
do we get to experience
the many rewarding surprises of life,
(a really empowering message
worded so accessibly relatable
thank you for sharing)
August 17th, 2021 04:37
A MAN IN PROGRESS
L. B. Mek said:
simple and succinct
a portrait framed well
something different, thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
simple and succinct
a portrait framed well
something different, thanks for sharing
August 16th, 2021 04:12
FROM THE FIRE ESCAPE
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery
there\'s a unique feel to your style
subtle, is sadly
far too often, overlooked
as a valuable trait of poetry,
thanks for choosing to share
August 12th, 2021 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery
there\'s a unique feel to your style
subtle, is sadly
far too often, overlooked
as a valuable trait of poetry,
thanks for choosing to share
August 12th, 2021 03:54
KINGDOM OF NIGHT
L. B. Mek said:
showcasing that scene building wordsmith quality
a delightful thriller of brooding menace
in its poetic guise
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
August 9th, 2021 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
showcasing that scene building wordsmith quality
a delightful thriller of brooding menace
in its poetic guise
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
August 9th, 2021 05:10
CLOSED
L. B. Mek said:
what we Shamefully do: to each other...
what we defiantly Endure: for, each other...
and in the hairline difference - between
exist, all the wonder
on our lives
that makes it all
worthwhile...
(thanks for sharing
such a genuinely intriguing read)
August 3rd, 2021 04:44
L. B. Mek said:
what we Shamefully do: to each other...
what we defiantly Endure: for, each other...
and in the hairline difference - between
exist, all the wonder
on our lives
that makes it all
worthwhile...
(thanks for sharing
such a genuinely intriguing read)
August 3rd, 2021 04:44
WIND STREET
L. B. Mek said:
Truth: be timeless
it be, our ability to sense
veracity
that fails us, endlessly...
wonderful message, thanks for sharing
August 2nd, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
Truth: be timeless
it be, our ability to sense
veracity
that fails us, endlessly...
wonderful message, thanks for sharing
August 2nd, 2021 04:57
WATCHING
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read
captivating in pace and imagery
thanks for sharing
July 20th, 2021 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful read
captivating in pace and imagery
thanks for sharing
July 20th, 2021 04:13
GATHERING UP
L. B. Mek said:
what a seamless flow, a great write
thanks for sharing dear poet
your words remind me of William Blake\'s poetry
like this verse from \'How sweet I Roam\'d\':
\'With sweet May dews my wings were wet,
And Phoebus fir\'d my vocal rage
He caught me in his silken net,
And shut me in his golden cage.\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-3190 )
July 12th, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
what a seamless flow, a great write
thanks for sharing dear poet
your words remind me of William Blake\'s poetry
like this verse from \'How sweet I Roam\'d\':
\'With sweet May dews my wings were wet,
And Phoebus fir\'d my vocal rage
He caught me in his silken net,
And shut me in his golden cage.\'
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-3190 )
July 12th, 2021 04:54
CLOSE BEHIND
L. B. Mek said:
\'short on breath
while pouring
champagne on
inward waters,\'..
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
July 9th, 2021 04:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'short on breath
while pouring
champagne on
inward waters,\'..
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
July 9th, 2021 04:01
CLOSE BEHIND
Goldfinch60 said:
Each footstep on the road is important as it has brought you to the place you are now and will lead you to the place you want to go.
Andy
July 9th, 2021 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Each footstep on the road is important as it has brought you to the place you are now and will lead you to the place you want to go.
Andy
July 9th, 2021 01:11
A WELCOME THIRST
Goldfinch60 said:
May that heart of the land be forever pleased.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
May that heart of the land be forever pleased.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 00:23
THE COMMON THREAD
Saxon Crow said:
This is good Funnily enough i have stones even now that take me back to where i found them and what i was doing
June 27th, 2021 01:13
Saxon Crow said:
This is good Funnily enough i have stones even now that take me back to where i found them and what i was doing
June 27th, 2021 01:13
CONTINUING ON...
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, resonates with me at least
thanks for sharing
June 17th, 2021 05:17
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, resonates with me at least
thanks for sharing
June 17th, 2021 05:17
DESERT DRIVE
L. B. Mek said:
upliftingly fun and wonderfully creative
(who
needs
a beat,
when
you can
curate
your own
ladder
of rhyme) lol
thanks for sharing
June 15th, 2021 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
upliftingly fun and wonderfully creative
(who
needs
a beat,
when
you can
curate
your own
ladder
of rhyme) lol
thanks for sharing
June 15th, 2021 03:46
OPEN
L. B. Mek said:
like the free-flowing ease of your rhythm
a fun read, thanks for sharing
June 11th, 2021 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
like the free-flowing ease of your rhythm
a fun read, thanks for sharing
June 11th, 2021 04:37
BREATHING IT IN
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I agree
been raining - blessedly, down our way: too
and like you, I Choose to see:
\'on leaves
the drops
on ponds
the colliding\'
\'the sight
of rain,
a miracle\'
\'blessing
of clean\'
May 19th, 2021 05:45
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I agree
been raining - blessedly, down our way: too
and like you, I Choose to see:
\'on leaves
the drops
on ponds
the colliding\'
\'the sight
of rain,
a miracle\'
\'blessing
of clean\'
May 19th, 2021 05:45
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