Comments received on poems by Andy Hunter
The Blind Date
Andy Hunter said:
Thanks Dave, I have never been on a blind date so will need to give this some thought. Watch this space!!!
May 11th, 2021 05:30
Andy Hunter said:
Thanks Dave, I have never been on a blind date so will need to give this some thought. Watch this space!!!
May 11th, 2021 05:30
The Blind Date
Doggerel Dave said:
Good one Andy, well put together as usual.
Just a little worried about the portrayal of the woman waiting to be acted upon.
Could you do a companion piece from the male\'s POV, please?
May 11th, 2021 05:27
Doggerel Dave said:
Good one Andy, well put together as usual.
Just a little worried about the portrayal of the woman waiting to be acted upon.
Could you do a companion piece from the male\'s POV, please?
May 11th, 2021 05:27
The Blind Date
Andy Hunter said:
Very true. Okay, I used a bit of poetic license but basically wrote this about a close friend who after years on her own finally plucked up the courage to go on a blind date. She is now in a happy long term relationship as a result.
May 11th, 2021 04:49
Andy Hunter said:
Very true. Okay, I used a bit of poetic license but basically wrote this about a close friend who after years on her own finally plucked up the courage to go on a blind date. She is now in a happy long term relationship as a result.
May 11th, 2021 04:49
Live the dream ???
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes the Brexit dream was a con, so much misery since it happened. I too feel sorry for those who have had their retirement dreams shattered because of Brexit.
Andy
May 9th, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes the Brexit dream was a con, so much misery since it happened. I too feel sorry for those who have had their retirement dreams shattered because of Brexit.
Andy
May 9th, 2021 00:37
Live the dream ???
Andy Hunter said:
Hence the final line, consequences.
One advantage of having bugger all is that you have very little financially to lose. Still can\'t help feeling sorry for some who innocently just wanted to spend their retirement in the sun.
May 8th, 2021 15:24
Andy Hunter said:
Hence the final line, consequences.
One advantage of having bugger all is that you have very little financially to lose. Still can\'t help feeling sorry for some who innocently just wanted to spend their retirement in the sun.
May 8th, 2021 15:24
Live the dream ???
dusk arising said:
Welcome home from the patriotic home guard of true Brits and the illegal immigrants among us.
You will no longer be a foreigner in a foreign land once home.
May 8th, 2021 14:46
dusk arising said:
Welcome home from the patriotic home guard of true Brits and the illegal immigrants among us.
You will no longer be a foreigner in a foreign land once home.
May 8th, 2021 14:46
Best Mans\' Speech
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I did already write a comment on this fantastic amusing poem advices to newlywed grooms, did it disappear??
May 8th, 2021 09:33
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
I did already write a comment on this fantastic amusing poem advices to newlywed grooms, did it disappear??
May 8th, 2021 09:33
Best Mans\' Speech
Doggerel Dave said:
Do they still have those things, Andy - weddings with bride in white, three tier cakes, groom and best man?
I remember them a little from when I was a kid and umpteen aunts and uncles did it.... The last wedding I attended was in the sixties when a couple who had been living together for years wanted an excuse for a big party - wasn\'t quite like the regular thing, though.
So where have I been living - in a cave? That\'s for me to know....
May 7th, 2021 23:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Do they still have those things, Andy - weddings with bride in white, three tier cakes, groom and best man?
I remember them a little from when I was a kid and umpteen aunts and uncles did it.... The last wedding I attended was in the sixties when a couple who had been living together for years wanted an excuse for a big party - wasn\'t quite like the regular thing, though.
So where have I been living - in a cave? That\'s for me to know....
May 7th, 2021 23:49
Best Mans\' Speech
jarcher54 said:
OK, you win. This is full of every trite tope of warnings and advice for the groom... but it is so cleverly meshed and wittily crafted, it is priceless! These old ball and chain images are so sexist... but I am ashamed to say laughed all the way.
May 7th, 2021 23:30
jarcher54 said:
OK, you win. This is full of every trite tope of warnings and advice for the groom... but it is so cleverly meshed and wittily crafted, it is priceless! These old ball and chain images are so sexist... but I am ashamed to say laughed all the way.
May 7th, 2021 23:30
My Friend
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful dedication, with a smooth captivating flow..
I\'m not sure, you\'ll relate or enjoy, but below is a link
to a song titled \'I miss you\' by the late - great, Aaliya
that your words made me recall:
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=38q6dDwYu44 )
May 7th, 2021 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful dedication, with a smooth captivating flow..
I\'m not sure, you\'ll relate or enjoy, but below is a link
to a song titled \'I miss you\' by the late - great, Aaliya
that your words made me recall:
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=38q6dDwYu44 )
May 7th, 2021 05:19
My Friend
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Andy, good friends are worth their weight in gold and are so missed when they go.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an emotive write Andy, good friends are worth their weight in gold and are so missed when they go.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:34
COUNTER SPY (The Death Of James Bond)
L. B. Mek said:
a clever twist
with some 6ft-deep - hidden, acute commentary to top-it-of as well, I see..
a fun read
with deftly cringe-tiptoeing: innuendo - aplenty, lol
thanks for sharing
May 6th, 2021 05:07
L. B. Mek said:
a clever twist
with some 6ft-deep - hidden, acute commentary to top-it-of as well, I see..
a fun read
with deftly cringe-tiptoeing: innuendo - aplenty, lol
thanks for sharing
May 6th, 2021 05:07
COUNTER SPY (The Death Of James Bond)
Doggerel Dave said:
You just can not do that Andy - what is my favourite vegetable going to say? I think you are more likely to be assassinated than Bond ever will. Do you realise how powerful those Hollywood moguls are?
You have made the sacrifice for a good write though.
May 5th, 2021 22:12
Doggerel Dave said:
You just can not do that Andy - what is my favourite vegetable going to say? I think you are more likely to be assassinated than Bond ever will. Do you realise how powerful those Hollywood moguls are?
You have made the sacrifice for a good write though.
May 5th, 2021 22:12
COUNTER SPY (The Death Of James Bond)
Goldfinch60 said:
Fun indeed, but Bond will be back in her nightmares.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 15:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Fun indeed, but Bond will be back in her nightmares.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 15:14
My Bank Holiday
jarcher54 said:
Still pondering how \"bank holiday\" snuck into our poetical lexicon! Thank goodness bankers don\'t wanna work every single day! Thanks for the ride!
May 5th, 2021 09:15
jarcher54 said:
Still pondering how \"bank holiday\" snuck into our poetical lexicon! Thank goodness bankers don\'t wanna work every single day! Thanks for the ride!
May 5th, 2021 09:15
My Bank Holiday
Goldfinch60 said:
Got it in one Andy. In my case it would be Netflix and a glass of Rioja.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Got it in one Andy. In my case it would be Netflix and a glass of Rioja.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 00:37
My Bank Holiday
Doggerel Dave said:
Why cannot folks understand that roads on public holidays are not necessarily a social good....
Great little rhymer again, Andy.
May 4th, 2021 22:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Why cannot folks understand that roads on public holidays are not necessarily a social good....
Great little rhymer again, Andy.
May 4th, 2021 22:02
RELAX
L. B. Mek said:
awesome! really like how you managed to invoke
the very same \'feel\': of gliding - you\'ve worded..
a great read, thanks for sharing
May 4th, 2021 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
awesome! really like how you managed to invoke
the very same \'feel\': of gliding - you\'ve worded..
a great read, thanks for sharing
May 4th, 2021 04:32
RELAX
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Andy and the line
\"So let your dreams unlock your soul\" is superb.
Andy
May 4th, 2021 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Andy and the line
\"So let your dreams unlock your soul\" is superb.
Andy
May 4th, 2021 00:12
RELAX
Doggerel Dave said:
Neatly done Andy. It matters little whether it is called meditation or daydreaming, although it is not quite either, I do it anyway and it is great!
May 3rd, 2021 22:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Neatly done Andy. It matters little whether it is called meditation or daydreaming, although it is not quite either, I do it anyway and it is great!
May 3rd, 2021 22:17
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