Comments received on poems by Andy Hunter
ON THE RUN
L. B. Mek said:
you can sure write to a pulsating beat
wonderful flow
thanks for sharing
June 4th, 2021 04:31
L. B. Mek said:
you can sure write to a pulsating beat
wonderful flow
thanks for sharing
June 4th, 2021 04:31
ON THE RUN
Goldfinch60 said:
May that warmth and safety now be always with him.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 23:48
Goldfinch60 said:
May that warmth and safety now be always with him.
Andy
June 3rd, 2021 23:48
ON THE RUN
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry Andy – I’m not too keen on buying “a young man I once knew”. Your family of origin was a dysfunctional bunch of shits by the sound of it.
What happened then? You left and eventually found a safe environment – evidenced by your presence here. How did you do it? Since I find your work easy and satisfying to read…
Seems I’m always making requests – just ignore me.
June 3rd, 2021 18:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Sorry Andy – I’m not too keen on buying “a young man I once knew”. Your family of origin was a dysfunctional bunch of shits by the sound of it.
What happened then? You left and eventually found a safe environment – evidenced by your presence here. How did you do it? Since I find your work easy and satisfying to read…
Seems I’m always making requests – just ignore me.
June 3rd, 2021 18:18
FIRST DATE
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Andy, those times of face to face conversation were so wonderful.
Andy
May 26th, 2021 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Andy, those times of face to face conversation were so wonderful.
Andy
May 26th, 2021 01:05
FIRST DATE
Andy Hunter said:
Thanks Dave.
Enjoyed writing this one as it brought back some good memories 😅
May 25th, 2021 18:57
Andy Hunter said:
Thanks Dave.
Enjoyed writing this one as it brought back some good memories 😅
May 25th, 2021 18:57
FIRST DATE
Doggerel Dave said:
Public transport today? Plugged in one and all - definitely not in the here and now. Glad I\'m not out there calling for romantic tenders anymore.
Great memories evoked there, Andy. Well paced, left me with a feeling of warmth.
May 25th, 2021 18:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Public transport today? Plugged in one and all - definitely not in the here and now. Glad I\'m not out there calling for romantic tenders anymore.
Great memories evoked there, Andy. Well paced, left me with a feeling of warmth.
May 25th, 2021 18:51
FIRST DATE
rosiedm said:
Those days seen to be non existent now noticing somebody from.a far ..
On same transport every day
Used to same faces on public transport . Saying hello to some body now without knowing them 🤔🤔
May 25th, 2021 14:11
rosiedm said:
Those days seen to be non existent now noticing somebody from.a far ..
On same transport every day
Used to same faces on public transport . Saying hello to some body now without knowing them 🤔🤔
May 25th, 2021 14:11
FIRST DATE
dusk arising said:
I think you captured the atmosphere of younger days very well in your piece today.
I\'m laughing at myself now because in later years following divorce, the atmosphere of a first date is quite, quite different.
May 25th, 2021 13:09
dusk arising said:
I think you captured the atmosphere of younger days very well in your piece today.
I\'m laughing at myself now because in later years following divorce, the atmosphere of a first date is quite, quite different.
May 25th, 2021 13:09
BLACK COFFEE – WHERE’S THE CREAM ?
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed!
\'In-fact, oft - we\'ve deluded ourselves into believing
we prefer our coffee\'s: without cream....
such be that malevolent grip, they\'ve implanted
in our innate ability, for cognitive functionality...
may freedom reign: we sing
in the very words, they scripted...\'
May 20th, 2021 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
Indeed!
\'In-fact, oft - we\'ve deluded ourselves into believing
we prefer our coffee\'s: without cream....
such be that malevolent grip, they\'ve implanted
in our innate ability, for cognitive functionality...
may freedom reign: we sing
in the very words, they scripted...\'
May 20th, 2021 04:40
BLACK COFFEE – WHERE’S THE CREAM ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Some bosses haven\'t a care about their employees and are just doing things to make sure that there castles in the air remain sound.
I do prefer my coffee without cream rather than without milk. LOL
Andy
May 20th, 2021 00:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Some bosses haven\'t a care about their employees and are just doing things to make sure that there castles in the air remain sound.
I do prefer my coffee without cream rather than without milk. LOL
Andy
May 20th, 2021 00:14
BLACK COFFEE – WHERE’S THE CREAM ?
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like its time for a massive employee walk out in search of respect and modern pay rates. Some employers don\'t know how good they have it until they stand alone. Great write Andy. ; ) AP
May 19th, 2021 19:16
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like its time for a massive employee walk out in search of respect and modern pay rates. Some employers don\'t know how good they have it until they stand alone. Great write Andy. ; ) AP
May 19th, 2021 19:16
BLACK COFFEE – WHERE’S THE CREAM ?
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh come on Andy - never heard of the trickle down effect? It will happen sometime......
May 19th, 2021 19:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh come on Andy - never heard of the trickle down effect? It will happen sometime......
May 19th, 2021 19:14
BLACK COFFEE – WHERE’S THE CREAM ?
Andy Hunter said:
You are spot on my friend ☺️. Many times the busiest and most overworked person often also happened to be one of the lowest paid. Whilst the hierarchy spent time looking for something to criticize.
May 19th, 2021 17:13
Andy Hunter said:
You are spot on my friend ☺️. Many times the busiest and most overworked person often also happened to be one of the lowest paid. Whilst the hierarchy spent time looking for something to criticize.
May 19th, 2021 17:13
BLACK COFFEE – WHERE’S THE CREAM ?
rosiedm said:
Brings back a bitter taste to me black coffee needs cream for sure ..
Do the minimum in situations like this look busy but do no more than your wage pays you. Be the person you see getting away with less stress than you getting their dedicated breaks and home on time .. that person whos thought more of .
May 19th, 2021 17:08
rosiedm said:
Brings back a bitter taste to me black coffee needs cream for sure ..
Do the minimum in situations like this look busy but do no more than your wage pays you. Be the person you see getting away with less stress than you getting their dedicated breaks and home on time .. that person whos thought more of .
May 19th, 2021 17:08
FREE TO PLEASE MYSELF
L. B. Mek said:
a good read, maybe you can link your other poem
in the description, so those who chose
can have access to more context and better understanding,
thanks for sharing
May 19th, 2021 06:07
L. B. Mek said:
a good read, maybe you can link your other poem
in the description, so those who chose
can have access to more context and better understanding,
thanks for sharing
May 19th, 2021 06:07
FREE TO PLEASE MYSELF
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom arise into wonderful joy.
Good words Andy.
Andy
May 19th, 2021 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom arise into wonderful joy.
Good words Andy.
Andy
May 19th, 2021 01:45
THE NARCISSIST
Andy Hunter said:
Images can reflect dreams or nightmares. Thanks for your kind comments.
May 17th, 2021 13:01
Andy Hunter said:
Images can reflect dreams or nightmares. Thanks for your kind comments.
May 17th, 2021 13:01
THE NARCISSIST
L. B. Mek said:
\'Intoxicated by
His self perceived perfection.\'
\'Believes he\'s a winner and thinks he\'s cool.
But he\'s (Only) a legend inside his tiny mind.\'
these words, dear Poet
represent threads to that nightmare reflection
I flinch - from, every morning...
I just hope, that one day
they\'ll be a mirage, reflection: of me
than that shudderingly - bleak, reality...
wonderfully succinct wording, insightful poetry
thanks for sharing
May 17th, 2021 06:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'Intoxicated by
His self perceived perfection.\'
\'Believes he\'s a winner and thinks he\'s cool.
But he\'s (Only) a legend inside his tiny mind.\'
these words, dear Poet
represent threads to that nightmare reflection
I flinch - from, every morning...
I just hope, that one day
they\'ll be a mirage, reflection: of me
than that shudderingly - bleak, reality...
wonderfully succinct wording, insightful poetry
thanks for sharing
May 17th, 2021 06:39
THE NARCISSIST
Goldfinch60 said:
Strangely I have two friends who are going through this problem with there partners.
Andy
May 16th, 2021 23:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Strangely I have two friends who are going through this problem with there partners.
Andy
May 16th, 2021 23:57
THE NARCISSIST
Trenz Pruca said:
Haha, good poem. Great image of the character type. I enjoyed reading it and speaking it out loud. It made me smile.
May 16th, 2021 19:50
Trenz Pruca said:
Haha, good poem. Great image of the character type. I enjoyed reading it and speaking it out loud. It made me smile.
May 16th, 2021 19:50
THE NARCISSIST
Andy Hunter said:
Thank you 💗 I am sure we have all met someone like this and either pitied or tried to avoid them.
May 16th, 2021 14:46
Andy Hunter said:
Thank you 💗 I am sure we have all met someone like this and either pitied or tried to avoid them.
May 16th, 2021 14:46
THE NARCISSIST
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
They are difficult to deal with ... I’m sure ...
May 16th, 2021 11:21
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
They are difficult to deal with ... I’m sure ...
May 16th, 2021 11:21
STRESSED
Andy Hunter said:
Very true. I don\'t miss it that\'s for sure 😔
Thanks Andy
May 16th, 2021 06:02
Andy Hunter said:
Very true. I don\'t miss it that\'s for sure 😔
Thanks Andy
May 16th, 2021 06:02
STRESSED
Goldfinch60 said:
And then you retired and are so busy that you do not know how you had time to go to work. LOL
Good words Andy, sometime work could be like that and nobody listened.
Andy
May 16th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
And then you retired and are so busy that you do not know how you had time to go to work. LOL
Good words Andy, sometime work could be like that and nobody listened.
Andy
May 16th, 2021 00:44
The Blind Date Outcome
Goldfinch60 said:
That happiness can be found and once there will last forever Andy.
Andy
May 12th, 2021 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
That happiness can be found and once there will last forever Andy.
Andy
May 12th, 2021 00:08
The Blind Date Outcome
Doggerel Dave said:
Not corny at all Andy - At least I\'m now reassured that the man she was waiting for was worth the effort.
Amazed you took so little time - you knew him very well, didn\'t you? Neat succinct wording.
May 11th, 2021 20:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Not corny at all Andy - At least I\'m now reassured that the man she was waiting for was worth the effort.
Amazed you took so little time - you knew him very well, didn\'t you? Neat succinct wording.
May 11th, 2021 20:58
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