Comments received on poems by haleyalexis
Silent Screams
Poetic Licence said:
Although sometimes we are in a room full of love and loved ones we can still feel so alone, a lovely write
April 11th, 2025 05:00
Poetic Licence said:
Although sometimes we are in a room full of love and loved ones we can still feel so alone, a lovely write
April 11th, 2025 05:00
Silent Screams
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and compelling this poem speaks to me of hidden things that one must carry alone and that eat at the soul. Although surrounded by loved ones, one is still alone. Very nice
April 11th, 2025 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and compelling this poem speaks to me of hidden things that one must carry alone and that eat at the soul. Although surrounded by loved ones, one is still alone. Very nice
April 11th, 2025 03:56
A Whisper Against the Cold
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write the pain and emotions can be strongly felt as you read the write , it\'s ok to not be ok. Very well written and expressed
April 5th, 2025 01:14
Poetic Licence said:
A passionate write the pain and emotions can be strongly felt as you read the write , it\'s ok to not be ok. Very well written and expressed
April 5th, 2025 01:14
A Whisper Against the Cold
Soman Ragavan said:
“faces that reflect indifference…” : if it is not indifference, they are actively betraying you.
“carve a canyon in my soul…” very deep, poetical words, transmitting powerful feelings.
“architects of pain…” : it’s pain actively made and dished out.
“Repeating the mantra of my worthlessness, again and again and again…” : non-stop breaking you down, ramming down your throat that you are “worthless.”
Sister, sister-in-law and stepfather, all conspiring to destroy you little by little.
“puppeteers” : other join in the war against you.
“fractured compass…” : something that can never take you to a safe road.
“The final thread that tethers me teeters …” : your last hope, that which was supposed to be the shoulder on which you could take refuge, turns against you.
“feign a stoic indifference…” : indifference come someone near is crushing.
“her vacant gaze…” : the face tells a true story, clearer than words. The vacant gaze says that all relationship has been destroyed. This is why you are being “swallowed piece by piece.”
“the marrow of my bones…” : the utmost depth of you.
“I crave the void…” : family is supposed to bring support. But here it is the opposite. Thus, you are driven to aspire for solitude.
“feeling fades…” : it is numbed feelings that will give you repose, in the circumstances.
“ fleeting joy…” : most of the time joy is something fleeting.
“butterfly\'s kiss…” : a powerfully poetic turn of phrase. A butterfly is soft and fragile. So are its movements. It can hardly break anything. Therefore, a butterfly’s kiss is something most delicate
“relentless, heartless abyss” : this summarises the life you are living.
Overall, this is a powerful poem full of deep human experiences. You have found the right words and expressions to describe what you are going through. I suggest that you submit this poem to an Artificial Intelligence platform (eg ChatGPT) for analysis. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan.
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April 5th, 2025 00:30
Soman Ragavan said:
“faces that reflect indifference…” : if it is not indifference, they are actively betraying you.
“carve a canyon in my soul…” very deep, poetical words, transmitting powerful feelings.
“architects of pain…” : it’s pain actively made and dished out.
“Repeating the mantra of my worthlessness, again and again and again…” : non-stop breaking you down, ramming down your throat that you are “worthless.”
Sister, sister-in-law and stepfather, all conspiring to destroy you little by little.
“puppeteers” : other join in the war against you.
“fractured compass…” : something that can never take you to a safe road.
“The final thread that tethers me teeters …” : your last hope, that which was supposed to be the shoulder on which you could take refuge, turns against you.
“feign a stoic indifference…” : indifference come someone near is crushing.
“her vacant gaze…” : the face tells a true story, clearer than words. The vacant gaze says that all relationship has been destroyed. This is why you are being “swallowed piece by piece.”
“the marrow of my bones…” : the utmost depth of you.
“I crave the void…” : family is supposed to bring support. But here it is the opposite. Thus, you are driven to aspire for solitude.
“feeling fades…” : it is numbed feelings that will give you repose, in the circumstances.
“ fleeting joy…” : most of the time joy is something fleeting.
“butterfly\'s kiss…” : a powerfully poetic turn of phrase. A butterfly is soft and fragile. So are its movements. It can hardly break anything. Therefore, a butterfly’s kiss is something most delicate
“relentless, heartless abyss” : this summarises the life you are living.
Overall, this is a powerful poem full of deep human experiences. You have found the right words and expressions to describe what you are going through. I suggest that you submit this poem to an Artificial Intelligence platform (eg ChatGPT) for analysis. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan.
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April 5th, 2025 00:30
A Whisper Against the Cold
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
I can feel every bit of your words. They came alive in me. i can hear your voice right in my ears , down to my heart. But i don\'t know if these are poetic magic by you or you are really sharing your pains. I want to say \"It Okay, not to be okay\" it okay passing through pain. It okay to stay strong. This abyss you see shall fade.
Other comments: Your uses of words are great and powerful. Powerful words to depict strong meaning. Excellent write👏👏👏
April 4th, 2025 22:23
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
I can feel every bit of your words. They came alive in me. i can hear your voice right in my ears , down to my heart. But i don\'t know if these are poetic magic by you or you are really sharing your pains. I want to say \"It Okay, not to be okay\" it okay passing through pain. It okay to stay strong. This abyss you see shall fade.
Other comments: Your uses of words are great and powerful. Powerful words to depict strong meaning. Excellent write👏👏👏
April 4th, 2025 22:23
Time to Disappear
Poetic Licence said:
A sad but beautifully written write, very well expressed
March 15th, 2025 02:57
Poetic Licence said:
A sad but beautifully written write, very well expressed
March 15th, 2025 02:57
Eternal Secret
sorenbarrett said:
Pain and anguish so aptly expressed where the past is an anchor that pulls one down into a sea of memories. Dark and sad.
February 17th, 2025 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
Pain and anguish so aptly expressed where the past is an anchor that pulls one down into a sea of memories. Dark and sad.
February 17th, 2025 05:34
Eternal Secret
Poetic Licence said:
I find this a very sad and haunting write, which i believe is about something that should never happen, A few words that say so much.
February 17th, 2025 02:52
Poetic Licence said:
I find this a very sad and haunting write, which i believe is about something that should never happen, A few words that say so much.
February 17th, 2025 02:52
My Vows on 4/24/24
peto said:
Tremendous flow to this tribute to love
Thoroughly enjoyed
April 26th, 2024 07:05
peto said:
Tremendous flow to this tribute to love
Thoroughly enjoyed
April 26th, 2024 07:05
Gone
Noah Malice said:
the pain you feel is very clearly expressed here, hope you find some catharsis
April 8th, 2024 09:13
Noah Malice said:
the pain you feel is very clearly expressed here, hope you find some catharsis
April 8th, 2024 09:13
My words to him
L. B. Mek said:
your first line, said it all
a lovely dedication, thanks for sharing
May 8th, 2023 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
your first line, said it all
a lovely dedication, thanks for sharing
May 8th, 2023 05:49
My First Love
Charles_newOwner said:
\"I wish I\'d knew
That you break me too.\"
Strong message, and I think it shows a great deal of growth/maturity. Showing earlier that whoever spoke this is haunted by this. Very nice!
November 9th, 2021 19:21
Charles_newOwner said:
\"I wish I\'d knew
That you break me too.\"
Strong message, and I think it shows a great deal of growth/maturity. Showing earlier that whoever spoke this is haunted by this. Very nice!
November 9th, 2021 19:21
Air
L. B. Mek said:
yup, nothing like that first
demolition
of all that you hoped - for
and believed-in, with such wholehearted vehemence,
to splinter your trust
into such minuscule shards
that you know, instinctively
before you ever try
it can never be made whole
again...
(thanks for sharing, your impassioned poetry
hope, you\'re in a better place now
or will soon - be)
November 5th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
yup, nothing like that first
demolition
of all that you hoped - for
and believed-in, with such wholehearted vehemence,
to splinter your trust
into such minuscule shards
that you know, instinctively
before you ever try
it can never be made whole
again...
(thanks for sharing, your impassioned poetry
hope, you\'re in a better place now
or will soon - be)
November 5th, 2021 04:34
My words to you
myself and me said:
The Moon simply forgets that without the Sun, it is just a dark rocky sphere.
When you come back, you are stronger.
A wonderful writing.
August 27th, 2021 12:54
myself and me said:
The Moon simply forgets that without the Sun, it is just a dark rocky sphere.
When you come back, you are stronger.
A wonderful writing.
August 27th, 2021 12:54
My words to you
L. B. Mek said:
\'The moon will never grace morning
We meet halfway but never touching
Fire is put out by water
You engulf all my being\'..
feels very personal, but somehow
there\'s a relatable thread to a common need
for a new beginning, a self empowering
fighting song, of a poem - if you will..
or I\'m way off the target as usual
anyway, thanks for sharing
a unique read
August 27th, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'The moon will never grace morning
We meet halfway but never touching
Fire is put out by water
You engulf all my being\'..
feels very personal, but somehow
there\'s a relatable thread to a common need
for a new beginning, a self empowering
fighting song, of a poem - if you will..
or I\'m way off the target as usual
anyway, thanks for sharing
a unique read
August 27th, 2021 04:54
My pain
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was I still me?\'..
depends, was there - ever
a You: to begin with, buried
under all that worded Pain?
July 29th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was I still me?\'..
depends, was there - ever
a You: to begin with, buried
under all that worded Pain?
July 29th, 2021 04:34
Dying
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words haley. Life can be so hard but if you look from that tower you will be able to see a glimmer of light so climb down the tower and walk towards that glimmer and you will find that life is there for you and will be full of hope and love.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words haley. Life can be so hard but if you look from that tower you will be able to see a glimmer of light so climb down the tower and walk towards that glimmer and you will find that life is there for you and will be full of hope and love.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:31
My Sweet Dream
L. B. Mek said:
very sweet, indeed
it\'s a good thing, I don\'t put too much syrup in my morning coffee, lol
thanks for sharing a wonderful read, truly
May 24th, 2021 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
very sweet, indeed
it\'s a good thing, I don\'t put too much syrup in my morning coffee, lol
thanks for sharing a wonderful read, truly
May 24th, 2021 05:55
Fly Away
rosiedm said:
I think we all want that place to go to but only when its the right time and that place will find you x Rosie
May 4th, 2021 07:18
rosiedm said:
I think we all want that place to go to but only when its the right time and that place will find you x Rosie
May 4th, 2021 07:18
