Comments received on poems by haleyalexis
My Vows on 4/24/24
peto said:
Tremendous flow to this tribute to love
Thoroughly enjoyed
April 26th, 2024 07:05
peto said:
Tremendous flow to this tribute to love
Thoroughly enjoyed
April 26th, 2024 07:05
Gone
GON said:
the pain you feel is very clearly expressed here, hope you find some catharsis
April 8th, 2024 09:13
GON said:
the pain you feel is very clearly expressed here, hope you find some catharsis
April 8th, 2024 09:13
My words to him
L. B. Mek said:
your first line, said it all
a lovely dedication, thanks for sharing
May 8th, 2023 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
your first line, said it all
a lovely dedication, thanks for sharing
May 8th, 2023 05:49
Chained Down
woundedheart said:
Great use of solid end rhymes very clever and adventurous. The piece itself is deep and bitter sweet.
December 9th, 2021 05:12
woundedheart said:
Great use of solid end rhymes very clever and adventurous. The piece itself is deep and bitter sweet.
December 9th, 2021 05:12
Chained Down
L. B. Mek said:
if you ever want to play around
try stretching your technical prowess
by matching your lines with equal syllables
and matching that, to the amount of lines in your whole poem
for example, you first two lines are 7 syllables
and your whole write is 8 lines,
match this with your end rhymes
and that brilliantly placed \'missed\'
and I doubt many publishers
will have the nerve to reject your work
(of course only if you\'re interested, that is)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
December 9th, 2021 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
if you ever want to play around
try stretching your technical prowess
by matching your lines with equal syllables
and matching that, to the amount of lines in your whole poem
for example, you first two lines are 7 syllables
and your whole write is 8 lines,
match this with your end rhymes
and that brilliantly placed \'missed\'
and I doubt many publishers
will have the nerve to reject your work
(of course only if you\'re interested, that is)
thanks for sharing, dear poet
December 9th, 2021 05:04
My First Love
Charles_newOwner said:
\"I wish I\'d knew
That you break me too.\"
Strong message, and I think it shows a great deal of growth/maturity. Showing earlier that whoever spoke this is haunted by this. Very nice!
November 9th, 2021 19:21
Charles_newOwner said:
\"I wish I\'d knew
That you break me too.\"
Strong message, and I think it shows a great deal of growth/maturity. Showing earlier that whoever spoke this is haunted by this. Very nice!
November 9th, 2021 19:21
Air
L. B. Mek said:
yup, nothing like that first
demolition
of all that you hoped - for
and believed-in, with such wholehearted vehemence,
to splinter your trust
into such minuscule shards
that you know, instinctively
before you ever try
it can never be made whole
again...
(thanks for sharing, your impassioned poetry
hope, you\'re in a better place now
or will soon - be)
November 5th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
yup, nothing like that first
demolition
of all that you hoped - for
and believed-in, with such wholehearted vehemence,
to splinter your trust
into such minuscule shards
that you know, instinctively
before you ever try
it can never be made whole
again...
(thanks for sharing, your impassioned poetry
hope, you\'re in a better place now
or will soon - be)
November 5th, 2021 04:34
My mind
L. B. Mek said:
and yet!
here you are, screaming your Truth loud and Proud
and sharing boldly, without restraint or any hindrance to your words or intent..
these too: is a small miracle
to pillar your Rise upon,
these too, is a utility you can cultivate, to strive
for the Better you deserve..
now, will you choose to shed and grasp the Potential that awaits
or waste it,
lamenting endlessly in perpetual futility?
either way, I - for one
wish you, All the Best!
(thanks for choosing to share and for choosing to Fight!)
September 28th, 2021 04:49
L. B. Mek said:
and yet!
here you are, screaming your Truth loud and Proud
and sharing boldly, without restraint or any hindrance to your words or intent..
these too: is a small miracle
to pillar your Rise upon,
these too, is a utility you can cultivate, to strive
for the Better you deserve..
now, will you choose to shed and grasp the Potential that awaits
or waste it,
lamenting endlessly in perpetual futility?
either way, I - for one
wish you, All the Best!
(thanks for choosing to share and for choosing to Fight!)
September 28th, 2021 04:49
Withered 🌹
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nobody should ever ‘ stomp ‘ on a rose , sad writing but well expressed
September 23rd, 2021 23:58
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nobody should ever ‘ stomp ‘ on a rose , sad writing but well expressed
September 23rd, 2021 23:58
My words to you
myself and me said:
The Moon simply forgets that without the Sun, it is just a dark rocky sphere.
When you come back, you are stronger.
A wonderful writing.
August 27th, 2021 12:54
myself and me said:
The Moon simply forgets that without the Sun, it is just a dark rocky sphere.
When you come back, you are stronger.
A wonderful writing.
August 27th, 2021 12:54
My words to you
L. B. Mek said:
\'The moon will never grace morning
We meet halfway but never touching
Fire is put out by water
You engulf all my being\'..
feels very personal, but somehow
there\'s a relatable thread to a common need
for a new beginning, a self empowering
fighting song, of a poem - if you will..
or I\'m way off the target as usual
anyway, thanks for sharing
a unique read
August 27th, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'The moon will never grace morning
We meet halfway but never touching
Fire is put out by water
You engulf all my being\'..
feels very personal, but somehow
there\'s a relatable thread to a common need
for a new beginning, a self empowering
fighting song, of a poem - if you will..
or I\'m way off the target as usual
anyway, thanks for sharing
a unique read
August 27th, 2021 04:54
My pain
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was I still me?\'..
depends, was there - ever
a You: to begin with, buried
under all that worded Pain?
July 29th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was I still me?\'..
depends, was there - ever
a You: to begin with, buried
under all that worded Pain?
July 29th, 2021 04:34
Dying
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words haley. Life can be so hard but if you look from that tower you will be able to see a glimmer of light so climb down the tower and walk towards that glimmer and you will find that life is there for you and will be full of hope and love.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words haley. Life can be so hard but if you look from that tower you will be able to see a glimmer of light so climb down the tower and walk towards that glimmer and you will find that life is there for you and will be full of hope and love.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:31
My Sweet Dream
L. B. Mek said:
very sweet, indeed
it\'s a good thing, I don\'t put too much syrup in my morning coffee, lol
thanks for sharing a wonderful read, truly
May 24th, 2021 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
very sweet, indeed
it\'s a good thing, I don\'t put too much syrup in my morning coffee, lol
thanks for sharing a wonderful read, truly
May 24th, 2021 05:55
Taken
L. B. Mek said:
simple: just dial Liam Neeson
Bryan Mills, is guaranteed
for any tragedies - trilogy...
May 21st, 2021 03:22
L. B. Mek said:
simple: just dial Liam Neeson
Bryan Mills, is guaranteed
for any tragedies - trilogy...
May 21st, 2021 03:22
Dark
All In said:
A bit ambiguous. Could fit this situation in with a literal danger or a figurative one.
Interesting write. :)
May 4th, 2021 14:30
All In said:
A bit ambiguous. Could fit this situation in with a literal danger or a figurative one.
Interesting write. :)
May 4th, 2021 14:30
Fly Away
rosiedm said:
I think we all want that place to go to but only when its the right time and that place will find you x Rosie
May 4th, 2021 07:18
rosiedm said:
I think we all want that place to go to but only when its the right time and that place will find you x Rosie
May 4th, 2021 07:18
Dark
L. B. Mek said:
Run!
if not with legs
then deep within your unshackled thought\'s, maybe?
May 4th, 2021 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
Run!
if not with legs
then deep within your unshackled thought\'s, maybe?
May 4th, 2021 05:24
