Comments received on poems by haleyalexis
My First Love
Charles_newOwner said:
\"I wish I\'d knew
That you break me too.\"
Strong message, and I think it shows a great deal of growth/maturity. Showing earlier that whoever spoke this is haunted by this. Very nice!
November 9th, 2021 19:21
Charles_newOwner said:
\"I wish I\'d knew
That you break me too.\"
Strong message, and I think it shows a great deal of growth/maturity. Showing earlier that whoever spoke this is haunted by this. Very nice!
November 9th, 2021 19:21
Air
L. B. Mek said:
yup, nothing like that first
demolition
of all that you hoped - for
and believed-in, with such wholehearted vehemence,
to splinter your trust
into such minuscule shards
that you know, instinctively
before you ever try
it can never be made whole
again...
(thanks for sharing, your impassioned poetry
hope, you\'re in a better place now
or will soon - be)
November 5th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
yup, nothing like that first
demolition
of all that you hoped - for
and believed-in, with such wholehearted vehemence,
to splinter your trust
into such minuscule shards
that you know, instinctively
before you ever try
it can never be made whole
again...
(thanks for sharing, your impassioned poetry
hope, you\'re in a better place now
or will soon - be)
November 5th, 2021 04:34
My words to you
myself and me said:
The Moon simply forgets that without the Sun, it is just a dark rocky sphere.
When you come back, you are stronger.
A wonderful writing.
August 27th, 2021 12:54
myself and me said:
The Moon simply forgets that without the Sun, it is just a dark rocky sphere.
When you come back, you are stronger.
A wonderful writing.
August 27th, 2021 12:54
My words to you
L. B. Mek said:
\'The moon will never grace morning
We meet halfway but never touching
Fire is put out by water
You engulf all my being\'..
feels very personal, but somehow
there\'s a relatable thread to a common need
for a new beginning, a self empowering
fighting song, of a poem - if you will..
or I\'m way off the target as usual
anyway, thanks for sharing
a unique read
August 27th, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
\'The moon will never grace morning
We meet halfway but never touching
Fire is put out by water
You engulf all my being\'..
feels very personal, but somehow
there\'s a relatable thread to a common need
for a new beginning, a self empowering
fighting song, of a poem - if you will..
or I\'m way off the target as usual
anyway, thanks for sharing
a unique read
August 27th, 2021 04:54
My pain
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was I still me?\'..
depends, was there - ever
a You: to begin with, buried
under all that worded Pain?
July 29th, 2021 04:34
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was I still me?\'..
depends, was there - ever
a You: to begin with, buried
under all that worded Pain?
July 29th, 2021 04:34
Dying
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words haley. Life can be so hard but if you look from that tower you will be able to see a glimmer of light so climb down the tower and walk towards that glimmer and you will find that life is there for you and will be full of hope and love.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Powerful words haley. Life can be so hard but if you look from that tower you will be able to see a glimmer of light so climb down the tower and walk towards that glimmer and you will find that life is there for you and will be full of hope and love.
Andy
June 12th, 2021 00:31
My Sweet Dream
L. B. Mek said:
very sweet, indeed
it\'s a good thing, I don\'t put too much syrup in my morning coffee, lol
thanks for sharing a wonderful read, truly
May 24th, 2021 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
very sweet, indeed
it\'s a good thing, I don\'t put too much syrup in my morning coffee, lol
thanks for sharing a wonderful read, truly
May 24th, 2021 05:55
Fly Away
rosiedm said:
I think we all want that place to go to but only when its the right time and that place will find you x Rosie
May 4th, 2021 07:18
rosiedm said:
I think we all want that place to go to but only when its the right time and that place will find you x Rosie
May 4th, 2021 07:18
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