Comments received on poems by Cedrick
Be Time full
TobaniNataiella said:
A clever piece pf writing depicting the one thing we all have, and as each day passes we have less of it, Very enjoyable
December 16th, 2024 01:42
TobaniNataiella said:
A clever piece pf writing depicting the one thing we all have, and as each day passes we have less of it, Very enjoyable
December 16th, 2024 01:42
Be Time full
arqios said:
Oh wow, the gift, the cost, and the punishment of Time- the whole enchilada. A choice to make at every waking moment of our time-filled day.
December 15th, 2024 20:22
arqios said:
Oh wow, the gift, the cost, and the punishment of Time- the whole enchilada. A choice to make at every waking moment of our time-filled day.
December 15th, 2024 20:22
Left Hanging
arqios said:
And that is how it should be. True love does not alter but remains true despite the circumstance.
November 20th, 2024 05:29
arqios said:
And that is how it should be. True love does not alter but remains true despite the circumstance.
November 20th, 2024 05:29
Left Hanging
Demar Desu said:
I won’t shoot you! Because you did enjoy the times you shared! Find another girl one to share the better poems you have today!
November 20th, 2024 03:26
Demar Desu said:
I won’t shoot you! Because you did enjoy the times you shared! Find another girl one to share the better poems you have today!
November 20th, 2024 03:26
Left Hanging
NafisaSB said:
happens sometimes, just be glad that it gave you some moments of happiness in this crazy world where nothing and no one is what they project to be many a time
November 20th, 2024 00:32
NafisaSB said:
happens sometimes, just be glad that it gave you some moments of happiness in this crazy world where nothing and no one is what they project to be many a time
November 20th, 2024 00:32
I am Wondering
Bobby O said:
I’m not Buying it even a little. I’ve been trying to stretch any metaphor to get how “unpretentious” belongs. It seems like you just grabbed a word you liked and force fit it in. I also noticed reviews that offer praise, I like those guys but I’m also calling them out and it will serve to lessen my faith if the future brings positive comments from them to me. Unpretentious blood, wind we can’t touch , and hanging clouds. It’s all bad on various levels with the overall effect dropping a reader in a windy day with some clouds that don’t pretend. Nope nope nope
December 28th, 2023 06:30
Bobby O said:
I’m not Buying it even a little. I’ve been trying to stretch any metaphor to get how “unpretentious” belongs. It seems like you just grabbed a word you liked and force fit it in. I also noticed reviews that offer praise, I like those guys but I’m also calling them out and it will serve to lessen my faith if the future brings positive comments from them to me. Unpretentious blood, wind we can’t touch , and hanging clouds. It’s all bad on various levels with the overall effect dropping a reader in a windy day with some clouds that don’t pretend. Nope nope nope
December 28th, 2023 06:30
I am Wondering
orchidee said:
I am not wondering if this is a good write - cos it is!
November 12th, 2023 02:42
orchidee said:
I am not wondering if this is a good write - cos it is!
November 12th, 2023 02:42
Live Right
Thomas W Case said:
Living right is everything whatever color we happen to be. Great write.
October 30th, 2023 17:56
Thomas W Case said:
Living right is everything whatever color we happen to be. Great write.
October 30th, 2023 17:56
Days
rhmn_7 said:
And everybody fills them differently with what they have, I really liked this one!
October 8th, 2023 05:00
rhmn_7 said:
And everybody fills them differently with what they have, I really liked this one!
October 8th, 2023 05:00
Rise
orchidee said:
Yes, I tried not to use my lungs for 24 hours one day - not to breathe.
I didn\'t feel very well afterwards. lol. Eh?!
September 18th, 2023 02:03
orchidee said:
Yes, I tried not to use my lungs for 24 hours one day - not to breathe.
I didn\'t feel very well afterwards. lol. Eh?!
September 18th, 2023 02:03
Dear Future
orchidee said:
Good write C.
It can get confusing, I think. When it gets to \'tomorrow\', then it\'s always \'today\'. How to find \'tomorrow\'?! heehee.
I talk some rubbish sometimes - excuse me! lol.
September 2nd, 2023 02:05
orchidee said:
Good write C.
It can get confusing, I think. When it gets to \'tomorrow\', then it\'s always \'today\'. How to find \'tomorrow\'?! heehee.
I talk some rubbish sometimes - excuse me! lol.
September 2nd, 2023 02:05
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