Comments received on poems by Ceddy



My Helper
crypticbard said:

Yes! To the hills do my eyes pan, and to Abba does my call go, from thence my aid and succour be. And in Thee am I forever free.

November 17th, 2022 01:01

Momma
L. B. Mek said:

Yep, it\'s engraved in mine as well
and it get\'s ever-more entrenched
with every kindness
she,
bestows upon my life..
thank you! dear Poet

May 9th, 2022 05:39

Battle of time
Paul Bell said:

The million-dollar question, what will tomorrow bring. This is how I work on the theory, if I wake up tomorrow it\'s a great day, if I don\'t, then It\'s somebody else\'s problem.

April 30th, 2022 12:00

what is love?
L. B. Mek said:

(thanks for sharing, dear poet
please forgive me
for my opinionated rant, below
it\'s just that some peoples
\'hypocritical utilisation\'
of the word \'Love\'
triggers me..
but your message, I champion
completely!)
for me, personally
\'Love\'
is not just a word
it\'s taking
proactive accountability
for our feelings and emotions
and accepting, that we\'re - All
entitled
to \'Love\' - Freely!
as long as we\'re not hurting, anyone..
in short it\'s accepting, that Love includes
Women, Men and \'Non Binary, or other\'
it\'s, accepting
religious Dogma\'s, with constricting
and archaic \'opinions\'
on Love
can be held, directly responsible
for fanatic bombings
of Gay and Lesbian nightclubs...
don\'t just
use the word \'Love\'
and then \'Qualify\', who is entitled to it
that\'s just, the height
of obstinate, self denial..
and that insidious root core
of theological corporations
hate fuelling, poisonous
herd, mindsets!

April 7th, 2022 04:43

what is love?
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Very lovely ) love your poem

April 6th, 2022 23:42

what is love?
Crowns4Christ said:

Very beautiful, and so true
Those of us fortunate to experience love, should cherish it and never let it go

April 6th, 2022 23:23

January
L. B. Mek said:

do you skip - past, Spring?
or does it sprint, past
too quick
for you to consider it a season?
a quirky, shorty
thanks for sharing

April 1st, 2022 03:49

January
orchidee said:

Good write C.
A friend moved from UK back to his native Canada a few years ago.

April 1st, 2022 01:53

Oh my freedom
L. B. Mek said:

\'Life without you freedom has become hard
We have been muzzled like dogs
Were we can not utter anything
Or raise objections to something that gets our eyebrows high
We now been considered dangerous
The thugs of the country
The terrorists of the society\'..
yeah, I so relate
we the muzzled criminals
whilst, they
fly around the world, virus free
imagine
a virus, that sides with the privileged
sounds a little, manmade...
thanks for sharing

March 31st, 2022 04:08

Oh my freedom
Ok Waleed said:

Do you think Canada would combine countries with America ?

March 30th, 2022 21:31

Life Life Life
Rocky Lagou said:

Yes! I feel life and privilege go hand in hand. If you\'re born into wealth and prosperity or if you\'re born into poverty, all add up to the way you view life. 💖 Good poem!

March 1st, 2022 14:03

Life Life Life
L. B. Mek said:

(such an enlightening read
and thanks for inspiring
my little scribbled rant
of a reply to your last lines)
\'so true, the well educated elite
word or paint or act-out
the words, brush strokes and scenes
that depict
the suffering of the lowly, majority
how utterly obscene..
well then, mercy be
that\'s all in the past, now we\'re
all attending Uni\'s and getting
that good, good - Degree
just a shame, we ain\'t got time
to write, paint or script
our own generation\'s Voice, since
we\'re now
using our well educated status
to pay back our Uni, debts...\'
(reality, oft resembles
a bad scripted attempt
at a morose humoured, tale
of pseudo existence...)

March 1st, 2022 04:17

Running away with Marrow
L. B. Mek said:

reminds me of the basic synopsis for the novel
\'The Marrow Thieves\'
by Cherie Dimaline..
(what empathetically poignant words
you\'ve weaved
into this harrowingly memorable read)
thanks for sharing

February 3rd, 2022 04:50

Life
Vamsi Sudha said:

Very true and life will soon evaporate !! Nice Write Ceddy !! Thanks !!

December 11th, 2021 21:35

Be humble
Paul Bell said:

This is when you walk about with your banner. I TOLD YOU SO.

December 8th, 2021 05:24

Be humble
spilleronsheet said:

Such a powerful message
Needed so much
Adds oil to the flames inside

December 8th, 2021 03:17

This world
Lorna said:

Good little haiku here!

December 6th, 2021 05:37

The day
L. B. Mek said:

a great shorty
and your words, capture the voice
of hope we all harbour, so succinctly
thanks for sharing

December 6th, 2021 04:46

The day
Fay Slimm. said:

I love the hidden intrigue of this clever haiku - -- so much on which to ponder. Thanks for sharing it Ceddy

December 5th, 2021 16:56

I keep going
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Takes strength and courage to keep going ..sometimes

A good writing )

December 4th, 2021 02:10

Our Perishing Nature
spilleronsheet said:

Very rightly placed
The nature is truly in chaos thanks to our so called development
Awesome way, you played with words
Keep writing and sharing dear poet

November 30th, 2021 13:03

Flowers
L. B. Mek said:

lol, crude haiku\'s
a wonderfully natural evolution: some may say...
thanks for sharing

May 25th, 2021 05:02

I say no to acism
Goldfinch60 said:

Very fine write Cedric, I never could understand racism and why it is amongst this human breed, to me all are equal and should be treated with respect.

Welcome to MPS.

May 21st, 2021 00:40

I say no to acism
rosiedm said:

I agree ..what is racism .. does anyone really know..
Not liking someone because of a darker skin. That\'s crazy to me in.pale I\'m from.Ireland
I\'d love an olive skin instead of using fake tan
Why do people lie on beaches till they are burnt to achieve a darker shade
So to not like some one because of a skin shade doesn\'t make any sense
Does it become racism then because of not understanding their language
That\'s narrow mindedness and showing how uncultured they are of not wanting to like people because\" they\" don\'t speak their language or accept a different upbringing
And those people are usually untravelled and stuck in the same corner all their lives



May 20th, 2021 14:23