Comments received on poems by Cedrick
Visit there to understand life
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with some very clever lines this poem explores the theme of gratefulness and appreciating what we have. Lovely
January 31st, 2025 19:24
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with some very clever lines this poem explores the theme of gratefulness and appreciating what we have. Lovely
January 31st, 2025 19:24
Visit there to understand life
Poetic Licence said:
Some powerful points made in this piece, and it reminds us of the some of things we take for granted, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 17:16
Poetic Licence said:
Some powerful points made in this piece, and it reminds us of the some of things we take for granted, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 17:16
Tommorow is January
Poetic Licence said:
A positive view of a brand new start, enjoyed the read
December 31st, 2024 16:43
Poetic Licence said:
A positive view of a brand new start, enjoyed the read
December 31st, 2024 16:43
Tommorow is January
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive write and I\'m sure that those you believe you will accomplish you will. Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive write and I\'m sure that those you believe you will accomplish you will. Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 14:32
A child is given
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written poem, enjoyed the read
December 26th, 2024 01:59
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written poem, enjoyed the read
December 26th, 2024 01:59
A child is given
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in time with the season. Nicely written
December 25th, 2024 18:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in time with the season. Nicely written
December 25th, 2024 18:51
Be Time full
Poetic Licence said:
A clever piece pf writing depicting the one thing we all have, and as each day passes we have less of it, Very enjoyable
December 16th, 2024 01:42
Poetic Licence said:
A clever piece pf writing depicting the one thing we all have, and as each day passes we have less of it, Very enjoyable
December 16th, 2024 01:42
Be Time full
arqios said:
Oh wow, the gift, the cost, and the punishment of Time- the whole enchilada. A choice to make at every waking moment of our time-filled day.
December 15th, 2024 20:22
arqios said:
Oh wow, the gift, the cost, and the punishment of Time- the whole enchilada. A choice to make at every waking moment of our time-filled day.
December 15th, 2024 20:22
Left Hanging
arqios said:
And that is how it should be. True love does not alter but remains true despite the circumstance.
November 20th, 2024 05:29
arqios said:
And that is how it should be. True love does not alter but remains true despite the circumstance.
November 20th, 2024 05:29
Left Hanging
Demar Desu said:
I won’t shoot you! Because you did enjoy the times you shared! Find another girl one to share the better poems you have today!
November 20th, 2024 03:26
Demar Desu said:
I won’t shoot you! Because you did enjoy the times you shared! Find another girl one to share the better poems you have today!
November 20th, 2024 03:26
Left Hanging
NafisaSB said:
happens sometimes, just be glad that it gave you some moments of happiness in this crazy world where nothing and no one is what they project to be many a time
November 20th, 2024 00:32
NafisaSB said:
happens sometimes, just be glad that it gave you some moments of happiness in this crazy world where nothing and no one is what they project to be many a time
November 20th, 2024 00:32
I am Wondering
Bobby O said:
I’m not Buying it even a little. I’ve been trying to stretch any metaphor to get how “unpretentious” belongs. It seems like you just grabbed a word you liked and force fit it in. I also noticed reviews that offer praise, I like those guys but I’m also calling them out and it will serve to lessen my faith if the future brings positive comments from them to me. Unpretentious blood, wind we can’t touch , and hanging clouds. It’s all bad on various levels with the overall effect dropping a reader in a windy day with some clouds that don’t pretend. Nope nope nope
December 28th, 2023 06:30
Bobby O said:
I’m not Buying it even a little. I’ve been trying to stretch any metaphor to get how “unpretentious” belongs. It seems like you just grabbed a word you liked and force fit it in. I also noticed reviews that offer praise, I like those guys but I’m also calling them out and it will serve to lessen my faith if the future brings positive comments from them to me. Unpretentious blood, wind we can’t touch , and hanging clouds. It’s all bad on various levels with the overall effect dropping a reader in a windy day with some clouds that don’t pretend. Nope nope nope
December 28th, 2023 06:30
I am Wondering
orchidee said:
I am not wondering if this is a good write - cos it is!
November 12th, 2023 02:42
orchidee said:
I am not wondering if this is a good write - cos it is!
November 12th, 2023 02:42
Live Right
Thomas W Case said:
Living right is everything whatever color we happen to be. Great write.
October 30th, 2023 17:56
Thomas W Case said:
Living right is everything whatever color we happen to be. Great write.
October 30th, 2023 17:56
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