Comments received on poems by Cedrick
Tommorow is January
TobaniNataiella said:
A positive view of a brand new start, enjoyed the read
December 31st, 2024 16:43
TobaniNataiella said:
A positive view of a brand new start, enjoyed the read
December 31st, 2024 16:43
Tommorow is January
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive write and I\'m sure that those you believe you will accomplish you will. Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
A most positive write and I\'m sure that those you believe you will accomplish you will. Happy New Year
December 31st, 2024 14:32
A child is given
TobaniNataiella said:
Nicely written poem, enjoyed the read
December 26th, 2024 01:59
TobaniNataiella said:
Nicely written poem, enjoyed the read
December 26th, 2024 01:59
A child is given
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in time with the season. Nicely written
December 25th, 2024 18:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in time with the season. Nicely written
December 25th, 2024 18:51
Be Time full
TobaniNataiella said:
A clever piece pf writing depicting the one thing we all have, and as each day passes we have less of it, Very enjoyable
December 16th, 2024 01:42
TobaniNataiella said:
A clever piece pf writing depicting the one thing we all have, and as each day passes we have less of it, Very enjoyable
December 16th, 2024 01:42
Be Time full
arqios said:
Oh wow, the gift, the cost, and the punishment of Time- the whole enchilada. A choice to make at every waking moment of our time-filled day.
December 15th, 2024 20:22
arqios said:
Oh wow, the gift, the cost, and the punishment of Time- the whole enchilada. A choice to make at every waking moment of our time-filled day.
December 15th, 2024 20:22
Left Hanging
arqios said:
And that is how it should be. True love does not alter but remains true despite the circumstance.
November 20th, 2024 05:29
arqios said:
And that is how it should be. True love does not alter but remains true despite the circumstance.
November 20th, 2024 05:29
Left Hanging
Demar Desu said:
I wonāt shoot you! Because you did enjoy the times you shared! Find another girl one to share the better poems you have today!
November 20th, 2024 03:26
Demar Desu said:
I wonāt shoot you! Because you did enjoy the times you shared! Find another girl one to share the better poems you have today!
November 20th, 2024 03:26
Left Hanging
NafisaSB said:
happens sometimes, just be glad that it gave you some moments of happiness in this crazy world where nothing and no one is what they project to be many a time
November 20th, 2024 00:32
NafisaSB said:
happens sometimes, just be glad that it gave you some moments of happiness in this crazy world where nothing and no one is what they project to be many a time
November 20th, 2024 00:32
I am Wondering
Bobby O said:
Iām not Buying it even a little. Iāve been trying to stretch any metaphor to get how āunpretentiousā belongs. It seems like you just grabbed a word you liked and force fit it in. I also noticed reviews that offer praise, I like those guys but Iām also calling them out and it will serve to lessen my faith if the future brings positive comments from them to me. Unpretentious blood, wind we canāt touch , and hanging clouds. Itās all bad on various levels with the overall effect dropping a reader in a windy day with some clouds that donāt pretend. Nope nope nope
December 28th, 2023 06:30
Bobby O said:
Iām not Buying it even a little. Iāve been trying to stretch any metaphor to get how āunpretentiousā belongs. It seems like you just grabbed a word you liked and force fit it in. I also noticed reviews that offer praise, I like those guys but Iām also calling them out and it will serve to lessen my faith if the future brings positive comments from them to me. Unpretentious blood, wind we canāt touch , and hanging clouds. Itās all bad on various levels with the overall effect dropping a reader in a windy day with some clouds that donāt pretend. Nope nope nope
December 28th, 2023 06:30
I am Wondering
orchidee said:
I am not wondering if this is a good write - cos it is!
November 12th, 2023 02:42
orchidee said:
I am not wondering if this is a good write - cos it is!
November 12th, 2023 02:42
Live Right
Thomas W Case said:
Living right is everything whatever color we happen to be. Great write.
October 30th, 2023 17:56
Thomas W Case said:
Living right is everything whatever color we happen to be. Great write.
October 30th, 2023 17:56
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