Comments received on poems by Cedrick



I am Wondering
Bobby O said:

I’m not Buying it even a little. I’ve been trying to stretch any metaphor to get how “unpretentious” belongs. It seems like you just grabbed a word you liked and force fit it in. I also noticed reviews that offer praise, I like those guys but I’m also calling them out and it will serve to lessen my faith if the future brings positive comments from them to me. Unpretentious blood, wind we can’t touch , and hanging clouds. It’s all bad on various levels with the overall effect dropping a reader in a windy day with some clouds that don’t pretend. Nope nope nope

December 28th, 2023 06:30

To us he\'s been given
orchidee said:

Good write C.

December 26th, 2023 02:59

A Woman
Lil said:

I am just touched.

November 26th, 2023 14:03

There is No Tommorow
Thomas W Case said:

Brilliant work.

November 26th, 2023 09:55

There is No Tommorow
Lorenz said:

Is there really a today ?

November 25th, 2023 14:29

My Teacher
2781 said:

for one is your master, even Christ;

November 23rd, 2023 08:17

I am Wondering
sorenbarrett said:

So well done.

November 21st, 2023 12:36

I am Wondering
Thomas W Case said:

excellent.

November 16th, 2023 23:37

I am Wondering
orchidee said:

I am not wondering if this is a good write - cos it is!

November 12th, 2023 02:42

Live Right
Thomas W Case said:

Living right is everything whatever color we happen to be. Great write.

October 30th, 2023 17:56

Live Right
orchidee said:

Good write C.

October 30th, 2023 02:28

Live Right
ChrisLyn🕊 said:

That’s so true

October 30th, 2023 02:27

A Woman
Thomas W Case said:

Absolutely.

October 25th, 2023 00:34

Days
aDarkerMind said:

to move on.
if only I could;
a very good write.

October 8th, 2023 14:33

Days
rhmn_7 said:

And everybody fills them differently with what they have, I really liked this one!

October 8th, 2023 05:00

Days
orchidee said:

Good write C.

October 8th, 2023 01:47

Days
NinjaGirl said:

Neat! Cool analogy!

October 7th, 2023 13:36

God did
orchidee said:

Good write C.

October 1st, 2023 01:54

Rise
orchidee said:

Yes, I tried not to use my lungs for 24 hours one day - not to breathe.
I didn\'t feel very well afterwards. lol. Eh?!

September 18th, 2023 02:03

Dear Future
orchidee said:

Good write C.
It can get confusing, I think. When it gets to \'tomorrow\', then it\'s always \'today\'. How to find \'tomorrow\'?! heehee.
I talk some rubbish sometimes - excuse me! lol.

September 2nd, 2023 02:05

My Teacher
orchidee said:

Good write C.

September 1st, 2023 02:00

My Teacher
Bobby O said:

As the string picks the weak , seems like that was an opportunity to measure that sad occurrence with positivity derived from the word. Instead to list it and have it not be addressed took away from the power you profess? I like the piece and want to encourage strengthening

September 1st, 2023 00:04

Take It to the Cross
Bella Shepard said:

This poem is so beautifully phrased,. As I read it aloud its cadence flows, and ievokes a feeling of comfort and peace. Thank you dear friend!

August 24th, 2023 13:58

Take It to the Cross
orchidee said:

Good write C.

August 22nd, 2023 01:26

In this World
L. B. Mek said:

or just another fallible human
simply trying to do your best...
(so many blurred situations
beyond: right/wrong , good/bad
we traverse in our everyday)
thanks for sharing, a thought provoking read

May 26th, 2023 04:08

A stroll with Jesus
arqios said:

True faith refuses to be purloined nor shackled by legalism and false hopes so indeed everyday alertness is the call of the day, let this be the call of the last days saints.

May 14th, 2023 23:21

Jesus
arqios said:

Some turn reality into fairy tales and that is backed by prophecy of the last days great delusion, and it surrounds us all. And of the many ways that are being peddled in real time you are right to proclaim the True Way.

May 14th, 2023 23:18

Jesus
David Wakeling said:

This is okay if you believe in fairy tales.

April 1st, 2023 20:39

A stroll with Jesus
mvvenkataraman said:

This reminds me of my 25,000 rope-skipping,
World definitely knows not due to no evidence,
But, as I did it in a Christian College pavilion daily,
Jesus knows it as He was keenly watching,
He would always keep it in His kind mind!


February 20th, 2023 01:35

The Saviour
arqios said:

Amen!

January 31st, 2023 20:55

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