Comments received on poems by Cedrick
I am Wondering
Bobby O said:
I’m not Buying it even a little. I’ve been trying to stretch any metaphor to get how “unpretentious” belongs. It seems like you just grabbed a word you liked and force fit it in. I also noticed reviews that offer praise, I like those guys but I’m also calling them out and it will serve to lessen my faith if the future brings positive comments from them to me. Unpretentious blood, wind we can’t touch , and hanging clouds. It’s all bad on various levels with the overall effect dropping a reader in a windy day with some clouds that don’t pretend. Nope nope nope
December 28th, 2023 06:30
Bobby O said:
I’m not Buying it even a little. I’ve been trying to stretch any metaphor to get how “unpretentious” belongs. It seems like you just grabbed a word you liked and force fit it in. I also noticed reviews that offer praise, I like those guys but I’m also calling them out and it will serve to lessen my faith if the future brings positive comments from them to me. Unpretentious blood, wind we can’t touch , and hanging clouds. It’s all bad on various levels with the overall effect dropping a reader in a windy day with some clouds that don’t pretend. Nope nope nope
December 28th, 2023 06:30
I am Wondering
orchidee said:
I am not wondering if this is a good write - cos it is!
November 12th, 2023 02:42
orchidee said:
I am not wondering if this is a good write - cos it is!
November 12th, 2023 02:42
Live Right
Thomas W Case said:
Living right is everything whatever color we happen to be. Great write.
October 30th, 2023 17:56
Thomas W Case said:
Living right is everything whatever color we happen to be. Great write.
October 30th, 2023 17:56
Days
rhmn_7 said:
And everybody fills them differently with what they have, I really liked this one!
October 8th, 2023 05:00
rhmn_7 said:
And everybody fills them differently with what they have, I really liked this one!
October 8th, 2023 05:00
Rise
orchidee said:
Yes, I tried not to use my lungs for 24 hours one day - not to breathe.
I didn\'t feel very well afterwards. lol. Eh?!
September 18th, 2023 02:03
orchidee said:
Yes, I tried not to use my lungs for 24 hours one day - not to breathe.
I didn\'t feel very well afterwards. lol. Eh?!
September 18th, 2023 02:03
Dear Future
orchidee said:
Good write C.
It can get confusing, I think. When it gets to \'tomorrow\', then it\'s always \'today\'. How to find \'tomorrow\'?! heehee.
I talk some rubbish sometimes - excuse me! lol.
September 2nd, 2023 02:05
orchidee said:
Good write C.
It can get confusing, I think. When it gets to \'tomorrow\', then it\'s always \'today\'. How to find \'tomorrow\'?! heehee.
I talk some rubbish sometimes - excuse me! lol.
September 2nd, 2023 02:05
My Teacher
Bobby O said:
As the string picks the weak , seems like that was an opportunity to measure that sad occurrence with positivity derived from the word. Instead to list it and have it not be addressed took away from the power you profess? I like the piece and want to encourage strengthening
September 1st, 2023 00:04
Bobby O said:
As the string picks the weak , seems like that was an opportunity to measure that sad occurrence with positivity derived from the word. Instead to list it and have it not be addressed took away from the power you profess? I like the piece and want to encourage strengthening
September 1st, 2023 00:04
Take It to the Cross
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is so beautifully phrased,. As I read it aloud its cadence flows, and ievokes a feeling of comfort and peace. Thank you dear friend!
August 24th, 2023 13:58
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is so beautifully phrased,. As I read it aloud its cadence flows, and ievokes a feeling of comfort and peace. Thank you dear friend!
August 24th, 2023 13:58
In this World
L. B. Mek said:
or just another fallible human
simply trying to do your best...
(so many blurred situations
beyond: right/wrong , good/bad
we traverse in our everyday)
thanks for sharing, a thought provoking read
May 26th, 2023 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
or just another fallible human
simply trying to do your best...
(so many blurred situations
beyond: right/wrong , good/bad
we traverse in our everyday)
thanks for sharing, a thought provoking read
May 26th, 2023 04:08
A stroll with Jesus
arqios said:
True faith refuses to be purloined nor shackled by legalism and false hopes so indeed everyday alertness is the call of the day, let this be the call of the last days saints.
May 14th, 2023 23:21
arqios said:
True faith refuses to be purloined nor shackled by legalism and false hopes so indeed everyday alertness is the call of the day, let this be the call of the last days saints.
May 14th, 2023 23:21
Jesus
arqios said:
Some turn reality into fairy tales and that is backed by prophecy of the last days great delusion, and it surrounds us all. And of the many ways that are being peddled in real time you are right to proclaim the True Way.
May 14th, 2023 23:18
arqios said:
Some turn reality into fairy tales and that is backed by prophecy of the last days great delusion, and it surrounds us all. And of the many ways that are being peddled in real time you are right to proclaim the True Way.
May 14th, 2023 23:18
A stroll with Jesus
mvvenkataraman said:
This reminds me of my 25,000 rope-skipping,
World definitely knows not due to no evidence,
But, as I did it in a Christian College pavilion daily,
Jesus knows it as He was keenly watching,
He would always keep it in His kind mind!
February 20th, 2023 01:35
mvvenkataraman said:
This reminds me of my 25,000 rope-skipping,
World definitely knows not due to no evidence,
But, as I did it in a Christian College pavilion daily,
Jesus knows it as He was keenly watching,
He would always keep it in His kind mind!
February 20th, 2023 01:35
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