Comments received on poems by Cedrick
Days
rhmn_7 said:
And everybody fills them differently with what they have, I really liked this one!
October 8th, 2023 05:00
rhmn_7 said:
And everybody fills them differently with what they have, I really liked this one!
October 8th, 2023 05:00
Rise
orchidee said:
Yes, I tried not to use my lungs for 24 hours one day - not to breathe.
I didn\'t feel very well afterwards. lol. Eh?!
September 18th, 2023 02:03
orchidee said:
Yes, I tried not to use my lungs for 24 hours one day - not to breathe.
I didn\'t feel very well afterwards. lol. Eh?!
September 18th, 2023 02:03
Dear Future
orchidee said:
Good write C.
It can get confusing, I think. When it gets to \'tomorrow\', then it\'s always \'today\'. How to find \'tomorrow\'?! heehee.
I talk some rubbish sometimes - excuse me! lol.
September 2nd, 2023 02:05
orchidee said:
Good write C.
It can get confusing, I think. When it gets to \'tomorrow\', then it\'s always \'today\'. How to find \'tomorrow\'?! heehee.
I talk some rubbish sometimes - excuse me! lol.
September 2nd, 2023 02:05
My Teacher
Bobby O said:
As the string picks the weak , seems like that was an opportunity to measure that sad occurrence with positivity derived from the word. Instead to list it and have it not be addressed took away from the power you profess? I like the piece and want to encourage strengthening
September 1st, 2023 00:04
Bobby O said:
As the string picks the weak , seems like that was an opportunity to measure that sad occurrence with positivity derived from the word. Instead to list it and have it not be addressed took away from the power you profess? I like the piece and want to encourage strengthening
September 1st, 2023 00:04
Take It to the Cross
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is so beautifully phrased,. As I read it aloud its cadence flows, and ievokes a feeling of comfort and peace. Thank you dear friend!
August 24th, 2023 13:58
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is so beautifully phrased,. As I read it aloud its cadence flows, and ievokes a feeling of comfort and peace. Thank you dear friend!
August 24th, 2023 13:58
In this World
L. B. Mek said:
or just another fallible human
simply trying to do your best...
(so many blurred situations
beyond: right/wrong , good/bad
we traverse in our everyday)
thanks for sharing, a thought provoking read
May 26th, 2023 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
or just another fallible human
simply trying to do your best...
(so many blurred situations
beyond: right/wrong , good/bad
we traverse in our everyday)
thanks for sharing, a thought provoking read
May 26th, 2023 04:08
A stroll with Jesus
arqios said:
True faith refuses to be purloined nor shackled by legalism and false hopes so indeed everyday alertness is the call of the day, let this be the call of the last days saints.
May 14th, 2023 23:21
arqios said:
True faith refuses to be purloined nor shackled by legalism and false hopes so indeed everyday alertness is the call of the day, let this be the call of the last days saints.
May 14th, 2023 23:21
Jesus
arqios said:
Some turn reality into fairy tales and that is backed by prophecy of the last days great delusion, and it surrounds us all. And of the many ways that are being peddled in real time you are right to proclaim the True Way.
May 14th, 2023 23:18
arqios said:
Some turn reality into fairy tales and that is backed by prophecy of the last days great delusion, and it surrounds us all. And of the many ways that are being peddled in real time you are right to proclaim the True Way.
May 14th, 2023 23:18
A stroll with Jesus
mvvenkataraman said:
This reminds me of my 25,000 rope-skipping,
World definitely knows not due to no evidence,
But, as I did it in a Christian College pavilion daily,
Jesus knows it as He was keenly watching,
He would always keep it in His kind mind!
February 20th, 2023 01:35
mvvenkataraman said:
This reminds me of my 25,000 rope-skipping,
World definitely knows not due to no evidence,
But, as I did it in a Christian College pavilion daily,
Jesus knows it as He was keenly watching,
He would always keep it in His kind mind!
February 20th, 2023 01:35
My Helper
arqios said:
Yes! To the hills do my eyes pan, and to Abba does my call go, from thence my aid and succour be. And in Thee am I forever free.
November 17th, 2022 01:01
arqios said:
Yes! To the hills do my eyes pan, and to Abba does my call go, from thence my aid and succour be. And in Thee am I forever free.
November 17th, 2022 01:01
Momma
L. B. Mek said:
Yep, it\'s engraved in mine as well
and it get\'s ever-more entrenched
with every kindness
she,
bestows upon my life..
thank you! dear Poet
May 9th, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
Yep, it\'s engraved in mine as well
and it get\'s ever-more entrenched
with every kindness
she,
bestows upon my life..
thank you! dear Poet
May 9th, 2022 05:39
Battle of time
Paul Bell said:
The million-dollar question, what will tomorrow bring. This is how I work on the theory, if I wake up tomorrow it\'s a great day, if I don\'t, then It\'s somebody else\'s problem.
April 30th, 2022 12:00
Paul Bell said:
The million-dollar question, what will tomorrow bring. This is how I work on the theory, if I wake up tomorrow it\'s a great day, if I don\'t, then It\'s somebody else\'s problem.
April 30th, 2022 12:00
what is love?
L. B. Mek said:
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
please forgive me
for my opinionated rant, below
it\'s just that some peoples
\'hypocritical utilisation\'
of the word \'Love\'
triggers me..
but your message, I champion
completely!)
for me, personally
\'Love\'
is not just a word
it\'s taking
proactive accountability
for our feelings and emotions
and accepting, that we\'re - All
entitled
to \'Love\' - Freely!
as long as we\'re not hurting, anyone..
in short it\'s accepting, that Love includes
Women, Men and \'Non Binary, or other\'
it\'s, accepting
religious Dogma\'s, with constricting
and archaic \'opinions\'
on Love
can be held, directly responsible
for fanatic bombings
of Gay and Lesbian nightclubs...
don\'t just
use the word \'Love\'
and then \'Qualify\', who is entitled to it
that\'s just, the height
of obstinate, self denial..
and that insidious root core
of theological corporations
hate fuelling, poisonous
herd, mindsets!
April 7th, 2022 04:43
L. B. Mek said:
(thanks for sharing, dear poet
please forgive me
for my opinionated rant, below
it\'s just that some peoples
\'hypocritical utilisation\'
of the word \'Love\'
triggers me..
but your message, I champion
completely!)
for me, personally
\'Love\'
is not just a word
it\'s taking
proactive accountability
for our feelings and emotions
and accepting, that we\'re - All
entitled
to \'Love\' - Freely!
as long as we\'re not hurting, anyone..
in short it\'s accepting, that Love includes
Women, Men and \'Non Binary, or other\'
it\'s, accepting
religious Dogma\'s, with constricting
and archaic \'opinions\'
on Love
can be held, directly responsible
for fanatic bombings
of Gay and Lesbian nightclubs...
don\'t just
use the word \'Love\'
and then \'Qualify\', who is entitled to it
that\'s just, the height
of obstinate, self denial..
and that insidious root core
of theological corporations
hate fuelling, poisonous
herd, mindsets!
April 7th, 2022 04:43
what is love?
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful, and so true
Those of us fortunate to experience love, should cherish it and never let it go
April 6th, 2022 23:23
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful, and so true
Those of us fortunate to experience love, should cherish it and never let it go
April 6th, 2022 23:23
January
L. B. Mek said:
do you skip - past, Spring?
or does it sprint, past
too quick
for you to consider it a season?
a quirky, shorty
thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2022 03:49
L. B. Mek said:
do you skip - past, Spring?
or does it sprint, past
too quick
for you to consider it a season?
a quirky, shorty
thanks for sharing
April 1st, 2022 03:49
January
orchidee said:
Good write C.
A friend moved from UK back to his native Canada a few years ago.
April 1st, 2022 01:53
orchidee said:
Good write C.
A friend moved from UK back to his native Canada a few years ago.
April 1st, 2022 01:53
Oh my freedom
L. B. Mek said:
\'Life without you freedom has become hard
We have been muzzled like dogs
Were we can not utter anything
Or raise objections to something that gets our eyebrows high
We now been considered dangerous
The thugs of the country
The terrorists of the society\'..
yeah, I so relate
we the muzzled criminals
whilst, they
fly around the world, virus free
imagine
a virus, that sides with the privileged
sounds a little, manmade...
thanks for sharing
March 31st, 2022 04:08
L. B. Mek said:
\'Life without you freedom has become hard
We have been muzzled like dogs
Were we can not utter anything
Or raise objections to something that gets our eyebrows high
We now been considered dangerous
The thugs of the country
The terrorists of the society\'..
yeah, I so relate
we the muzzled criminals
whilst, they
fly around the world, virus free
imagine
a virus, that sides with the privileged
sounds a little, manmade...
thanks for sharing
March 31st, 2022 04:08
Oh my freedom
Ok Waleed said:
Do you think Canada would combine countries with America ?
March 30th, 2022 21:31
Ok Waleed said:
Do you think Canada would combine countries with America ?
March 30th, 2022 21:31
Life Life Life
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! I feel life and privilege go hand in hand. If you\'re born into wealth and prosperity or if you\'re born into poverty, all add up to the way you view life. 💖 Good poem!
March 1st, 2022 14:03
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes! I feel life and privilege go hand in hand. If you\'re born into wealth and prosperity or if you\'re born into poverty, all add up to the way you view life. 💖 Good poem!
March 1st, 2022 14:03
Life Life Life
L. B. Mek said:
(such an enlightening read
and thanks for inspiring
my little scribbled rant
of a reply to your last lines)
\'so true, the well educated elite
word or paint or act-out
the words, brush strokes and scenes
that depict
the suffering of the lowly, majority
how utterly obscene..
well then, mercy be
that\'s all in the past, now we\'re
all attending Uni\'s and getting
that good, good - Degree
just a shame, we ain\'t got time
to write, paint or script
our own generation\'s Voice, since
we\'re now
using our well educated status
to pay back our Uni, debts...\'
(reality, oft resembles
a bad scripted attempt
at a morose humoured, tale
of pseudo existence...)
March 1st, 2022 04:17
L. B. Mek said:
(such an enlightening read
and thanks for inspiring
my little scribbled rant
of a reply to your last lines)
\'so true, the well educated elite
word or paint or act-out
the words, brush strokes and scenes
that depict
the suffering of the lowly, majority
how utterly obscene..
well then, mercy be
that\'s all in the past, now we\'re
all attending Uni\'s and getting
that good, good - Degree
just a shame, we ain\'t got time
to write, paint or script
our own generation\'s Voice, since
we\'re now
using our well educated status
to pay back our Uni, debts...\'
(reality, oft resembles
a bad scripted attempt
at a morose humoured, tale
of pseudo existence...)
March 1st, 2022 04:17
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